Reviewer: kierasama
Date: 02/12/12 11:14
Chapter: Epilogue

This was a wonderful story! I enjoyed it immensely.

Reviewer: kierasama
Date: 02/11/12 22:54
Chapter: Into The Corners Of The Mind

...But he's still alive in Percy's mind! How is Severus going to come back...*Tries not to cry and fails horribly*

Reviewer: SandraJo
Date: 09/30/11 4:21
Chapter: Olga's Story

*pouts* my idea of merlin and osiris knowing eachother isn't so original after all. Oh well, I shall continue to write my story.

Oh, by the way, excellent story!!! I can't believe I haven't come across this one before now.

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 09/17/09 7:35
Chapter: Epilogue

Fascinating (and delightfully convoluted) tale. I really enjoyed reading this one, because the depth of the plot was astounding. The sheer volume of things to be realized by the reader is phenomenal, and I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it, because it was a sensational story.

Reviewer: MerlinsBeard88
Date: 07/11/08 11:08
Chapter: Damage Assessment

This was the 2nd fanfic i read on MN and i'm pretty sure i've already peaked in terms of literary creativity. A phenomenal tapestry of interweaving story lines and sublime character evolution from the original texts. Truely brilliant levels of talent and imagination have gone into this piece and it shows. Exactly what i was looking for on MN, i cannot give enough praise except that reading this was possibly more enjoyable than reading Rowlings work itself!! I would dearly like to know if you plan to work on another FF. Two pieces of advice, one to those who are yet to read this, READ IT NOW!! and another to the author, leave your Americanism's in the U.S.of A. Harry would never say "mom" he would say "mum" And things like the PBC (devon chapter) a english person would never say that!! LOL These things though are like spots on the sun, they do not dim its brilliance. I thank you heartily for sharing this with myself and the rest of us muggles!

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 05/20/08 8:16
Chapter: Awakening

The arrogance of Fudge as he deals with the former and new muggle Prime Ministers is amazing. I think the prejudice in the world JKR created is alarming in how much it translates to the real world. One line scene that gets me is When Hagrid goes to fetch Harry for the first time and he is belittleing harry's uncle. He calls him a great muggle in a none flattering manner. Hagrid is one of the wizarding worlds great fighters of the light and defenders of non-magic people. Yet here we see that he clearling thinks of them as inferior. That any laws exist at all giving any rights to non-magic people is surprising. Your last scene with the two boys stealing the wizards wand, shows just how impossible the statute of secrecy is and would be. It just would not fly. There is now way to keep in line all the people in the world JKR created in this manner. But it is part of the idea behind the stories, and I just try to go with it. Again, this is an intriguing bit of writing that has really captured my attention and I look forward to finding out all the new things you are going to do with my favorite litterary creation.

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 05/15/08 16:30
Chapter: Damage Assessment

Oh dear, why on earth have I put off, and put off, and put of starting this story? Intrigue, mystery and extremley well written. Good flow, few to no errors in spelling and no repition of the same sentence because you were in a hurry. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Jacobus
Date: 03/14/08 18:38
Chapter: The Beginning of the End?

I've found this story quite intriguing. Granted, I only started reading it because it's a long story and I wanted to read a long story. But now I'm genuinely interested in exactly what is going to happen. Bravo.

Reviewer: dragonprince
Date: 03/12/08 21:43
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

I've enjoyed the story so far. But unfortunatly for me you've made an error in not finding out how UK telephone numbers work. Atempting to dial 0 for the opperator wont work all uk numbers start with a 0 and also they have the format 0XXX XXXXXX and not the format you have used. Ok this is a nit pick but I am a pedant at times

Reviewer: indopotterfan
Date: 03/10/08 9:58
Chapter: Epilogue

WOW! thatz one word i gotta say for this....i really thought u were joke...the twists the turns, the depth, and the amount of research...a brilliant novel, i should say!

Reviewer: indopotterfan
Date: 03/01/08 9:55
Chapter: Damage Assessment

The first chapter was very confusing, but i see what u are trying to present...pretty cool up till now!

Reviewer: Rhiginny
Date: 01/27/08 6:40
Chapter: Epilogue

you should of made it longer i wanted to hear about the wedding!

Reviewer: Rhiginny
Date: 01/27/08 6:40
Chapter: Epilogue

you should of made it longer i wanted to hear about the wedding!

Reviewer: Rhiginny
Date: 01/22/08 14:16
Chapter: When You Play With Fire…

you said firsty instead of firsly

Reviewer: sparktruwizard
Date: 11/01/07 15:03
Chapter: Epilogue

once again very good!!!!

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 09/09/07 19:34
Chapter: Into The Corners Of The Mind

but wasn't snape still in percy's mind? i'm confused. but oh well, i guess he died fully when he had no body to return to.

Reviewer: Earendil
Date: 06/24/07 0:50
Chapter: Epilogue

Cool story, I just finised it!
Of all the Harry Potter fanfiction Ive read.
(About a half-dozen stories)
This seemes to me one of the best. I especially enjoyed all the parts about Merlin, The Founders, and the Origin of Magic). It was also cool how you took Snape and Percy and made them 'good guys' again. Your writing is not the same as J K Rowling's, but it is also not worse.

Reviewer: ImrnShkh
Date: 06/23/07 9:25
Chapter: Epilogue

Great story...
It has everything that a good fiction requires.
Like the way you merged Merlin and his children stories with Harry Potter story.
Keep up the good job.
Hope JKR makes the publishers print this as the the eight and final edition of the Harry Potter Saga.

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 05/25/07 2:55
Chapter: Epilogue

well that was so asome. I thought you did a great job. you did very good on the building of your own characters. you should do more of that.

Reviewer: ms_ski
Date: 05/04/07 22:58
Chapter: When You Play With Fire…

I like the rebuild of Hogwarts. I just hope they are able to make it as magical- moving staircases, etc. I just wish I could have found this earlier- I like to read fics as they are being written. Anything in the works?

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