Reviews For Shattered Minds
Reviewer: Ravensgryff
Date: 09/14/05 5:13
Chapter: one-shot

Very powerfully written. I could feel Bella's twisted little thrill and the tension throughout was also palpable. The arousal she experienced at torturing Harry is very much in keeping with sociopathic tendencies and you capture that without going over the top with gratuitous...stuff. Very much appreciated! Although I understood why she got her kicks from torture - that's very clear - I wonder if you've ever delved into her background; why does she need such extremeness to feed her ego? What was missing in her to send her in that direction? If you haven't already, I think you could do a fabulous job with her earlier life as well. Wonderfully crafted.

Author's Response: OoOoO I like your idea. Might have a go at child!Bella later on (but first I must finish Seven Deadly Sins or be killed...) Thanks for the glowing review

Reviewer: 3secondfish
Date: 09/12/05 10:08
Chapter: one-shot

Excellent work! Creepy and disturbing and so well done!

Reviewer: bkwrm0502
Date: 09/09/05 16:26
Chapter: one-shot

Wow...that was...wow. I wasn't too sure if I wanted to read it, because the thought of Bellatrix/Harry creeps me out a bit, but I'm so glad that I did. You captured the essence of insanity perfectly. It was simply amazing.

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