well excellent writing ill give you that!...i'm not agreeing with your POV...do you realli think snape regrets what he did?...anyway very very good!
Author's Response: Yes I do. I really think he has underneath many many layers of supposed evil. Thank you for reviewing!
This is really good. Would you consider not making it a oneshot?
Author's Response: Develop it into a year seven fic? Perhaps a bit later on. I may see what the response is to it as a one shot and see what happens. Thank you for taking the time to review.