I totally feel like this is a trailer ina m ovie. What a tease!!!!! I definately want to read the whole sotry now, but this is it ...sigh...
What a horrible place to put a cliff hanger! haha i love it when will there be another part?!
wow wkd storii but u shuld ave expalined 2 us wot he did
plz send the next chapter..it was exciting and then chapter finished..i want 2 know wht happens next..the chapter was gr8
Great!!.....i like it, decided to have faith i it and add it to my fav's but....UDATE SOOOOOOON!!! nice and simpl is your writing style, it great. keps the reader interested. I think that its a bit wierd that malfoy decides to sve ginny but....oh well. lets hope the next chap is as good as this one. 10/10
ooooooooooh i wonder what happens next! update quickly please!!
hey, this sounds really cool, please please please update!! ^__^
Oh my gosh! I found you here too! Hun- it's Paprika30! I was scrolling and I saw your penname... I was like oh my god! And I haven't read this story on the other site, so I'll give you a review for each chapter here! I actually didn't find much of anything to pick on, and you know how much I do that. The plot seems to be pretty tight so far, but then, it's only the first chapter. I can give you something constructive soon! Everything was very clear and you left nothing in gray areas. I'm lovin' this story so far, and I can't wait to read the next chapter... I could trot over to the other site but that would take the fun out of waiting! And a side note- for Of Ferrets and Weasels when you said that someone said that chapter 11 was too long- obviously they don't pay attention. The previous chapter was your longest yet... they probably were just flaming for the fun of it... don't take it personally. Back to this story- your writing has drawn me in, and though I'm not a big fan of present tense, I love this story! (No mean feat) Cheers! ~Paprika
You've got me interested. Can't wait for more!
oh wow...you've got me hooked! it's on my favorited list...please hurry! i love this fic already! 10!
oh wow...you've got me hooked! it's on my favorited list...please hurry! i love this fic already! 10!
Oh, I hope you update soon. I'm really looking forward to it!
I like your start, and that little cliffy you ended with. Now I have to wait for the next update to see how the whole school reacts to Draco's actions.
Ohh I really like this so far. You've got me interested, I'll be waiting for the next update :)
