this story is so touching! i read the other story and I loved it! you are an amazing writer and you addressed a real problem.
OMG! I am crying right now. I'm serious when I say that this is the first story I ever read that made me cry. I've read horrible stories where the most awful of things happen to people, and yet I have never cried. Your story is just so heartfelt about the whole God sending him a sister thing! *pass the tissue*
Poor Graham! I'm so glad Susan was there to save him. This is a very poweful story, with an important message. You've written it perfectly, too!
I wasn't sure what was going on when I read the first one, but having read this one, I have apretty clear picture of what was going on. It was really good. I think you described Graham's emotions very acurately for someone is his unfortunate position.
OMG!! This was great. I cried reading this.
Oh, it's just so beautiful. It doesn't matter to her what they've been told they are -- she knows that it is in fact who they are that matters. Kudos to you!
I loved this story.To see a HufflePuff take a real acction and save a Slytherin is interesting.