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Name: cloudybear (Signed) · Date: 09/09/05 16:19 · For: Chapter 4 Secret Keepers
i second phoenix file. Love your ideas.

Author's Response: The most important ship in HBP is between Harry and Dumbledore. That one sure came to a sad end. H/G is a good pairing, but I don't think it'll happen in the longterm. R/Hr is ridiculous. They fight all of the time. If Hermione wants Harry but settles for Ron, it'll make Ron bitter. Hand me down clothes, run down house, second hand girlfriend. He wouldn't appreciate her if he got her.

Name: phoenix_fille (Signed) · Date: 09/09/05 15:54 · For: Chapter 4 Secret Keepers
I like your story, especially the parts at the end, with the "why Hermione might still like Harry" parts from HBP

Author's Response: Hi Phoenix! There are tons of hints in HBP right up to the end that Hermione is devoted to Harry. It is much harder to find any reason as to why that should be so. Harry is so mean to her. He's almost her only friend when she's fighting with Ron (which is from mid November to mid March). He spends time in the library with her but he buries his nose in his precious potions book. I think the girl was jealous of that book. Only a girl like Hermione would do that.

Name: Cinderella Angelina (Signed) · Date: 09/08/05 13:47 · For: Chapter 3 House Keeping Chores
Reading stories like yours make me wonder if I'm really a closet H/Hr shipper. It's a good story so far, I wish I hadn't read it all (plus your one-shot you mentioned) so quickly, because now I have to wait impatiently for an update. You might want to put HBP spoiler in your summary, but chances are that whoever it would spoil has already been spoiled, so it's probably up to you. How long is this story going to be, do you know?

Author's Response: Hi Cinderella! Thanks for the nice review! Chapter 4 is in the queue. My plan right now is for the story to be eight or nine chapters long. The plan started out at five chapters but I decided I didn't want to make the chapters too long.

Name: midwife_witch (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 22:25 · For: Chapter 2 The End of a Long Hard Day
Again, excellent! Great idea putting Kingsley in Hermione's group, since he's the one most likely to make it onto the Muggle news. So much for the idea that he'll be the new OotP leader, though... Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I like Kingsley Shacklebolt but... it was just another way of shaking up poor Harry.

Name: midwife_witch (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 22:16 · For: Chapter 1 Bound for London
_So_ much better than the average fanfic! Even though it's categorized as a romance fic there's non-romantic substance to it that's believable. Better yet, Harry doesn't burst into tears (which everyone else seems to have him do). Well done you!

Author's Response: Harry's tough, it takes a lot to make him cry.

Name: Chris_04 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 18:24 · For: Chapter 2 The End of a Long Hard Day
Just thought I'd let you know, this says, "“Remus, please don’t me Nymphadora,” Tonks said." I'm not done with this chapter yet (I knew I'd forget to tell you that), so I'm going to go back to reading :)

Author's Response: Thanks Chris! The missing word is "call" (as you probably guessed). What do you suppose Remus will call Tonks? I mean Tonks is her dad's name and she doesn't like Nymphadora. He'll have to start calling her something endearing but he better avoid any "baby" terms.

Name: cloudybear (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 14:31 · For: Chapter 3 House Keeping Chores
1st review! Poor Ron...scratch that, I don't care. I know that's mean, but he gets on my nerves. So, they found one. Now what?

Author's Response: Now that's the real question isn't it? Dumbledore didn't get a chance to show Harry how to destroy a Horcrux. He probably planned to do so when they got back from the cave when his lesson plan was so rudely interrupted by his murder. Who is the best character in the HP series for doing the kind of research it will take to learn how to destroy a Horcrux? (Hint: It's not Ron.)

Name: Waddiwasi chik (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 11:51 · For: Chapter 1 Bound for London
putting up a wall in front of Mrs. Black? Ingenius! I'd thought about that locket as well, but i also thought that Regulus wasnt close enough to Voldemort... Didnt Sirius say that Regulus couldn't have been murdered by Voldemort because he wasnt important enough? If he's not important enough, how would he know about Voldemort's Horcruxes? I think i enjoy you're observations about the book as much as the chapters!

Author's Response: There have been a number of excellent editorials posted on Mugglenet bit for and against the idea of Regulus Black being R.A.B. I wonder what R.A.B. meant by "I know your secret (or whatever). Surely LV bragged to his Death Eaters about making the Horcruxes. Maybe the secret was where to find a Horcrux or how to recover one or maybe the secret that LV kept was that his father was a Muggle. Maybe R.A.B. would want to betray LV because LV turned out to be a lousy half-blood not fit to shine te boots of a Black.

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Name: cloudybear (Signed) · Date: 09/04/05 17:24 · For: Chapter 2 The End of a Long Hard Day
this story's very interesting. I like your opinions on the canon stuff at the bottom. update asap!

Author's Response: Actually this whole story is an opinion piece. I have read HBP very carefully and I think it's loaded with hints that Hermione loves Harry right up to the end. I think the "delusional" interview is a bit of a smoke screen.

Name: hermione777 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/05 13:41 · For: Chapter 2 The End of a Long Hard Day
Um....Harry's owl's name is Hedwig, not Hedwick.

Author's Response: OK I got it fixed!

Name: hermione777 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/05 13:41 · For: Chapter 2 The End of a Long Hard Day
Um....Harry's owl's name is Hedwig, not Hedwick.

Author's Response: Well hermione777, you know what they say, "the memory is the second thing to go." (I forget what's first.)

Name: Waddiwasi chik (Signed) · Date: 09/04/05 3:58 · For: Chapter 2 The End of a Long Hard Day
I really liked this chapter as well, but since im writing a fic from Harry's owl's point of view -- her name is Hedwig... unless he's using a different owl? i dunno... agian, i agree with your observation...

Author's Response: OOPS! Sorry about that bit of brain lock there. Hedwig is going to be a rather minor character in the rest of this little story, but I do like your story.

Name: Waddiwasi chik (Signed) · Date: 09/04/05 3:51 · For: Chapter 1 Bound for London
*happy dance* *chanting* you're writing another sto-ry! you're writing another sto-ry!... sorry about that. Anyway, i like this story so far, and ought to go read chapter 2... and i completely agree with your observation about Hermione grabbing Ron's arm...

Name: Mermione (Signed) · Date: 09/03/05 23:43 · For: Chapter 1 Bound for London
Wow...first review. That was FANTASTIC! Everyone was IC and the chess idea was brilliant. I can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10, of course!

Author's Response: Thank you for the encouraging words. I am seriously trying to keep every character in post HBP character. Chapter two was in the queue for less than one hour! Thanks go to Stephanie!

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