Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 12/02/07 1:03
Chapter: The Importance of Remaining Steadfast When the World is Falling Down

Lovely story! You've developed Hermione's character so well... i understand why she would feel so lost after winning the final battle - suddenly, her life is still. Great ending.

Reviewer: rita_skeeter
Date: 03/18/06 5:06
Chapter: The Importance of Remaining Steadfast When the World is Falling Down

That was brilliant. You really captured Hermione's emotions in this story. The beginning was very haunting, when Hermione forgets her meaning in life, and you wrote it with such delicate accuracy that the reader could completely undestand her. I liked the way you made her realise her importance by having her save a little boy - nothing can be more rewarding than knowing you've saved someone's life. It wasn't just Hermione saving him, it was him saving Hermione too. The writing style was fantastic. Truely wonderful.

Reviewer: LiliRose
Date: 09/03/05 5:48
Chapter: The Importance of Remaining Steadfast When the World is Falling Down

That was bloody brilliant! Nice, really nice and just Hermione! I like the bit with the little boy, thatīs so cute. Please write a sequal! Please... *10*

Reviewer: Roxy Black
Date: 09/02/05 17:19
Chapter: The Importance of Remaining Steadfast When the World is Falling Down

Wow! Seren, your story is amazing! I've never read anything like it on one of these sites before! I completely lost myself in the story, I dunno whats been going on in my house for the last few minutes! can't wait to read more of your stuff! definate 10!

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 09/02/05 9:38
Chapter: The Importance of Remaining Steadfast When the World is Falling Down

Seren, you're brilliant.

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 09/01/05 19:18
Chapter: The Importance of Remaining Steadfast When the World is Falling Down

A sequal!! Love the story, and I hope u write a sequal!! 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10... well, u get the idea

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 08/31/05 20:36
Chapter: The Importance of Remaining Steadfast When the World is Falling Down

Love this story, it made me think. Most stories don't. I really like Hermione and you portaryed her nicely. Excellent job, I really mean that! 10/10

Reviewer: TheGreatLinkster
Date: 08/31/05 19:11
Chapter: The Importance of Remaining Steadfast When the World is Falling Down

Wow, Seren you do well with the description of hoplessness of this fic. Poor Hermione, she seems to border insanity, and her struggle to determine what she is to do next was so sad. I was hoping that there was a theme of hope in this story and I wasn't dissapointed at the end either. I really wonder if Hermione would be asking herself the quuestion you posed-does she no longer have a purpose in life if Lord Voldemort is defeated. I think she would still have to be a friend to Harry and Ron after all is said and done. I don't find her to be the type of person who would wallow in hopelessness though. She would just keep moving on, and you did portray that at the end. I absolutely thought this was great, and so I'm just going to leave you with the above random comments. :)

Reviewer: WitchatHeart77
Date: 08/31/05 18:53
Chapter: The Importance of Remaining Steadfast When the World is Falling Down

WOOHOO I'm first to post!.. I like this. Has a gusto to it. Kinda lights a fire towards the end. Good job!

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