Reviews For The Shattering
Reviewer: charlolwut
Date: 10/28/11 22:50
Chapter: one-shot

I love the smooth switches between the tenses, and I love how you write Remus' grief.
A hauntingly beautiful fic. 10/10!

Reviewer: Tree
Date: 02/19/06 19:30
Chapter: one-shot

Sorry, typos. I meant ending and me.

Reviewer: Tree
Date: 02/19/06 19:28
Chapter: one-shot

This story was lovely! The edning made my cry (poor Remus!). I really liked how the flashbacks and what was currently happening blended into each other. 10/10!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the story. I've always loved flashbacks in stories and am happy that they worked in this one. Thanks for reviewing!

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