I love this story!!!!
You have to write a sequel...
Samuri Rose xxx
Very, very nice...I really like this story...I especially appreciate that it didn't get smutty...
I used to live in Happy Bunnyland...Snape was kicked out after about a week of skulking around, frightening the neighborhood children.
I just love Tonks. This is really good.
awwwwww, the kiss was perfect and I loved the exchange between the two, so sweet
awwwww, lovely chapter!
ooooh, the start of a really nice trilogy. Look forward to reading more, so see ya!
aaaaaaawwwwwwwww! i love tonks/remus stories and this one is so sweet!
Oh my goodness. This has to be the definitive Remus/Tonks romance story. There's nothing more to be said, unless you write more. Your descriptions and internal monologues are effortless, and the changes in POV aren't jarring Excellent work! You are going to write more, I presume?
Oh my goodness, this was soo good! Great job! And it's not cheesy at all! Wish I could write romance like that...10/10 for the whole story, brilliant!
The writing was excellent. Even if the plot had been bad, I would have kept reading. It was wonderful!
And the plot was great too. Very touching.
There's some real talent here.
Your story was so beautiful. I could really feel every moment and every little gesture between the two. The tenderness and the innocence was so true to the characters. I loved it. Good job. Good job indeed... ^_^
This was an AMAZING, cute, realistic story. With the details you used, I could actually picture what you were writing about. Even the Snape part, unfortunatly.
Inspired, absolutly womderful LOVE to see a continuation
I love that story so much!! well done!! i havent read many good Tonks/Remus stories and i'm glad that i found yours to prove that there were some out there!
oh that was so great, the best remus/tonks story i've read yet, well done!!!
Amazing. That's the one word I can say for this fic. Amazing. Just...brilliant. =) 10/10.
It was bloody great!!!, i loved it, it's beatiful the way you describe their feelings, write some more!!!, i absolutely loved it...It was just AWESOME!!!
i LOVED this story! i was surprised to find it away from the remus/tonks section, especially since it's most definitely one of my favorites! keep up the good work!
Of course I adore this story. (I think I may have written you an e-mail specifically asking for romance!) Mmmmm. Lupin is my man! He is entirely and utterly my unreal dream guy. I read this and thought, I wonder if she's in love? One thing I thought was a little forced was the openness of Lupin and Tonks to each other. I think you have painted a picture of Tonks as very, very grown up. Certainly she has aspects of that, but Harry thought she was fun and sometimes annoying. She is very young, considering she is with Lupin. And Lupin is so quiet and controlled. I don't see Tonks seeing through him quite this way, I see her as much more...hmmm. Not so much naive. Just more needy. Young girls usually are. You have such a great background with her friendship with Lupin. I might go back, even in Imperius (which is entirely excellent) and paint her as more vulnerable and Lupin as more quiet and controlled. For Lupin, Tonks must really be the Marauders come back, and he would be very, very cautious after the loss of his best friends. I hope I made sense here. It's such a fine line, getting all the contrasting emotions onto paper. Writing romance is alot more difficult then it sounds and you did a .....mmmmm. I really like it. I am so much more a snuggler then a physical girl and this was just so sweet and loving, and just what I want out of a relationship. It was like seeing my daydreams played out in fanfiction! **blush**