Reviews For The Veil
Reviewer: Rapid Reader
Date: 12/21/06 16:04
Chapter: The Veil

This is pretty good!

Reviewer: larrypetefred
Date: 12/18/06 23:57
Chapter: The Veil

boo

Reviewer: Malika Potter
Date: 12/13/06 14:51
Chapter: The Veil

I really like your poem!

Reviewer: Skewper
Date: 12/13/06 2:06
Chapter: The Veil

i am against drapery now i read OotP and i hate veils now but the way u decribed it was beautiful

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 12/11/06 13:22
Chapter: The Veil

I love short poems because the author always uses such pretty words.

Reviewer: magic_child
Date: 11/11/06 19:31
Chapter: The Veil

beautiful poem. Love it.

Reviewer: crucioman24
Date: 10/28/06 12:18
Chapter: The Veil

wow, that is differnent

Reviewer: sweetdevil
Date: 10/21/06 15:25
Chapter: The Veil

Great! I love the way you describe the Veil, very beautiful wording and imagery. I love it.

Reviewer: Dragon_Warrior
Date: 10/19/06 14:58
Chapter: The Veil

I read your poem...really good! I like all the imagery (is that how you spell it?). Good poem!
*Dragon Warrior*

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/16/06 20:36
Chapter: The Veil

Ooh... I like the sailing part a lot, made me thing of a ship's sail, and with a veil... Well, in short, this is amazingly beautiful. Wonderful poem!

~Juli

Reviewer: _Dumbledores Girl_
Date: 10/13/06 18:26
Chapter: The Veil

nice poem!

Reviewer: Triwizard
Date: 10/03/06 11:22
Chapter: The Veil

Lovely.

Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 10/01/06 18:27
Chapter: The Veil

Wow............................
Found this poem in the Tens, it's very beautiful.

Reviewer: Wise Owl
Date: 09/06/06 0:58
Chapter: The Veil

very cute, i liked your first line especially.

Reviewer: Belle_Rose
Date: 09/01/06 21:26
Chapter: The Veil

Wow, that's very good.

Reviewer: MidnightzStorm
Date: 08/24/06 0:19
Chapter: The Veil

That was beautiful and spooky. :)

Reviewer: Pruvnhtmn
Date: 08/07/06 18:11
Chapter: The Veil

Interesting. No reference to the death that it supposed ly brings though.

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/21/06 21:37
Chapter: The Veil

uh for a really short story u

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 07/18/06 0:16
Chapter: The Veil

Ooo! Okay, I know I just left a comment, but I wanna leave another one! hehehehe! You live in Australia!??! That is SUPER COOL!!!! That would be sooooo fun! And it's really cool that you're only 14 and writing this well! I'm 14 too but my writing talent is nowhere near as good as yours! Anyways, sorry for being weird! hehe!
~Chloe
p.s. I hate Geography also...i'm just no good at it. i hate it and it hates me...that's just how it goes. *stares darkly and dramatically at a geography text book...wait, why do i have one of those in my house?*

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 07/18/06 0:10
Chapter: The Veil

Amazing...TRULY amazing!!! This was a wonderful poem! Short but interesting! I loved it!!! 11/10~Woot! Of the scale!!! yesssss. GO YOU!!!

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