This is pretty good!
I really like your poem!
i am against drapery now i read OotP and i hate veils now but the way u decribed it was beautiful
I love short poems because the author always uses such pretty words.
beautiful poem. Love it.
wow, that is differnent
Great! I love the way you describe the Veil, very beautiful wording and imagery. I love it.
I read your poem...really good! I like all the imagery (is that how you spell it?). Good poem!
Ooh... I like the sailing part a lot, made me thing of a ship's sail, and with a veil... Well, in short, this is amazingly beautiful. Wonderful poem!
Found this poem in the Tens, it's very beautiful.
very cute, i liked your first line especially.
Wow, that's very good.
That was beautiful and spooky. :)
Interesting. No reference to the death that it supposed ly brings though.
uh for a really short story u
Ooo! Okay, I know I just left a comment, but I wanna leave another one! hehehehe! You live in Australia!??! That is SUPER COOL!!!! That would be sooooo fun! And it's really cool that you're only 14 and writing this well! I'm 14 too but my writing talent is nowhere near as good as yours! Anyways, sorry for being weird! hehe!
p.s. I hate Geography also...i'm just no good at it. i hate it and it hates me...that's just how it goes. *stares darkly and dramatically at a geography text book...wait, why do i have one of those in my house?*
Amazing...TRULY amazing!!! This was a wonderful poem! Short but interesting! I loved it!!! 11/10~Woot! Of the scale!!! yesssss. GO YOU!!!