I think this is a very well developed idea so far. It just needs to be smoothed out. Like how did Draco cope with changing, or how did Ron and Luna get together.Also a little bit about Ginny and Draco would be nice
Im most certainly NOT loyal I read this after only reading COMPLETE stories and you have just said 30 reviews in then go to the que i dont think so.
Please post the next chapter. I really like this story and want to read more of it. I noticed that you also didn't post a new chaper on Graduation Trip in a long time. Please, I'm begging you, post a chapter soon. I just can't wait to read more of this story.
i like your quote from glimore girls, but please(im begging over here) to write another chapter
I need more,so awesome, MORE!!!!!!!
oh my good i really like this story. i wnat to know what happens next. please write another chapter as soon as possible.
Can I just mention that in England the emergency services number is 999, not 911! just thought i'd let you no, other than that its and excellent story so far, and a really good story line keep up the good work and please write some more soon.
I' like the directiono you going in but H?HR is a too predictable other than very nice please continue
Poor Luna, left wondering whether she will survive in her fnafic. She must be bored, staring out the window, watching for Crumple Horn Snarks or whatever they are, wndering when the author will update so they can get back to the story...
And Ron is REALLY bored, standing there, staring at hHermione. Ehe must have had fun spotting all the imperfecctions, though Harry must be bored, still looking at flowers. Think of the Characters! Lol!
Oooh...I ship the EXACT same things that you do. Ron/Luna, Draco/Ginny, and....dan dan dand dan! Harry/Hermione!
ALso, does this story take place in America? Because 911 only works in America. Sorry. Really, they use a different one in London.
Also, I added this to my facotires. It;s good. I mean...AWESOME!
I just found your story and you have me hooked. I'd love to add your story to my bookmarked fan fics but if they don't get updated often enough, I break down and filter them out. Please divulge me!!
Great story! I love it!
i don't think that u really care abou' your readers or else u'd've updated BOTH of your stories until now. i only registered 2 review YOUR story. Pooh.
C'MON!!!!! IT'S OVER 50 NOW! r u gonna update it or is this story abandoned??
IT'S REALLY GOOD!!!!! I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPEND TO LUNA!!!!! PLEZZ UPDATE!!!!!
Er... sorry, this used to be one of my favorites and I know this isn't fair to you but it just isn't anymore... sorry. I know it isn't you fault :( xox;; everlasting
Hope you get better soon! You must feel horrible-get plenty of rest and only continue the story when you feel like it.
I'm not going to remove it from my favorites :) Don't worry I'm not going to bug you about updating, I just want to tell you that you have a terrific story and a brilliant cliffhanger :) Very in character.
I really enjoyed reading your ff! Please remember to update when you get the chance!
Please don't give up. Update!