This tension between Draco and Hermione is just delicious! I love the way he keeps slipping up and telling her how he feels, its just so sweet!!
Wow! This is awesome! So far this is great! I can't wait to read more!
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ssssooooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I absolutly LOVE your story, it totally got me hooked on DM/HG. But now I can't find anything as good as this ;).
Author's Response: Thank You!! And I'm sorry you can't find anything else you like! I found it difficult to find them too...so I wrote that I liked lol. Now I'm over the moon that everyone else likes it too!! Thanks again.
Hey, your fic is nice, but have you had it beta-ed? There are some sentences where you left out a word, and you confused "whether* with "weather" in this chapter :)
But good effort, anyhow. 'S a great story!
Author's Response: Gee...thanks...I think
I've read this whole story and all I can is that it was MAGNIFICENT! It made me cry, it made me laugh. There really is no negative feedback that I can give it. I just loved it.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!! It makes me sooo happy when people gt emotional from my writing!! Thank you!
Aww, bless. I love it!
That's a cute story, but I think you made Ron, Harry, and Ginny a little harsh. They would have forgiven her after a while, and accepted her desicion. You're a great author!
THIS WAS SUCH AN AMAZING FANFIC!!!!
me like story
grrrr...hermione is so grrrr and draco too.
I LOVE IT!!!!!
All I have to say is WOW! I was hooked from the first chapter. You did a great job taking book 6 with its plot and making it your own. I love the draco/hermoine pair. Cant wait to read the next story. I literally read this in one day. Great JOB!
OMG, i read like the first chapter, and u are SSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i swear!!!!!!!! my gosh.....sorry, i really like to emphasize things, lol.....but really, u are REALLY good...maybe thats why u are a runner-up, cause its THAT good! :) i think u should write your own book when u grow up.....i would buy it :)
Author's Response: WOW lol, Thanks!!!!! :)
This ending most definetly did not make me throw up I like warm fuzzy feelings of happy endings (unless I'm watching a horror film)
Great story!!! It really held my attention from beginning to end. Keep up the good work!!!
after i read this.. this was the best.. i hope it goes in big screen
I love it so much
Your ending was fluffy but well thought out and sweet
I cant belive it
2 sad 2 sad 2 sad
this is the saddest
“Hermione!” he yelled as the distance grew between them. He ran to catch up with her when she didn’t stop. He realized why when he forced her to stop by stepping in front of her and grabbing her shoulders. Tears stained her cheeks and more were escaping her eyes.
“I thought I could do this, but I can’t,” she cried. “Please, just leave me alone. I don’t ever want to see you again.”
Draco desperately searched her eyes; surely she didn’t mean it. Surely somewhere deep down she still loved him…she just had to.
“Please,” she begged again.
Letting go of her shoulders, Draco stepped aside to let her pass. And just like that, she was gone again.