omg i luved this story so much it was so good and sad at times but i luvd it nonetheless
omg thank god this is already completed i dont like suspense that much o.o
hahahaha man thats oen good propsition and wat store does she own o.o
IT DOESNT MATTER WAT HE IS MY GOD PPL R BLIND WHEN IT COMES TO LUV o.o srry i just had to let that out
0.0 i luv this story
witchcraft it cannot be
0.0 good story
its a good story thats wat i think
"The smallest smirk parted his lips as he fell asleep. If only Potter knew that his girlfriend was desperately after him." Those last two sentences made me crack up. He's obviously in denial... Good job! I like the originality and creativity of this fic. (:
Good story and all but I do think it needs continuing, I would have loved to have read about the conflict of her old friends and if they could have accepted that she loved him. I am not one who likes open ended writings unless it is in a series. Please tell me you have continued this under another title.
Author's Response: The sequal, Fatum Amoris...the fate of love. It's all about said conflict.
I absolutely love this story, it is by far my favorite out of all the ones i have read i enjoyed it very much, and thank you for writing it, i hope other stories you write are just as good!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!! lol.
It was really charming. Nice job!
I truly loved this story-very rarely do you read fics with Hermione and Draco that either seem plausible or have any direction in them at all. I really loved how you tied it into the sixth year, rather than making it "they came back for their seventh year" etc etc. and the reactions of Harry and Ron, seeing as they would never be ok with Hr/D, a point that very few seem to grasp. I cant wait to read the second generation :)
I really liked this ... I like happy endings.
By the way, it's "straight", not "strait".
Just thought I should mention that.
I decided to wait to write my review after reading everything. I love Draco and Hermione, and I thought this was absolutely great. I'm totally in to the cliché sugary stuff. I liked it alot. Can't wait to read the second generation.
that was an amazing fic! I loved every bit of it! Your a really good writer!
awsome fic =] I couldn't stop reading! the ending was grear as well.
Wow... I just finished this story! I read your whole story in like... two days!!! Best and most realistic Harmione/Draco story!!! I loved it!! Can't wait to start the sequel~~
I love it...truely remarkable...its just great how you've intertwined it all w/ the half blood prince...I can't wait till that movie comes out...I went and saw the OOP yesterday...and it took all my strenght not to yell out at tha movie screen "draco! Baby! I wanna have your children!" but...of course my cousin kept a sharp eye on me just in case I did...I LOVE draco malfoy!!!!! Gosh sakes ya just gotta love TVO and how you can rewind all of his parts in tha goblet of fire...haha I love it! Great story!