Hmm... What an intriguing piece of literature! I'm still allowing its message to sink it.
Great job! ;)
good story. 5 of 5 stars
Wow, you have a really impressive style of writing - the whole thing is like a lyrical poem. I was going to ask whether it was based on the John Donne poem (which I had to study last year, along with various others); the line "like cutting the pages of a new book, or mapping a new country" reminds me of when he's talking about the whole world being in one room, and that's exactly what this fic conveyed. Really quite beautiful, well done.
Author's Response: Yes, I was thinking of Donne - it just came automatically, and then I added the Donne title by way of acknowledgement :-). I'm really glad you like the story; it doesn't have much by way of plot, so it's not to most people's taste. Thanks a lot!
Aww, that was really sweet! You're writing is very detailed, well done! Keep it up! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't too sure I'd be able to pull off romance, so I'm glad you liked it! -S.
That was just lovely! I can't wait to read more. Thanks!
Author's Response: And you! I'm glad you liked it - thanks for letting me know! -S.
Beautiful writing! Wonderfully detailed descriptions (I can see and feel everything), amazing characterization (I feel I intimately know these people). This story is absolutely wonderful. A read so divine its made my day -- thank you!
Author's Response: *blushes* Wow, thank you, demiguise! Your review made my day in return :-)... -S.