the Only thing wrong is the length. it needs to be much much longer.
i love it! it's so cute!
Oh my gosh !! All i can say is sequal, u soo set it up for a sequal!!!!
Yay! great story, i'm all smiley now! *clicks add to favorites button (but not really cuz its not even on this page and i have to finish typing this and click back now and ok i'll shut up now)*
Another great chapter, I also love romance/humor fics! now, to the last chapter. :)
*squeals with delight at the chapter* ok, not really, but that part was funny! great so far, now off to read the next chapter!
I do have to give you some credit for making Molly so excited about Ron and Hermione kissing - so many people are doing the over-protective mother plot a little much in their R/Hr stories...
I don't know if I'd tweak my story to say that Tonks finally decided to be an auror after Hogwarts, but it's your story. Otherwise, it's good, but you might want (if you want to be completely in character) to reword some of hermione's lines. 8/10.
I loved this story! I haven't laughed that hard in a while... please write a sequel to this!!!!
Soz but i gotta agree with Niffler80, it was funny with the squealing bit but there wasn't really that much plot. It probably would have been cooler if it was a humor fic.
Between all the squealing and snogging I did a lot of laughing. Not much in the way of plot going on in your story, so I couldn't call it a great piece of writing, but I guess plot wasn't really your focus.....squealing and snogging was! Not too bad, for a squealing and snogging story, ha!
I have read this fic about a million times and the squealing this still cracks me up.
LOVED IT so awsome love the way you describe harry and ginny's kissing the orb was really cool too, like the way it turned purple and got darker the ron hermione thing was cute too, it came on suddenly though, hermione just burst out with it ya know, i liked it that way cuz it got all the dialoge out of the way and got right into the good stuff! lol the squeling was fun too i lied the guys reaction
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive feed back about the kissing. In case your wondering I've never been kissed. I just read WAY too much fanfiction. And yeah, I hate the beging of stories and I like to just skip ahead to the fluffy part.
very good. i loved it. please write a sequel.
Author's Response: I'm currently in the process of writing a H/G fic that takes place in Harry's 7th year.
Rather impressive, lots of snogging which is good XD I hope you make a sequel!
I agree with 'ktgymchick', I love sleepover fics! More! Yay!
Um..Good Story, I guess.
Author's Response: Um...Thanks, I guess
I absolutely LOVED that. I LOVE sleepover fics! I don't know why but I just absolutely LOVE them. That was awesome. I got so excited when I saw the summary for this. I got all excited that it was a sleepover ficcy! Anyways, great story!
Author's Response: Sleepover fics ROCK!
what can I say? loved it! especially the squealing part, very girlish! lol