Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 10/24/07 13:03
Chapter: Realizations

Jada & Sirius

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 10/24/07 12:19
Chapter: Mixed Feelings

When would you ever die by not saying what you would change about a story?

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 10/24/07 12:14
Chapter: Second Year: Everything's Changing

I think he has just lost his marbles!

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 10/24/07 12:02
Chapter: Christmas Day

Calista is sooooooooo annoying *shakes fist in her direction*

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 10/24/07 11:51
Chapter: Trapped!!

When Lily said “Well, and least get some bandages on your face,” I just imagined James walking round with them wrapped all around his head and bumping into walls lol

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 10/24/07 11:45
Chapter: Late night explorations

it wasnt a bad chapter!

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 10/24/07 11:40
Chapter: Discoveries

Its very very good! :)

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 10/24/07 11:33
Chapter: The Accident?

I just wanted to point out a typo. "The hat stood still for a long, then it opened its brim " After you wrote long I think there is meant to say time or sumting.
Ur story is great so far!

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 10/24/07 11:23
Chapter: First Year: The beginning

Loving it! Looking forward to reading the rest!


Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 10/24/07 10:25
Chapter: Great Danger

i LOVED the part when james complomented lilys lip gloss it was LIKE he LOVED her but he DIDNT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 10/24/07 10:05
Chapter: Second Year: Everything's Changing


Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 10/24/07 2:17
Chapter: The first Summer


Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 10/24/07 2:10
Chapter: Christmas Day


THE EVIL BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 10/23/07 12:24
Chapter: Discoveries

that was really good i loved the bit were she said You really are just like Petunia. You let jealousy get away with you, you are a spoilt little brat, and you can’t face the fact that James is not impressed by a snotty, rude little bitch like you.”

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 10/23/07 12:11
Chapter: The Accident?

I thought james was going to die!!! then i thought wat kind of 20 chapter story about james and lily kill james in the 2 nd chapter!! BUT YOU HAVE REALLY USED GREAT WORDS I LOVED IT!!!

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 10/23/07 11:59
Chapter: First Year: The beginning

omg thats so cool
normaly i just read the first chapter to see if its good!!!!!!


Reviewer: Little_Mini_Kimi
Date: 10/16/07 13:35
Chapter: Playing into Hands

You should add more chapters to this cuz it is really good and i really like it.

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 10/05/07 12:48
Chapter: Playing into Hands

oh no! does this mean you won't continue writeing Forever Yours?!!! AAHHHHH! the world is coming to a crashing end!!!!!

i wish you would keep writing til its finished, but if you wont, yes an outline would be nice.

*sob, sob, sniff, sniff*

Reviewer: baby b
Date: 09/10/07 12:11
Chapter: Playing into Hands

oh MY GOD!!! u cant jus leave it here. thats completely insane. you left us on a right cliffie. You evil evil person. Plz plz update.

Reviewer: Lils_Loves_Jamsie24
Date: 09/04/07 22:00
Chapter: Playing into Hands

perhaps you could condense the plot to make it shorter and still keep in story form? that way it won't take as much time but wouldn't be an outline? just a though :-D

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