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Reviews For Forever Yours

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 13:03 · For: Realizations
Jada & Sirius

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 12:19 · For: Mixed Feelings
When would you ever die by not saying what you would change about a story?

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 12:14 · For: Second Year: Everything's Changing
I think he has just lost his marbles!

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 12:02 · For: Christmas Day
Calista is sooooooooo annoying *shakes fist in her direction*

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 11:51 · For: Trapped!!
When Lily said “Well, and least get some bandages on your face,” I just imagined James walking round with them wrapped all around his head and bumping into walls lol

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 11:45 · For: Late night explorations
it wasnt a bad chapter!

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 11:40 · For: Discoveries
Its very very good! :)

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 11:33 · For: The Accident?
I just wanted to point out a typo. "The hat stood still for a long, then it opened its brim " After you wrote long I think there is meant to say time or sumting.
Ur story is great so far!

Name: huffpuff94 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 11:23 · For: First Year: The beginning
Loving it! Looking forward to reading the rest!


Name: aries1996 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 10:25 · For: Great Danger
i LOVED the part when james complomented lilys lip gloss it was LIKE he LOVED her but he DIDNT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: aries1996 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 10:05 · For: Second Year: Everything's Changing

Name: aries1996 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 2:17 · For: The first Summer

Name: aries1996 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 2:10 · For: Christmas Day

THE EVIL BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Name: aries1996 (Signed) · Date: 10/23/07 12:24 · For: Discoveries
that was really good i loved the bit were she said You really are just like Petunia. You let jealousy get away with you, you are a spoilt little brat, and you can’t face the fact that James is not impressed by a snotty, rude little bitch like you.”

Name: aries1996 (Signed) · Date: 10/23/07 12:11 · For: The Accident?
I thought james was going to die!!! then i thought wat kind of 20 chapter story about james and lily kill james in the 2 nd chapter!! BUT YOU HAVE REALLY USED GREAT WORDS I LOVED IT!!!

Name: aries1996 (Signed) · Date: 10/23/07 11:59 · For: First Year: The beginning
omg thats so cool
normaly i just read the first chapter to see if its good!!!!!!


Name: Little_Mini_Kimi (Signed) · Date: 10/16/07 13:35 · For: Playing into Hands
You should add more chapters to this cuz it is really good and i really like it.

Name: GinnyTonks (Signed) · Date: 10/05/07 12:48 · For: Playing into Hands
oh no! does this mean you won't continue writeing Forever Yours?!!! AAHHHHH! the world is coming to a crashing end!!!!!

i wish you would keep writing til its finished, but if you wont, yes an outline would be nice.

*sob, sob, sniff, sniff*

Name: baby b (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 12:11 · For: Playing into Hands
oh MY GOD!!! u cant jus leave it here. thats completely insane. you left us on a right cliffie. You evil evil person. Plz plz update.

Name: Lils_Loves_Jamsie24 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/07 22:00 · For: Playing into Hands
perhaps you could condense the plot to make it shorter and still keep in story form? that way it won't take as much time but wouldn't be an outline? just a though :-D

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