Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 07/22/08 8:00
Chapter: Playing into Hands

Please please please update soon! You cant have a cliffhanger like that and not update soon! ;)

Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 07/22/08 8:00
Chapter: Playing into Hands

Please please please update soon! You cant have a cliffhanger like that and not update soon! ;)

Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 07/22/08 8:00
Chapter: Playing into Hands

Please please please update soon! You cant have a cliffhanger like that and not update soon! ;)

Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 07/22/08 8:00
Chapter: Playing into Hands

Please please please update soon! You cant have a cliffhanger like that and not update soon! ;)

Reviewer: Karya
Date: 07/13/08 12:32
Chapter: Playing into Hands

hello why quit your soooooo good i love this story!!!!!!! im gonna cry if you dont keep writing if you do i would like bake you 200 chocolate chip cookies!!!(well figuritivly of course)!! You need to at least finish this year i cant beleive that you give us a cliff hanger like this and then quit no way! i am only 14 too i have the same problems and the only reason you dont see my stories on here is cuz about 7 chapters down on paper the rest planned in my head my first one got rejected same thing with my second story and now im starting a new one so dont give up your an amazing writer and this is like amazing i love how you took the plot! If you give up it'll crush me! i love this story so much you should at least finish this year!! if not then the rest of the story it is amazing!!Your devoted fan!

Reviewer: Karya
Date: 07/12/08 18:59
Chapter: Trapped!!

this chapter was much better i liked it a lot!!! keep writing!

Reviewer: Karya
Date: 07/12/08 18:41
Chapter: Discoveries

no you arent putting too much in a chapter. your characters are fine but lily actually likes james is the only thing different from most other things. your a really great writer though i do think that bitch was a little to um teenager for a 11 yr. old. other than that it was very good.

Reviewer: Karya
Date: 07/12/08 18:27
Chapter: First Year: The beginning

not many people reveiw well a lot do but i can depend. so dont worry. It was really good! i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: death2008
Date: 06/29/08 6:10
Chapter: Exclusion

Oh My God!
Peter is dead.
Well thats his funeral instead of Remus'
Much better that way.i have never ever liked peter

Reviewer: death2008
Date: 06/29/08 6:01
Chapter: Confrontations

My favourite chapter so far?!
Hummmmmmmmm.
Its got to be the one with Lilys and Calistas fight.
I LOVE that one

Reviewer: death2008
Date: 06/29/08 5:31
Chapter: Realizations

Does he die?
I bet he does and then its the funeral fanasica all over again!!

Reviewer: death2008
Date: 06/28/08 14:14
Chapter: Great Danger

OOOHHHHH I LOVE THAT CHAPTER!!
VERY CLIFF HANGERY
I BET YOU HE DIES!!!
(SORRY CAP LOCKS ON)
yeh he dies and then everyone atendes his funeral except lily coz she cant face seeing james and then she interubts it all half way through by opening the doors to the great hall and James turns around and she runs up.James would be standing there thinking i love her and she loves me.
he smiles at her but she runs right past him and goes to Robbert and Jada and hugs them both and starts crying on Robberts shoulder and after the funeral James kills robbert from jelousy and then they all have to go to another funeral.
And a few years later James and Lily die so everyone has to go to another funeral and well it will be funeral fanansa!
And i do not own that much black considering my name and i would never wear the same thing to every funeral.

*Finaly breaths*
Wow im really inspiered by your story.

Reviewer: death2008
Date: 06/28/08 13:11
Chapter: Mixed Feelings

What i would change is i would make Lily kiss James.
Dunno why but i would.
Or i would make somebody shoot a spell at 'her' so she would die

apart from that i would change nothing

Reviewer: death2008
Date: 06/28/08 12:51
Chapter: Christmas Day

Oh god i hate that girl i could just grab the back of her neck and smash head hed on da floor untill she died,Or lost her powers.

You should like that because it means you are great at making your story come to life

Reviewer: Masqer
Date: 06/16/08 21:55
Chapter: Playing into Hands

write and hurry the suspense is killing me!

Reviewer: The Potter boy
Date: 06/14/08 1:11
Chapter: The Accident?

nice start, but i thought the lily's "mental voice" was a bit mature, seriously, which 11 year old checks out guys/girls?

Reviewer: tashy
Date: 05/24/08 10:52
Chapter: First Year: The beginning

o god u have to continue this story!!!!!!
nobody cares that this doesn't go with the actual story!!!!!!
its a wonderful story
pleaassssssssssse
just continue :')

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 05/09/08 18:01
Chapter: Playing into Hands

can you pleeeeaseeee just continue it?
you are KILLING me here with this!

Reviewer: hedwigandme
Date: 04/26/08 13:34
Chapter: Playing into Hands

write more

Reviewer: ellienellie111
Date: 04/15/08 16:55
Chapter: Playing into Hands

ok, don't do the plot outlines. what's the point of reading the rest of the story, then? just keep updating, you're doing a terrific job, I love your story!

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