lily and castila's shouting match was by far the greatest cuz tat bitch finally got wat was comin to her..... but i think u should elaborate on it a little more and build some tension it keeps the reader readin and wonderin XD
challenge- if there was one thin in this story to change it would b tat lily n every1 plays this awesome prank/ hexes into oblivion calista XD
omgggggg..... has everythin rght in the world gone wrong! =( n i have a bet its love pot. XD
omg..... jada of course!! =D
n castila is a real bitch >,
Arghhhh!! I hate Peter! but love your story ;) UPDATE please, hey no review challenge?? haha, congrats on the great writing! ^-^
that is SO COOL!!
Roxy and Sirius
Remus and Thila
WHAT A FOUL LYING BITCH OF A FRIEND!!!
he got mad about Sirus and ran off somewhere to kill himself
Oh please let me be right
I never really liked that git
aaahhhhh...Lily's knight in shining armor
I like this James already, I think Calista might have some competition.
Great so far. It might take me a while to finish reading what you've already written though
Evil, decrepid, disloyal, betraying PETER!
are you kidding ive only read the first chapter and it is already awesome!!!
Author's Response: did ya liiiiike it?
ummm i predict the brake up will happen next chappie!
Author's Response: maybe so maybe so :)
i gusse im a little out of date for the poem thing but yea shes a snob
Author's Response: lol yeah alot of people picked up on that fact...
well idk but so far i think its pretty good
Author's Response: well thats good lol
HAPPY NEW YEAR SOPHIE!!!!!!
Author's Response: OH hey gorgeous same to u!! :):)