Reviewer: Shadows_keeper21
Date: 09/29/10 19:53
Chapter: Epilogue

The story was good, but I found I disliked Hermione's character the most, because she cried a lot, and her personality was being a weepy person. Draco was also a bit soft at times, but I like how you made him protective of people he loved, instead of being so selfish.

Reviewer: vampqueen
Date: 08/17/10 18:47
Chapter: Confusion and Doubt

Draco Malfoy has grey eyes, I'm pretty sure

Reviewer: thetmose
Date: 11/04/09 18:59
Chapter: Confusion and Doubt

this is by far the best fan fic i've ever read! i need the sequel!!!:s

Reviewer: kirstiejd12
Date: 08/08/09 3:52
Chapter: A confession

Really good so far. Can't wait to read next chapter :)

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess96
Date: 12/29/08 20:55
Chapter: Confusion and Doubt

Two things: 1, i absolutely LOVE this story. I read the whole thing plus the sequel today. 2. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

Reviewer: xohplovr94xo
Date: 10/14/08 15:08
Chapter: Epilogue

awwwww i loved it!
this was really good :)
i'm gonna start the sequal right now.

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 10/04/08 2:09
Chapter: Confusion and Doubt

oh and haha i see the next one.. little blind. wooo!

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 10/03/08 23:21
Chapter: Confusion and Doubt

nice story! just read it all! hope you arent forgetting about the next one :[. gl with school and such!

Reviewer: mathgirl365
Date: 07/28/08 18:47
Chapter: Eavesdropping

GO HERMIONE!! GIRL POWER

Reviewer: mathgirl365
Date: 07/28/08 18:41
Chapter: A secret visit; A misunderstanding

i like it

Reviewer: mathgirl365
Date: 07/28/08 16:32
Chapter: Confusion and Doubt

that's interesting

Reviewer: Dreams_of_Draco
Date: 07/17/08 23:05
Chapter: A confession

this is a great fanfic. i love it already. its great how they like each other and wont admit it. i can alrady tell that the rest of the story will be amazing, keep doing a great job

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/04/08 1:42
Chapter: Stupid Boy

wow that chapter was emotional. it was great for some reason i think that the song my inmortal go great with it. I was lsitening to it while i raed this and it somehow makes it stornger. Love this chapter.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/04/08 0:05
Chapter: The Plan

Harry is the best friend ever. I love the way he talks as for draco at least he is starting to recognise his feelings

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/04/08 0:01
Chapter: A confession

wow it's the second time i've read this fic and i think i love it even more then i did the first time. I love that harry is so comprehesive and he jsut has the best attitude about things. Draco is great i love his inner conflict.

Reviewer: phoenixgurl321
Date: 06/26/08 21:41
Chapter: The Plan

Ugh...Harry is under the invisibility cloak. Nothing goes right when he's under that thing. Something is going to go wrong.

Reviewer: phoenixgurl321
Date: 06/26/08 21:37
Chapter: A confession

Oh my gosh. This story is really incredible. It just keeps me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Really great job for your first fan fic.

Reviewer: phoenixgurl321
Date: 06/26/08 21:32
Chapter: Confusion and Doubt

I really love it so far. I can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: dancingwithneville
Date: 05/19/08 19:43
Chapter: Epilogue

Hi! I loved this story and read it in one day. It was very amazing and I can't wait to see how the Your Eyes potion works and Hermione's reaction to it!

Author's Response: In the hopes that everyone who reviews sees this, I am deeply sorry that I have not posted the sequel to this story. I have had to deal with some personal issues and regretfully had to stop writing. I hope to start again soon. Thank you so much for reading my stories.rn

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 02/03/08 10:21
Chapter: Epilogue

WHERE'S THE NEXT INSTALLMENT????? merlin, i've been waiting for more than four months, okay?! please please please please please, get the next installment up!!! [contorting body into weird shapes in anticipation :D :D]

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