The story was good, but I found I disliked Hermione's character the most, because she cried a lot, and her personality was being a weepy person. Draco was also a bit soft at times, but I like how you made him protective of people he loved, instead of being so selfish.
Draco Malfoy has grey eyes, I'm pretty sure
this is by far the best fan fic i've ever read! i need the sequel!!!:s
Really good so far. Can't wait to read next chapter :)
Two things: 1, i absolutely LOVE this story. I read the whole thing plus the sequel today. 2. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
awwwww i loved it!
this was really good :)
i'm gonna start the sequal right now.
oh and haha i see the next one.. little blind. wooo!
nice story! just read it all! hope you arent forgetting about the next one :[. gl with school and such!
GO HERMIONE!! GIRL POWER
i like it
this is a great fanfic. i love it already. its great how they like each other and wont admit it. i can alrady tell that the rest of the story will be amazing, keep doing a great job
wow that chapter was emotional. it was great for some reason i think that the song my inmortal go great with it. I was lsitening to it while i raed this and it somehow makes it stornger. Love this chapter.
Harry is the best friend ever. I love the way he talks as for draco at least he is starting to recognise his feelings
wow it's the second time i've read this fic and i think i love it even more then i did the first time. I love that harry is so comprehesive and he jsut has the best attitude about things. Draco is great i love his inner conflict.
Ugh...Harry is under the invisibility cloak. Nothing goes right when he's under that thing. Something is going to go wrong.
Oh my gosh. This story is really incredible. It just keeps me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Really great job for your first fan fic.
I really love it so far. I can't wait to see what happens.
Hi! I loved this story and read it in one day. It was very amazing and I can't wait to see how the Your Eyes potion works and Hermione's reaction to it!
Author's Response: In the hopes that everyone who reviews sees this, I am deeply sorry that I have not posted the sequel to this story. I have had to deal with some personal issues and regretfully had to stop writing. I hope to start again soon. Thank you so much for reading my stories.rn
WHERE'S THE NEXT INSTALLMENT????? merlin, i've been waiting for more than four months, okay?! please please please please please, get the next installment up!!! [contorting body into weird shapes in anticipation :D :D]