Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 10:35
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

AWWWWWW!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! except harry should have gotten order of merlin, FIRST CLASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love the story! time for the EPILOGUE! YAY!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 10:19
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: Song of the Phoenix

OHHO!! I love how much you convinced me that Harry died. i cried like no other and then in this chapter i cried as well. sad cry and then happy cry. OOOOOO!!!!!! uuu...

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 10:04
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: Two Serpents

oooooo!!!! i am crying at this second and it is so hard for me to type. so sad!! *sob*

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 9:43
Chapter: Chapter Ten: Debts Repaid

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! WAHHH!!!! *sob* I don't want Harry to die!! SO SAD!! WAHHH! Snape is dead...shouldn't I be happy/! NOOOO!!! must continue...

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 5:42
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Fire and Ice

whoa whoa whoa! Malfoy being a werewolf was a huge surprise to me. WHOA WHOA WHOA! i don't know if i can take all this info in..

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 5:30
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Dead and Undead

"Can’t pull that one over on me," she grunted, helping him up. "That’s how the Turk rebels assassinated the last surviving Bulgarian Cave Hag!"

JUST like Luna! LOL

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 5:23
Chapter: Chapter Seven: A New Generation

Gred and Forge are hilarious aren't they? The parts where they George kept on making up names for their inventions were hilarious as well. NOO!!! EVIL CLIFFY! must read on...

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 5:13
Chapter: Chapter Six: Casualties of War

Indeed the DA has risen again!!! Brilliant ending there!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 4:16
Chapter: Chapter Five: All Aboard

I've read your one-shot "Mum, Dad, It's Me...Harry". IT IS SUCH A TEAR-JERKER!!!! Tears were spilling down my face practically the whole story.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 4:12
Chapter: Chapter Four: Cruciatus

I'm beginning to enjoy Draco being on the right side. I've always felt a bit sorry for him even though he was always awfully rude, arrogant, snobby to Harry and his friends.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 4:03
Chapter: Chapter Three: Mine Enemy

WOW! First Snape SEEMS good...Then Draco IS good...Then Snape SEEMS bad..AHH!! I am getting extremely confused here. MUST CONTINUE READING...*also* I don't really like the idea of Harry as a Horcrux and I think Jo has already said somewhere that he is not one.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 3:54
Chapter: Chapter Two: Unexpected Company

*GASP!* I wonder if Snape is GOOD! I believe that Snape is good and I really hope that Jo makes him good!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/13/07 3:45
Chapter: Chapter One: Cursum Perficio

Great start with your fanfic. The prologue was a bit too quick for my liking but everything else was what I'd imagine it to be like..except for Ginny/Harry's relationship. I love that ship and would prefer if they were together again..hopefully they will later on! Time to continue on...

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 01/11/07 21:09
Chapter: Epilogue

A wonderful end to a wonderful story!!! Loved every minute of it, so thank you. :-)

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 01/10/07 22:52
Chapter: Epilogue

OH MY GOODNESS!! This was absolutely FANTASTIC, and I am completely and utterly satisfied at last. It's sort of like the last HP book will be- bittersweet. There's no more to look forward to, but it's what I've been wanting for a very long time. Thank you for a fantastic and moving story that genuinely deserves the name of Harry Potter.
Your fan,

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 01/10/07 18:23
Chapter: Epilogue

I Love this Chapter. Perfectly exicuted and I really like how you ended it. Beautiful. Well, till next time I suppose.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 01/10/07 12:26
Chapter: Epilogue

Thank you so much for such a wonderful story! I love that we found out much of what happened because Harry was informing his mom and dad. That is so sweet! I also like how he gives them the locket, and moves on with his life. You have done an extraordinary job at writing this story, and I just feel honored to have found it and read it! :) Cyns

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 01/09/07 17:31
Chapter: Epilogue

OOh my god! I am speechless. This was the perfect ending battle. If only you could lend this battle to JKR. I have a feeling when I read the actual thing, I'm going to be sorely disapointed. Just... wow. your Harry was pefect perfect perfect! I felt like I was in the story with the characters. I'm glad that you made Snape redeem himself. I love the irony of Severus dying much the same way that Dumbledore died, saving Harry first. You are an amazing artist and I can't wait to see more of your work.

Reviewer: SPEWsupporter518
Date: 01/09/07 14:22
Chapter: Epilogue

An amazing ending to an amazing fan fiction. Yes, I am sure, this is the best one I have read, or probably ever will read. I do hope Deathly Hallows is similar to this, it would be awesome if it was. Then again, I think you share brainwaves with JK Rowling so . . . About the epilogue, it was a bit of a different Harry, but then again you did make him a bit older. I always thought the epilogue would not include talking, but your spin on it changed my mind. It would be too boring otherwise. I shall be eagerly awaiting the prequel!

Reviewer: CauldronCakeBaker
Date: 01/09/07 13:32
Chapter: Epilogue

I loved every…single… word. I loved that you took Harry back to talk to his Mum and Dad. What a fitting end for him and the story. I think the part when he gives the locket to his Mum and Dad speaks volumes of how much he has been through, how much he has grown. It shows that he is now ready to move past that in his new life.

I love that he will be teaching DADA. That is fantastic. With everyone else you did a great job at filling us in on what they are up to now. Love wins and the bad guys get it in the end. Yeah!!

The last paragraph is my favorite. You said so much in just a few lines, but it didn’t feel forced or plastic. It was as natural as the breeze that blew over the hill.

You are such a talented writer. I know that you will go far, and I am glad to be one of the few that will be able to say “I knew her when….” I applaud you and your sprit for seeing this through to the end my friend and I am very much looking forward to the prequel yet to come. I will be standing by to be witness to your talent and skills with the written word.

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