Reviewer: Divster
Date: 08/07/07 7:56
Chapter: Chapter One: Cursum Perficio

wow this was soooooo good!!! one of the best fanfics ever!!! and i saw some of ur drawings 2 ur really talented at both art and writing.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/05/07 11:32
Chapter: Epilogue

The end of the story, but so much to look forward to. I really enjoyed your version of what happened and I would like to thank you for writing it. Most of all I liked the way you balanced the hard parts with humor and levity. When I started this I thought it would be like so many others, but you surprised me. When it came down to it, you allowed the Ďlesserí characters to take the front seat and do what needed to be done. I am now off to read the other stories you have written and I hope they are as good as this one.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/05/07 11:20
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

Even with the sad parts of this chapter, you managed to hit all of the romantic and sweet moments perfectly. I really enjoyed it and now I am on to the epilogue.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/05/07 0:36
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: Song of the Phoenix

Not sure how you did it, but excellent job! You actually reversed it, and surprised the heck out of me in the process.
I canít really think of what else to say except, are you sure you arenít J.K.R. writing incognito? Just a thought.
More tomorrow.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/05/07 0:07
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: Two Serpents

I will reserve this review for after I read ch. 12.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/04/07 23:41
Chapter: Chapter Ten: Debts Repaid

I really wish this were one long chapter, instead of having to stop all the time to leave a quick note and then on to the next.
Anyway, I was relieved to see Peter kill Greyback, and Severus return. With Bella being her usual self, I really was glad to see Neville stand up and do what he needed to. I know he will be haunted by it forever, but sometimes bad things happen to good people, and having to kill her seems to fit that category.
Severus died and all were sad, crazy thought. But as I said earlier, I have always thought he would turn out to be on Harryís side. Glad you saw him that way too.
See you at the next one.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/04/07 23:05
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Fire and Ice

My major flaw is, I hate to wait for updates. So I guess itís a good thing I started reading this after you finished it. So far I am impressed, and I think having Draco bitten was plausible. I want to see what happens next so see you there.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/04/07 22:44
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Dead and Undead

The A/N at the end pretty much summed up my experience with this chapter. I really wanted to not like you or the story anymore when you killed Padma, but I know in every war there are casualties. Hagrid and Grawp showing up was very well done. I liked Grawp calling out for Hermy. That was a nice touch. See you at the next one.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/04/07 22:29
Chapter: Chapter Seven: A New Generation

I really loved the way the twins were about naming things. It was hilarious. I always thought they would make a joke at any time, just to relieve the tension.
Putting Neville in charge was such a Harry thing to do, and I loved it. Neville only lacks confidence, and when faced with the possibility of death his true courage comes through.
Great job on this one and I canít wait to see if that was a death twitch or if Bella is alive. See you there.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/04/07 22:11
Chapter: Chapter Six: Casualties of War

I liked the fighting and you did a great job on it. I hope Tonks will be all right, and the rest of the Order. I was joking when I said something about the entire DA showing up, but I guess you werenít kidding around when you said the reinforcements were coming.
See you at the next one.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/04/07 21:49
Chapter: Chapter Five: All Aboard

I can't wait to see who all from the DA shows up to help. It would be a real good thing if all of them came, but I don't think I'll hold my breath for that. See you at the next one.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/04/07 21:39
Chapter: Chapter Four: Cruciatus

I wonder if someone else helped boost the strength of that Cruciatus curse. Somehow I canít see Draco having that much power, even if he does hate Harry. I canít wait to see where this goes next, though I wonder where Snape took hisself off to. Guess I need to read the next chapter to find out. See you there.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/04/07 21:25
Chapter: Chapter Three: Mine Enemy

Who ever would have thought Harry and Malfoy, working together? Of course Harry made sense, Dumbledore wouldíve wanted him to help, and he already knows what itís like to lose his parents. I canít imagine he would wish that on even Malfoy.
Snape is a little ambiguous, but then again, when has he ever just said anything straight out?
Another great chapter, and I am on to the next.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/04/07 21:14
Chapter: Chapter Two: Unexpected Company

Very well written, and I have to say, I was glad to see Severus. He is one of my favorite characters, and I have always said he was a good guy. I like the way Harry seems to be stronger in this fic, than most people write him. Too many authors write him as a boy, and forget heís growing up and faces his obstacles very bravely.
You did an amazing job on this chapter and I canít wait to see what happens in the next one. See you there.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/03/07 23:18
Chapter: Chapter One: Cursum Perficio

This was a very good first chapter. I went to read the companion piece halfway through the third paragraph. It seemed to call for it.
The feelings Harry has for Ginny and the way things seem to be going for them is so complex, I canít wait to see how they play out.
Wanting to go alone to get and destroy the last horcrux is definitely something Harry would try to do. Just knowing they were safe and alive would help him make it back to them.
Keeping the horcruxes a secret from everyone but Ron and Hermione doesnít explain why Harry was talking in the fire to Lupin about where one might be. I wonder if telling Ron about Kings Cross was a mistake or if he was laying a false trail.
I guess Iíll have to read the next chapter to find out.
See you there.

Reviewer: lupin is the chocolate man
Date: 07/23/07 15:38
Chapter: Chapter One: Cursum Perficio

Well, I finished reading Deathly Hallows and I have to say... your portrayl of the final battle was actually loads better!
SPOILER (not really but depends on how you see it)
The final duel in the DH was really short (just between Voldemort & Harry) I wished it was longer & that Harry showed some impressive magic instead of his well...luck. I still enjoyed it but after reading yours, I was a let down. So basically, your story is better than the real one!

Reviewer: Springgirl
Date: 07/05/07 12:40
Chapter: Epilogue

Brilliant. Bloody brilliant. I hope you never stop writing. Ever.

Reviewer: Khydalin Lupin
Date: 07/04/07 22:57
Chapter: Chapter One: Cursum Perficio

Very good! I like the last few lines! They sound a lot like something JKR would write.

Reviewer: Funky Platypus
Date: 07/04/07 4:27
Chapter: Epilogue

This is the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have ever read. Not only is 90% of this fic what I predicted what will happen in the final installment, but your writing talents have so far been unmatched in my eyes, in the world of fanfiction.

This made me cry. This was the second fanfiction that ever made me cry, and that one-shot about Harry meeting his parents, that made the third. There's no words for your talents in writing. Never stop writing. Ever.

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 06/26/07 14:01
Chapter: Epilogue

that was a very good story i hope to read more of your storry.

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