Reviewer: rubyphoenix42
Date: 11/22/06 13:37
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

loved this chapter, wonderful story! beautiful writing from beginning to end. 100/10!!!

Author's Response: Heee! Thank you so much for reading it - your comments really make writing it worth the effort!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 11/22/06 12:02
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

Wow! Another AWESOME chapter! I loved Lupin and his chocolate. Ginny being in the room the entire time was nice too. I loved when Harry woke her up. That was such a great moment. Lupin coming in when Harry was trying to convince everyone of his guilt was perfect timing. Thanks for another great chapter, and I await anxiously for the epilogue!

Author's Response: *blushes* Ginny and the Sleeping Draught was a means to an end, really. I needed her to already be there for the express purpose of giving Harry the chance to wake her - what I call the "Sleeping Beauty" moment. :D Totally loved writing, so I'm thrilled you liked reading it! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: siriusluvr1333
Date: 11/22/06 11:16
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

Brilliant . . .simply brilliant.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 11/22/06 10:55
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

Oh, I just forgot what happened in the last couple of months, so ignore the update soon thing.

Author's Response: Don't sweat it. With any luck, there won't be any family issues to interfere with the epilogue. :)

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 11/22/06 10:54
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

Wow. I've just finished reading your chapter (hard to do at the moment since I'm at work).
And obviously it was amazing. It was not the perfect ending that all the bad guys die and good guys live, but bittersweet that so many lost their lives for an unneeded war, and still the struggle for power continues (Rufus S by trying to gain popularity by sentencing the Malfoys).
There were two parts of the chapter that was my favourite, the begining and the end. I love how you started it lightheartedly with the usual arguement between Ron and Hermione, and ended it with a feeling of satisfaction between Harry and Ginny.

Good job, please don't take too long with the epilouge, don't think I can handle another 4 months (just kidding, but sooner is better).

Author's Response: Hooray! Thank you so much! I definitely wanted to problematize the ending because in the real world, problems don't spontaneously go away so much as we must rely on people to help us recover. I'm so glad you thought it all balanced out all right!

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 11/22/06 3:29
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

I don't know exactly how long I've waited for this chapte, but it seems like eternity! But it's really worth it, because this chapter was really nice. And I really loved the ending of this chapter! Ginny and Harry really deserved it. I'm waiting for the epilogue now!

Author's Response: lol, yes, I'm sorry it took so long to get this chapter out. Real life got very, uh, interesting. In any case, I'm so glad you liked it and I hope the Epilogue doesn't disappoint when I finish it! :)

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 11/22/06 1:47
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

It is a fantastic story up to now.You have done a great job.I am waiting for the Epilogue.

Author's Response: Thanky you very much! :D

Reviewer: justlikehermione429
Date: 11/22/06 0:31
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

Tears of joke. that was brilliant. amazing. wonderful. ahhh!!! perfect ch 13!! cant wait for the epilogue, though i dont want it to end!!!

Author's Response: *gasps* Tears of joy! What a lovely review! Thank you so much :D

Reviewer: alla
Date: 11/21/06 20:52
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

GRRRRR they sent me an email saying it was updates FINALLY and its not up yet!!! *crys*

Reviewer: siriusluvr1333
Date: 11/21/06 20:36
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

AAAAHHHGGGG!! i just got an email saying it had been updated . . .THEY LIE!!!

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 11/21/06 20:20
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar




*raises the review count*

I just can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: rubyphoenix42
Date: 11/19/06 19:08
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

YES!!!! Need to read it!!!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/19/06 18:04
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

FINALLY! My jaw just dropped to the floor because I got an e-mail saying that there was a new chappie! It's been SO LONG! Can't wait till it's finally up! YAY!

Reviewer: siriusluvr1333
Date: 11/19/06 7:56
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

I saw that this had been submitted and nearly fell out of my chair!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 11/16/06 15:05
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar


Reviewer: Iamhouseelf
Date: 11/15/06 15:34
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! awsome! i can't wait to read it, please mods hurry!

Reviewer: SPEWsupporter518
Date: 11/15/06 14:33
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: The Scar

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! This totally made my day! It's only a matter of time now. Hurry up administrators, I need to read "The Scar!" PS- By the way I love your Halloween artwork!

Reviewer: Lumos101
Date: 11/12/06 16:59
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: Song of the Phoenix


Author's Response: LOL I just uploaded Chapter 13! Thanks! :D

Reviewer: alexhahn280
Date: 11/12/06 13:05
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: Song of the Phoenix

wow that was an amazing story. i cried form chapter 9 to the end and i am still crying as i write this to you. thank you for letting me know about this story thank you very much

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 10/28/06 14:35
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: Song of the Phoenix

I cried when I read this! And I only ever cried because of 3 fics. Your's was the first, so excellent work and you accomplished the seemingly impossible! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

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