Reviews For The Healer
Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 09/19/05 21:45
Chapter: Chapter 2 – Epione and the Serpent

Oh, please? One of my favorite things to do is to use other people's fiction and state it as fact in class and get credit for it. And you've got such a wonderful story for Epione I will be hard put not to bring it up in any of my classes, be it chemistry, calculus, or choir. The beta in me caught a lot of little errors, but too many to mention in just a little review. They didn't detract from the story in any particular way. So, good job again. *D*

Author's Response: *lol* and you get away with that? People must trust your words so well ... I wonder why people always expect me to be pulling their leg even if I'm not. What's your secret? ^_^

You mean you still found errors despite all the errors corrected? *L* I truly must be a beta's worst nightmare ... ^_^

Reviewer: Fawkes309
Date: 09/12/05 15:38
Chapter: Chapter 1 – Chiron and the Stars

This is a really interesting story. It's always good to read something original and to read characters about which few others have written. I must admit I get a little confused by the mythology references, but that is OK, you should not dummy down your story for those of us who haven't study mythology. I hope there will be more about Nicholas and Nathaniel as well as the continuing mythological story?

Author's Response: Thanks. *lol* the contest did specify I have to use facts/references, so this has more research and info that my usual writing. I don't really know much about myths either... ^_^ wikipedia is such a useful tool ^_^... great at making me seem more knowledgeable than I actually am *lol*

Chapter 2 is already in queue. ^_^

Reviewer: Harriet Evans
Date: 09/05/05 1:12
Chapter: Chapter 1 – Chiron and the Stars

Very good, I loved the way you portrayed the character of Chiron - he seemed so noble, and very centaur-like. The boy was also very good - you have a knack for capturing the innocent tone that shows he's clearly a boy at this stage. This is so different, but I'm really enjoying it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that I captured the character hope that noble centaur and the child-like Asclepius well. ^_^

I'm trying a new writing style on this one. I'm glad that you like it.

Really appreciate you constant feedback. ^_^

Reviewer: demiguise
Date: 09/04/05 15:17
Chapter: Chapter 1 – Chiron and the Stars

Love the way you are weaving together so many legends. Is mythology a specialty of yours?

You have a gift for helping the reader quickly get to know and grow fond of the characters! You're also an incredibly skillful storyteller. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Not really ^_^ I used the internet to gather facts>I do enjoy doing research though ^_^

Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. The second chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: demiguise
Date: 09/04/05 14:01
Chapter: Prologue

Wonderful descriptions, and a beautiful setting for your first chapter! Nicolas, Perenelle and Nathaniel all have such distinctive voices -- you've clearly put a lot of thought into their characterization and interaction. The way you've incorporated other myths into this story adds another layer that makes it all the more intriguing. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you for noticing their characterizations. I think you're the only one who noticed. ^_^ It's really nice to know that someone noticed and appreciated that.

Author's Response: Thank you for noticing their characterizations. I think you're the only one who noticed. ^_^ It's really nice to know that someone noticed and appreciated that.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 09/02/05 11:13
Chapter: Chapter 1 – Chiron and the Stars

Wow, I feel like I'm learning so much . . . it makes me want to read up on the myths and see what you had to work with. I'm nearly wordless when it comes to this chapter. I'm so glad you're doing this, it's such a joy to read.

Author's Response: Thanks CA. I knew this fic won't appeal to the vast majority, (for am using an obscure god and HP character) but am glad to head that at least a few people do enjoy it. Thanks for the continued support and words of encouragement. ^_^

Reviewer: Harriet Evans
Date: 09/01/05 12:18
Chapter: Prologue

I really enjoyed this - and it started off so beautifully with the description of Venice and the carriage arriving at the gates. And what a horrendous image presented by that painting at the end of the chapter Very interesting start!

Author's Response: Thank you, its great to hear that you like the imageries. Jan (Magical Maeve) is such a great help; her suggestions on adding some descriptions in certain places improve the chapter a lot.

*wince* if you think the painting's bad ... I think I went overboard on the next chapter *L* Seren upped the rating due to graphic imagery. (*lol* It's not that bad; I did try to tone it down.)

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 09/01/05 11:33
Chapter: Prologue

Aha, one to go into my favorites. I haven't read the other submissions yet, but I think that I would still like yours best. It's a very original idea, and I like how you put Nathaniel Black in there, as well as Nicolas Flamel. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks CA ^_^... I was a bit worried, because I switched to a different writing style on this one. ^_^ Thought that by using Flamel and an OC, it'll give the story a more original fic feel. A Renaissance-era guy seemed perfect; to present the story together with some imagery and thoeries. ^_^ Thanks for being my first reviewer for this fic. You made it all the more special by adding it to your fav. ^_^

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