Any sequel in mind? It'd be interesting to see what happens after this plot line.
Brilliant story. Very poignant ending. I left a few reviews on previous chapters, and I'm not sure what else to say.
The ending was certainly original, and it seemed to fit well with your story. I really enjoyed it. I'd have liked to have got into Aberforth's and Ollivander's heads a bit more, but no big deal there.
I really loved your flashback scenes with Albus, where he saw Grindelwald creating the original dementors. The scene with his friend's heart and the feelings that accompanied it were quite powerful. One of the more powerful scenes I've read in Fanfic.
Kudos for a really great story. Thanks for writing.
I love the way your write Aberforth. Since all we really have to go on from canon is that Aberforth is the bartender at the Hog's Head, a member of the Order, and generally considered to bit a off his rocker... well, it just means that anything else goes.
I like your version. He's a good guy, but he's also dangerous and more than a bit scary.
“Dumbledore?” Alphard looked up and down the corridor. Their Transfigurations professor often appeared in the most unexpected of places.
Haha, I love that line. *smiles happily at above quoted line*
I also really liked the last paragraph here, where Alphard finally got a real taste of just who "Lord Voldemort" really was, and what that might mean.
Kudos! *continues reading*
First of all, I want to say that I've only just discovered your story tonite, and that it is BRILLIANT.
Albus is my favorite Harry Potter character, and having him in a fic is always a plus for me. I'm also very fond of including Aberforth and Ollivander, though the personalities they have in fics varies widely due to the little canon we have about them. You write them wonderfully.
I'm also very impressed by your job idea for Hermione... I think that is the BEST idea I've read in fanfic for Hermione's job. It's important, hard to do, requires a good bit of intuition and intelligence, and isn't very common. It fits her perfectly I think, and even if it doesn't pan out in your story, I wanted to thank you for giving me the idea to think about.
Great story, and thanks much for writing. I look forward to reading the rest. Kudos.
I usually read fanfics with numerous reviews but I decided to read yours and now, I have completely changed my mind. I will no longer only read fanfics w/ only 100+ reviews. I just finished reading your story and let me tell you. WOW! I love how you put in history that occured in real life. I also like how you switched back and forth between Tom's past and Harry in the present. The two souls theory is interesting and I would never have thought of that.
OMG. thats all i gots to say. OMG.
I really like your story, especially the end. BUt I still think it'll be the REAL harry who will defeat Voldemort. But your view on these matters was great. I would never've come up with these ideas, I'm looking forward to more stories from you. Yours sincerely,
I really liked it even though there were a couple of mistakes.It's one of the best muggle net storys I've read for a long time ,maybe ever!
I just finished reading your story. I liked it a lot there was lots of good theories. I still don't subscribe to the Voldemort inside Harry theory or Harry as a Horcrux in light of HBP. But you presented skillfully and in a believable way. Good job. I'm off too see your other writings.
This story is very good. And this chapter was no exception. The idea that the Dark Lord is nothing more than a copy of Tom Riddle is excellent! You handle the scenes behind the veil very well and they are quite realistic. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Will Harry succeed in returning to his body? Will Tom Riddle vanquish the Dark Lord?
Another nice chapter. Thanks for the read!
What an amazing chapter to an already amazing story. The quill falling to the ground as a breaking bottle, and that entire scene with the brothers, reminds me a lot of something Roger Zelazny would write, and the entire chapter is reminiscent of Rivhard Matheson's "What Dreams May Come", one of my all time favorites. Wonderful combination at the same time of poetry and gritty realism, if that makes any sense. So far, I've been blown away by the originality of this piece. I cannot wait to see where you take it from here. Please thamk your beta for me as well; all the rough edges in the earliest chapters disappeared once you got a second set of eyes on this. Spectacular ideas, wonderfully expressed! Keep it up! Thanks for a great read!
wow... that's some complicated stuff...i like it!!! i really hope harry can get back into his body...update sood pleeeezze!!!!
good, good. pity it's AU now, after HBP. it's still interesting, though.
good, good...i really like this story...though i cant see the connection from voldy's past to harry's present...but i guess they'll meet up in the end? o well...keep it up!!
wow that's really good. Did harry get to see siruis in the viel?
Wow. Very good, very well written. Do the cards really mean something in those orders, or did they just seem right in the context? Anyway, good chapter, update soon.
Nice to see a new chapter up! I'm very impressed with your style of writing and anxious to see what happens next.
Amazing. Simply amazing. I love your writing. I am giving this chapter a 10 with no hesitation at all. Please update soon.