It's pretty good, but I want t see what appens in later chapters
dont like it
she should have remembered...but well written
Please, Please, PLEASE DO write a sequel!! I really would appreciate it not to mention read it over and over...!! ok so pls do consider my ... views....take care..!!
WE NEED A SEQUEL!!! DO YOU HAVE ONE??!! WE NEED ONE!!!
But I love it!!!!!!!
I can relate again to something in this chapter.......and one thing where lily and james action here?
Omg...I'm crying a thousand rivers here...
Its so sad....it reminds me of some point in my life.
Keep writing more stories about lily and james!!!!!
He can't just give up...*tears*
Does she read it...haha...watch it be him asking her to the dance...I'll laught at lilys face....even thought I love her!!!!!!!
Great story by the way.....but I would like to see more j and l moments...but I'm sure they come along in a little while!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAAHHHH! THEY'RE ZOMBIES! NOOOOO! omg, they. are. zombies. zombies. zoooommmmbiiiieeessss... blech. ZOMBIES! MWAH HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA! ZOMBIES!
ahem. sorry bout that...
JAMES REMEMBERS CUZ HE WAS SO TOTALLY DRENCHED IN THE WINE SO HE REMEMBERS EV-ER-Y-THING! YYYAAAAAAAYYYYY! Aaaawww... she said she loves him! SA-WEET!
kinda sudar high... I LOVE THIS STORY! But 'exasperated' means..like... 'annoyed' kind of. not tired-ish. Just a heads up!
Goodness, the person who reviewed before me sure is illiterate. That was not an insult... this is loooooooooong...
I cried. And I'll even get all deep on you: Maybe not, because I'm not really a deep-ish type person outside my own head. But I was just so filled with emotion at this...it's great...I'm speechless
WHAT?! THAT'S ALL?! "Gosh, Prongs, you really got to take better care of yourself." That's it? BUT SNAPE TRIED TO KILL HIM! HE SHOULD TOTALLY, LIKE, BE EXPELLED! I AM INFURIATED AT THAT SLIMY UGLY GIT! I am in love with James, so anyone who tries to kill him is SO not on my 'People To Talk To' list. Or my 'People to Let Live' list. Ooooo! > (
Your storry was by far one of my absolute favorites. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel. It would simplly be cruel not to. Everyone is looking forward to it. Don't let your fans down. You will have so much support. I'll even become a beta for you. You only live once so start writting! :)
ok, im going 2 b honest.....the ending sucked. unless u r planning on writing a sequel taking place in the 7th year where they get back 2gether, b-cuz they're supposed 2 end up 2gether, FYI.
awwwwwwwwwww! i love it! this is such a sweet, romantic, charming absolutely wonderful lily/james fanfic!
Wow... this is the best L/J story I've read... if you don't write a sequel I will die...
I have a feeling that the whole Peter/Natasha thing is just an excuse to not include him much... heheheh.
What an amazing goal there by Mr. James Potter, but I still don't understand how he 'magically' caught his broom with his eyes closed...
Brendan Fraser? As in, The Mummy guy? Pardon my asking why...?
Anyways, awesome plots here. This is one of my favourite chapters.
*cough* Corpse Bride *cough* !
It's okay I love that movie :D
Great Fanfic....The title of this fanfic were really good..