Reviewer: love_ya_hate_ya
Date: 04/27/07 23:19
Chapter: Crumble to Ash

It's pretty good, but I want t see what appens in later chapters

Reviewer: soccerprotostar
Date: 04/12/07 17:47
Chapter: Epilogue

dont like it
she should have remembered...but well written

Reviewer: mysticmemories
Date: 04/09/07 19:02
Chapter: Epilogue

Please, Please, PLEASE DO write a sequel!! I really would appreciate it not to mention read it over and over...!! ok so pls do consider my ... views....take care..!!

Reviewer: mysticmemories
Date: 04/09/07 16:34
Chapter: From You Have I Been Absent in the Spring

WE NEED A SEQUEL!!! DO YOU HAVE ONE??!! WE NEED ONE!!!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/11/07 18:28
Chapter: Victory Talk

So sad!!!!!!!
But I love it!!!!!!!
I can relate again to something in this chapter.......and one thing where lily and james action here?

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/11/07 17:29
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

Omg...I'm crying a thousand rivers here...
Its so sad....it reminds me of some point in my life.
Loved it!!!!
Keep writing more stories about lily and james!!!!!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/11/07 16:42
Chapter: Second Semester Begins

No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He can't just give up...*tears*

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/11/07 15:31
Chapter: Someone You Didn't Know

Does she read it...haha...watch it be him asking her to the dance...I'll laught at lilys face....even thought I love her!!!!!!!
Great story by the way.....but I would like to see more j and l moments...but I'm sure they come along in a little while!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ginny202
Date: 03/10/07 11:01
Chapter: Promise to Remember

AAAAAHHHH! THEY'RE ZOMBIES! NOOOOO! omg, they. are. zombies. zombies. zoooommmmbiiiieeessss... blech. ZOMBIES! MWAH HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA! ZOMBIES!

ahem. sorry bout that...

JAMES REMEMBERS CUZ HE WAS SO TOTALLY DRENCHED IN THE WINE SO HE REMEMBERS EV-ER-Y-THING! YYYAAAAAAAYYYYY! Aaaawww... she said she loves him! SA-WEET!

kinda sudar high... I LOVE THIS STORY! But 'exasperated' means..like... 'annoyed' kind of. not tired-ish. Just a heads up!

Goodness, the person who reviewed before me sure is illiterate. That was not an insult... this is loooooooooong...

Reviewer: ginny202
Date: 03/07/07 20:43
Chapter: Such a Fool

I cried. And I'll even get all deep on you: Maybe not, because I'm not really a deep-ish type person outside my own head. But I was just so filled with emotion at this...it's great...I'm speechless

Reviewer: ginny202
Date: 03/07/07 18:58
Chapter: An Unexpected Encounter

WHAT?! THAT'S ALL?! "Gosh, Prongs, you really got to take better care of yourself." That's it? BUT SNAPE TRIED TO KILL HIM! HE SHOULD TOTALLY, LIKE, BE EXPELLED! I AM INFURIATED AT THAT SLIMY UGLY GIT! I am in love with James, so anyone who tries to kill him is SO not on my 'People To Talk To' list. Or my 'People to Let Live' list. Ooooo! > (

Reviewer: Duke26
Date: 02/15/07 17:31
Chapter: Epilogue

Your storry was by far one of my absolute favorites. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel. It would simplly be cruel not to. Everyone is looking forward to it. Don't let your fans down. You will have so much support. I'll even become a beta for you. You only live once so start writting! :)

Reviewer: ellienellie111
Date: 02/03/07 16:59
Chapter: Epilogue

ok, im going 2 b honest.....the ending sucked. unless u r planning on writing a sequel taking place in the 7th year where they get back 2gether, b-cuz they're supposed 2 end up 2gether, FYI.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/15/07 7:27
Chapter: Epilogue

awwwwwwwwwww! i love it! this is such a sweet, romantic, charming absolutely wonderful lily/james fanfic!

Reviewer: guimonc001
Date: 01/06/07 11:47
Chapter: Epilogue

Wow... this is the best L/J story I've read... if you don't write a sequel I will die...

Reviewer: guimonc001
Date: 01/05/07 22:27
Chapter: Saving Snape

I have a feeling that the whole Peter/Natasha thing is just an excuse to not include him much... heheheh.

Reviewer: guimonc001
Date: 01/05/07 20:16
Chapter: Failing for the First Time

What an amazing goal there by Mr. James Potter, but I still don't understand how he 'magically' caught his broom with his eyes closed...

Reviewer: guimonc001
Date: 01/05/07 18:36
Chapter: The Christmas Party

Brendan Fraser? As in, The Mummy guy? Pardon my asking why...?

Anyways, awesome plots here. This is one of my favourite chapters.

Reviewer: guimonc001
Date: 01/05/07 18:13
Chapter: Someone You Didn't Know

*cough* Corpse Bride *cough* !

It's okay I love that movie :D

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 01/02/07 13:54
Chapter: From You Have I Been Absent in the Spring

Great Fanfic....The title of this fanfic were really good..

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