Reviewer: phoenixrebirth
Date: 01/04/08 22:46
Chapter: From You Have I Been Absent in the Spring

“Ready to go?” asked his mother who had just finished scolding Mr. Potter for telling James to abuse Mrs. Norris.
“Yeah,” he replied as he took one last glance at his friends go their separate ways, “I’m ready.”
fantastic story and those lines feel like they foreshadow his brave death for Lily and Harry.

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/03/07 16:24
Chapter: Epilogue

I loved the story, got kinda confused at some parts but in all i loved it. I kinda hated the whole way James and lily got together,but i still loved the story. Keep it up your a great writer.

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/03/07 11:30
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

It's so sad. *sobs*

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/03/07 11:20
Chapter: Failing for the First Time

Omg, James-NO!!!!

Reviewer: Dobby Love
Date: 11/02/07 22:24
Chapter: Such a Fool

OMG that was the biggest twist i ever even aahhhhh omg it was so good i was trying to tell anyone who would listen. I though sirius like natasha or something and he really like Audry wow......

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 10/10/07 19:19
Chapter: Victory Talk

wow, that was a real shocker.....keep up the good writing!

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 10/06/07 22:01
Chapter: Epilogue

that ending was a little bit confusing.

~Passion For Prongs

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 09/30/07 9:43
Chapter: An Unexpected Encounter

Wow. Sirius was really in character in this chapter. I liked how he was kind of nonchalantly amused by the way girls were fawning over him and James. JK Rowling made it quite plain in Order of the Phoenix that he didn't quite care for girls, he seemed like the type to make fun of those girls who were into him and James. So good job on that. However, because Sirius is also a rather reckless person, he strikes me as the kind who'd go for stronger curses at Snape than "Expelliarmus." I was thinking along the lines of "Stupefy". But other than that I thought that Sirius was portrayed perfectly, well done!

mavis :D

Reviewer: HClovesPhelps
Date: 08/25/07 13:00
Chapter: Wine Tasting

the story was good until now. I think that was much to fast and cheezy. So with that I am not going to finish this story.

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 08/23/07 15:28
Chapter: From You Have I Been Absent in the Spring

is there going to be a sequel by the way?i loved it.

Reviewer: lilybobily7
Date: 08/22/07 16:59
Chapter: Failing for the First Time

Brendan is like Cedric. good story =]

Reviewer: Mansk
Date: 08/21/07 21:26
Chapter: Failing for the First Time

you do know that if james caught it, that it would be a penalty for hufflepuff as called a snitchup only seeker can grab the snitch

Reviewer: Lily_Ginevra_Potter
Date: 08/19/07 22:09
Chapter: Poetry

I just thought I should inform you that the title of the sonnet is Sonnet 18. ^_^

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 07/11/07 1:42
Chapter: Epilogue

That was AWESOME! I loved it,there was so much feeling and all that stuff that happened,and when James was thinking about the poem and then how he and Lily weren't meant to be together,well I may have had something in my eye,but they were getting a little watery.Ok,ok I was practically bawling! But, god it was so . . . I dunno, like intense, and beautiful! I am sooo saving that to my favs, great story, you BETTER write some more (Just kidding,do whatever the heck you want!) So yea,thank you for that awesome use of my time ;)

Reviewer: MagicAtHeart
Date: 06/26/07 17:35
Chapter: Epilogue

wow, that was really good! i loved audrey
amazing story

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/22/07 2:29
Chapter: The Christmas Party

They are BOTH making all the wrong decisions her!!! When do they realize they love each other?

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/22/07 1:52
Chapter: The Stag

WHO IS SIRIUS 'EYEING'?????!!!!!!!! This is so... suspenseful!!!! I need to read the next chapter QUICK!!!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 05/14/07 18:08
Chapter: Epilogue

I haven’t read many James/Lily stories. But this one caught my eye. I really enjoyed it and would love to read more, if you decide to write the sequel.
In the books there are references to the Marauders and Lily, but you have fleshed them out so well that I have to commend your writing ability. I was especially pleased that you didn’t focus on the Marauder/Snape friction. You had enough in this to make it “real” but the main focus was on what young friends will do when they are finding love and strengthening friendships.
The episode with Sirius at home was disturbing, and from what J.K. has given us in her books, completely accurate. I know it must have been difficult to write about that type of abuse, but you portrayed it well.
With James the only one to actually remember, the epilogue was very touching. I happen to believe that if you love someone to the extent that James and Lily were supposed to, then even the memory charm wouldn’t keep her from knowing somewhere in her heart, or soul that she should give James a chance. And according to J.K. she does in the seventh year. Just goes to show that even Voldemort couldn’t stop true love from bring to life his destruction.
I would like to say thank you for giving me an enjoyable afternoon while reading your story.

Author's Response: Hi there! I know this is a VERY late response, but I've been extremely busy, and I hadn't checked the site in ages until recently where I saw your review. I just want to say thank you so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it, and I'm so glad you liked the story. This story has been completed for quite some time, and I am always ecstatic when someone leaves such a detailed review as this even when the story is quite old. Thanks again!

Reviewer: jojo_dolphin2394
Date: 05/14/07 13:42
Chapter: Such a Fool

That's all I can say.

Reviewer: jojo_dolphin2394
Date: 05/14/07 13:08
Chapter: Someone You Didn't Know

I love your story...
Finally Lily is just starting to come round...
And who would have thought it, James Potter and the piano...
JoJo x

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