Reviews For The Battle Within
Reviewer: 4ever-H-and-G
Date: 07/05/08 0:23
Chapter: The Battle Within

This story is really good!!! Maybe you could write a sequal to it where they get back together.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/19/08 22:30
Chapter: The Battle Within

that was sad!!!! it was VERY er..interesting and i thought that it was kinda unrealisic that everyone died in the war. very well written though

Reviewer: Hogwarts Alum
Date: 11/19/07 22:57
Chapter: The Battle Within

Well conceived and written. Why haven't you continued the storyline ?

Reviewer: Antonio
Date: 07/31/07 12:40
Chapter: The Battle Within

That was AMAZING! It's sad and eveything, but what are you going to do? I like the position of the quote about the saddest thing, it's the final quote of the story and it leaves the readers breathless - sometimes literally. Amazing writing.

Reviewer: Antonio
Date: 07/31/07 12:36
Chapter: The Battle Within

That was AMAZING! It's sad and eveything, but what are you going to do? I like the position of the quote about the saddest thing, it's the final quote of the story and it leaves the readers breathless - sometimes literally. Amazing writing.

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 06/29/07 8:14
Chapter: The Battle Within

Annie... you are bloody brilliant! This fic brought me to tears. You captured their emotions perfectly. I am a H/G shipper myself and love writing about them, and this was just the most amazing fic ever. I loved the part when Harry said, 'You know what the saddest thing in the world is? To love someone who used to love you.' You are amazing!! Keep up the awesome work!

-harry_victoria :)

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 05/26/07 8:36
Chapter: The Battle Within

This made me cry. You captured the emotions between the two perfectly. Great job.

Reviewer: lilywink
Date: 04/15/07 21:23
Chapter: The Battle Within

I love this story...i just had to re-read it...

Reviewer: brandir
Date: 04/01/07 0:13
Chapter: The Battle Within

beautifully written. it's not everyday i come across a story where harry loses everything and fights internally w/ himself. it made me mad and sad all in one go.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 03/01/07 14:42
Chapter: The Battle Within

This was extraordinarily touching. Great job!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 03/01/07 7:41
Chapter: The Battle Within

Wow. You are great with words and your writing is so carefully placed. I got teary eyed and it was just so touching

Reviewer: mspadfoot89
Date: 01/31/07 12:14
Chapter: The Battle Within

Firstly, I have to say that was a truly touching piece of fiction, this coming from an H/Hr shipper. You have a definite, wonderful way with words and not only that but all of the emotions are expressed so clearly throughout.

I loved how the fic started out, carefully setting the stage, I loved the way it developed, but I esppecially loved the ending--so heart-wrenchingly sad. Somehow it seemed very cannon for Harry and Ginny to act the way they did, very in character and that's something rare in H/G romance, at leasta s far as I've read. There are so many details I loved in this fic, but I'll only stop to mention this one line:

"It's what a person does when they have nothing left to live for," replied Harry, his voice raw with emotion. "It's what I do because you were my life, and I lost you."

I don't know why it affected me like it did, but it was strong, powerful ... desperate.

Wonderful writing and a breath of fresh air!

Reviewer: HP_GWRW_HG
Date: 01/15/07 16:41
Chapter: The Battle Within

OMG noooooo poor harry

Reviewer: lilywink
Date: 12/01/06 15:29
Chapter: The Battle Within

Can you please make a sequel. Please..............

Reviewer: MalFred_CGeorge
Date: 08/17/06 17:22
Chapter: The Battle Within

Oh my! This is so sad!

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 07/31/06 11:16
Chapter: The Battle Within

that was amazing! but it was so sad. *sob* are you sure you dont want to make a sequel?

Reviewer: lilywink
Date: 06/26/06 21:19
Chapter: The Battle Within

oh my god that was so sad. i hate ginny and seamus!!!!!!!!!! love your stories!!!!!

Reviewer: SorceressSisters
Date: 06/24/06 11:57
Chapter: The Battle Within

So sad are you sure you're not done with this story?

Reviewer: SorceressSisters
Date: 06/24/06 11:57
Chapter: The Battle Within

So sad are you sure you're not done with this story?

Reviewer: durr_durr_durr
Date: 06/20/06 17:52
Chapter: The Battle Within

Awwwwww.......*sob* It's sooo sad!

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