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Name: Auror81692 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/05 10:56 · For: There is only one chapter
Fine. Since this is the bloody United States, you are intitled to your own opinion. But when Ron/Hermione happens, I'm going to review every Harry/Hermione story and luagh in all your faces.

Author's Response: Why waste your time reading Harry/Hermione fanfics when you can read JKRs books? I suggest you start with these passages from HBP. Page 305 “He’s at perfect liberty to kiss whomever he likes,” said Hermione… “I really couldn’t care less.” Hermione dots an “i” angrily and Harry thinks Hermione is upset about Ron + Lavender, but I think she means what she says. Harry is really bad at figuring out what’s on Hermione’s mind. She has two other reasons to be angry: 1) some girls are plotting to give Harry a love potion and she couldn’t bust them for just talking about it and 2) Harry still owes her an apology for the way he used her to fool Ron about the Felix Felicis and she’s not going to get it because the incident is out of Harry’s mind. Page 313 “I like really good Quidditch players,” Hermione corrected her. (I think she means what she says and the really good Quidditch player at that table is Harry.) Page 351-354: When Ron returns to Hogwarts after Christmas he gets a very warm greeting from Lavender. Hermione laughs about it and then ignores it altogether as she talks with Harry. Page 353: She stared across the room, apparently lost in thought, not even noticing Lavender tickling Ron. “How’s Lupin?” It’s as if Hermione is not jealous of Lavender, which could be the case if she’s in love with Harry. Hermione passes an amicable evening with Harry while Ron is distracted by Lavender. I think it is interesting that JKR used the word “amicable”, instead of “fun, enjoyable, pleasant, nice or friendly”. Amicable is derived from Amar which is Latin for “to love”. Page 461 Lavender approaches, Hermione leaves. It’s almost as if she doesn’t want to cause trouble between Lavender and Ron. This occurs after Ron professes his love for Hermione on page 449. If Hermione loved Ron she would stay with him to help break up the Ron + Lavender affair. Page 613 – Hermione hugs Harry in the hospital. Harry decides he has to break up with Ginny in order to protect her. I think Hermione still had Felix Felicis in her blood when the impulse to hug Harry hit her.

Name: Auror81692 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/05 16:37 · For: There is only one chapter
Guess what? I'm a Ron/Hermione shipper, and the reason she let the birds attack Ron is because SHE WAS BLOODY ANGRY AT HIM FOR KISSING LAVENDER!!!!!!!!!! I mean, say you like this guy/girl, and he/she goes out with someone who you get along with well. Would you be bloody mad at him/her for going out with the other person in first place? Harry/Hermione ISN'T GOING TO HAPPEN! GET THAT THROUGH YOUR THICK, FAT HEADS!

Author's Response: Hi Ahole81692, Try reading the books and looking for the clues. Ron wants Hermione but Hermione loves Harry. When a guy is jealous of another guy he first beats up the fellow, then reclaims his girl. When a girl is jealous of a girl she doesn't attack her crush. That would be stupid. Hermione attacked Ron because Harry put his friendship with Ron ahead of his friendship with the one person who has always been loyal to him.

Name: Cheeso_potter_2011 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/05 14:13 · For: There is only one chapter
It is a very good story if explains a lot of stuff that is a what if?? It is exatly how I felt when i got to that part i wished ron never stepped on on them!!! Some pple call h/hr shippers wierd for not beliving the same way but we r just thinking the way we want not there way.....when/if harry and hermione are togeather i will laugh in those h/r and h/g shippers!!! It was a great story!!!

Author's Response: Hi Cheeso! Thanks for the nice words. Hermione really suffered during the first Quidditch match. The way she was wringing her scarf in her hands - classic sign of great distress, almost sterotypical. Harry owed her an apology but she never got it because of Ron. Hermione was angry at Ron for four months and it wasn't about Lavender! She felt bad about the way she treated Ron when he almost died. That's why she started being nice to him in the latter part of the book.

Name: mugglenet6 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 20:01 · For: There is only one chapter
Oh, and in response to one of your author responses, JKR said it herself. She didn't know how anyone could see Harry and Hermione together (a bit nicer than emerson put it if I may say so myself DELUSIONAL! lol) Anyways, I know that it's hard, but we still have fanfiction to get us through! Sorry to be the bearer of bad news! Love, Michelle

Author's Response: That's all a smoke screen to protect the plot of book 7. JKR invited two kids that are as much rabid R-Hr shippers as I am a H-Hr shipper, and she made them feel good. Emerson was just putty in her hands (lucky stiff). Well I have to apparate now. What's the idea? Destiny, Delusion and Disaster is that it?

Name: mugglenet6 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 19:57 · For: There is only one chapter
Awww, you're right! I loved the old Ron! He has turned into a bit of a jerk hasn't he? (I didn't even read HBP to the end! lol In my opinion it was written so poorly compared to the other two. On one page they used the wrong form of the word "there" and then on another -unless it was on purpose- they used Rupert's name in place of Ron! lol) Well, regarding your story... :-P I thought you did a great job trying to see things from another perspective and then building off of that. I do think that JKR had it in her mind from the start that Hermione and Ron would be together, but I really think that Harry is better for her (I have my reasons lol). Anywas awesome job, keep up the good work and good job trying to use the HBP character growth in with your story! I enjoyed it, though I wish I would have enjoyed HBP better... Love, Michelle

Author's Response: We all make little errors. The use of Rupert instead of Ron was intentional, it showed that Slughorn had no regard for Ron. Frankly I think Hermione would be better off with Ernie Macmillan or Terry Boot. But she's clearly stuck on Harry Potter right up to the end of HBP and is only crying on Ron's shoulder because Harry was talking to Ginny and Hermione knows that Harry doesn't need the burden of a sobbing girlfriend.

Name: Little_hoole3333 (Signed) · Date: 08/27/05 0:33 · For: There is only one chapter
Hmmmmm. Very interesting. Now that doesn't mean bad, I just find it interesting. :) :O :P :O

Author's Response: Something for H/Hr shippers to think about. What did Hermione see in Victor Krum? (He's brave.) What does Hermione call Ron in chapter 24 of HBP? (Coward.) What is "disinformation"? Is it a tool that could be used to protect the future plot directions of a novel? It's going to be a long wait for book 7 but the R/Hr shippers will never be happier than they are now.

Name: Captain Obvious79 (Signed) · Date: 08/25/05 23:10 · For: There is only one chapter
very interesting, i love the r/hr parring, but yes, i think the h/hr parring would work too! Great idea! i give ten

Author's Response: I loved the 12 year old Ron who sat on a knight and risked his life to lead his friends safely across an enchanted chess board. What happened to him? The Ron of HBP is so self centered and immature. Even at the end, when he has the only shoulder Hermione can find to cry on, he's stroking her hair. That's a form of sexual foreplay. Couldn't he just hold her? He's taking advantage of her grief, probably without realizing what he's doing. I'd be more comfortable with R/Hr if I wasn't so disappointed in his lack of growth.

Name: Captain Obvious79 (Signed) · Date: 08/19/05 0:28 · For: There is only one chapter
Very cool, loved the idea! I always hate the fact that Harry is complete rubbish with girls. Its just so Harry Potter to be completely clueless. love the story 10!

Author's Response: God Bless Ginny Weasley! The best part of the short Harry-Ginny relationship was that it helped to reassure Hermione that Harry is not gay nor strangely attracted to Luna.

Name: Waddiwasi chik (Signed) · Date: 08/18/05 1:12 · For: There is only one chapter
I also wondered alot when I read that part about what would happen IF... I too saw that as a possible H/Hr moment, before SOMEBODY inturrupted it. I loved this fic, especially the end. I was so glad to see that you wrote it. A million out of ten.

Author's Response: Hi Waddiwasi chik! Thanks for the nice review. I wrote this story to point out that Hermione would have been very upset and might have lashed out at Ron even if she wasn't jealous about Lavender. I think a careful reading of HBP reveals that Hermione was NOT jealous about Lavender at any time. It's going to be a long wait for book 7 but I predict that the Ron-Hermione pairing won't last very long.

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