Reviewer: SearerOfSimplentcy
Date: 07/06/06 19:37
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Auor, you stink. P.U now i went onto your stinkin story and trashed so you know how it feels.
King,do not respond i just wrote that for alot of pepole who are like myself.'bowing'

Reviewer: marauder_since_1993
Date: 07/06/06 19:29
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Although strongly ship r/hr, this was a good story.

And don't mind me saying that you and Auror81692 seem to be overstepping the overwhelming evidence that JKR has provided for us. (Does the word platonic ring a bell?) Good story, though.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to get a complement from a R/Hr shipper. Auror81692 is a bit too emotionally tied to the R/Hr ship. I mean, come on, these characters are fantasy. We shouldn't become too tied in to any ship because they are JKRs characters and she will do with them what she wants to do with them. I like H/Hr because I think it's a rich premise for stories and I think there is ample evidence in the books that Hermione loves Harry. If JKR ends book 7 with Harry and Hermione married, will R/Hr shippers cry and fuss? I can see Hermione settling for Ron if Harry is dead. Would Harry's death make R/Hr shippers happy? I know what the word platonic means. Harry loves Hermione, he just doesn't want a romance with her. Do you know what the word "disdain" means. It's how Hermione feels about Ron. (Read HBP: Hermione's Helping Hand, it's used when she's telling Harry how "fanciable" he is.)

Reviewer: SearerOfSimplentcy
Date: 07/06/06 15:54
Chapter: There is only one chapter

ah got more to say! totaly agreed EastAngel. also i like fics where harry sings. Also king i think you should get permission from JKR and publis your works oh and YOU ROCK

Author's Response: JKR has created a marvelous fantasy world with a lot of potential for spin-offs that have nothing to do with Harry Potter directly. Dumbledore is one of my favorite characters and there are lots of possibilities for stories that feature a young Dumbledore, set in the 1870s. "Wizards of the Old Republic" sort of stuff. But JKR has said that the Star Wars novels etc. has gotten out of hand. She might not want to license her franchise

Reviewer: SearerOfSimplentcy
Date: 07/06/06 14:56
Chapter: There is only one chapter

THANK YOU! Now that that little complait is done this story is really good along with the others i read from you they are not on my favriote list, but your on the authers! i am trying to write an story but they keep deleting em. when i do please rr, i am new on mf . one more thing, if you suport D/G, R/L and H/hr check out portkey.com you can tell its them cause when you look up in a corner you see hp and hg kissing.
oh and sorry for being anoying. :(

Author's Response: I've never checked portkey.com, but I will. Thanks for the tip! I think R/L would be a good pairing, but it's an ambiguous abbreviation. Either Luna or Lavender would be a better personality match for Ron than Hermione. I don't go for Draco ships like D/G or D/Hr. Draco tried to murder Dumbledore and he hurt Katie and Ron quite badly. I wouldn't want to see Ginny or Hermione or any other nice girl with him unless he has a complete personality change.

Reviewer: SearerOfSimplentcy
Date: 07/05/06 16:33
Chapter: There is only one chapter

I cant read 6-7 years two young I know my acount says other TYPO wont change. 13. PLEASE DO A SEQ.to HPAND THE NEEDED ONE.that rated 1-2 for others who dont have an ACOUNT cause there 2 young,oh and love the story

Author's Response: Hi Searer! Thanks for the nice review. When I wrote "HP and the Needed One", I had no intention of writing a long story that would go up to the confrontation between Harry and Voldemort. It was just a short work designed to show that Harry needed Hermione because she has skills that he has not mastered (specifically Runes and Arithmancy). "The Fifth Horcrux" is rated 6th -7th years because parts of it get a bit racy and there is some violence.

Reviewer: vicdragonchild
Date: 07/02/06 23:30
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Great story. I love that fact that you didn't write Hr/R, cause I'm a H/Hr shipper, and the Ron Hermione fics are BORING!!!!!! You are pretty good, you know.

Author's Response: Hi vicdragonchild! Thanks for the nice review! The trouble with Hr/R fics is that they reduceHarry to a minor character. The Harry Potter books are about Harry Potter. My current WIP is called "The Fifth Horcrux". It's a sequel to a post HBP H/Hr fic called "Harry Potter and the Needed One." The Needed One is just 8 chapters long and you should read it before "The Fifth Horcrux."

Reviewer: songchic_siruslover
Date: 06/05/06 14:35
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Good story

Author's Response: Hi songchic! Thanks for the nice review! My current project is called "The Fifth Horcrux". It's a sequel to an eight chapter story called "Harry Potter and the Needed One".

Reviewer: KatieMagic
Date: 06/05/06 2:15
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Very nice. Im a diehard Harry/Ginny shipper so thi sort of story mormally doesn't appeal to me but I admit its done perfectly. I actualluy went back and checked the pages you told that awful person about and I must admit there are loads of Harry/Hermione hints tucked away in there. I guess it could go either way. Whatever the ship great story , keep writing.
Cheers , Katie

Author's Response: Hi KatieMagic! Thanks for the nice review. H/G might be a good combination. Actually I think Harry + Cho would be a good combination, but it won't happen.

Reviewer: EastAngel
Date: 05/27/06 7:34
Chapter: There is only one chapter

i love your story...and nice version from all teh huggy kissy ones u find out here and to teh person who was so mean to this wonderful writer... should all stories follow the imaginary 'JKR story line'? who gives a flying f*ck. she made this world, for us to play in, to change what she wrote, but to leave it the same... if people wanted to make us keep to the story line, they shouldn't even be on this site... for all we know Hermione could marry Victor Krum, Harry marry Pansy Parkinson. and Ron marry Ginny... who knows.. WHO CARES... fan fiction is defined by what we make up from a world already writen...so it can't be a lie, for we never wrote about the truth... if we kept to the story line.. it wouldn't be fan fic. it would be coping... we write cause we enjoy it. and so does JKR...
so if u think that we should stick to the story line like super glue... u dont deserve to be here...

why don't we wait till the last book comes out... i agree that a R/Hr relationship looks promising... but then again.. you never know

signing off...
East
p.s. and yes Auror81692 your are unbelieveably stupid...

Author's Response: Hi EastAngel! Thanks for the nice review! I appreciate your comments but I have to say that I don't think a R/Hr relationship looks promising. Anything can happen in fantasy, but in real life the pairing of two people as different as R/Hr usually ends in a rocky breakup. There is a professional match-making service called E-Harmony.com that claims to match up couples that are compatible, but there is no E-Heron.com that wants to take your money and match you up with someone you cannot get along with and do not work well together with. I wouldn't bet money on any particular HP ship and I'm sure JKR is unhappy with the gambling that revolves around her books. But it's worse to get emotionally involved with a particular HP ship than it is to bet money.

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 05/12/06 20:30
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Alright, you were right, i was wrong! I shouldn't have flammed your story, no matter what my opinion. i read your story again, and I found it was very well written, though I do not agree with the shipping. I have been an HP freak for over a year and and half, and I always supported R/Hr. I'm sorry for whatever discord this has spread between us. I was very stupid and naive. A lot has happened over the past year, including the deaths of 5 of my family members with me as the sole witness to all. Seeing death and sadness has matured me beyond anyone my age. My friends have gone so far to say I've lost my sense of fun, that I have become sad and depressed most of the time. Despite all this, they have done all they can to support and help me. I know this doesn't make sense telling you this, but I don't care about life, Harry Potter ships, or anything anymore much. So, you called me immature. i just wanted you to know how I have grown. I am sorry, and i don't care about these stupid ships anymore. Once agan, I am terribly sorry.

Author's Response: Hi Auror81692, Your apology is accepted. From my perspective, there is no cause for bitterness between us. Some of my smart-ass replies to your earlier reviews may have hurt your feelings, and for this I must say that I am also sorry. To me, writing and reading HP fanficts is a hobby, and nothing more. I enjoy communicating with other HP fans, including you. I'm glad that you have friends who have been supportive and I truly hope you can find a reason to care about life. Maturity is greatly overrated. Personally, I cling to immaturity, or at least to some aspects of immaturity such as trying to have fun. It's more important to be polite, cheerful and helpful, and to be able to swallow one's pride and admit mistakes. None of us are perfect.

Reviewer: dracos_lass
Date: 05/11/06 16:55
Chapter: There is only one chapter

i love your story!youv turned me into a HG/HP shipper.oh and auror813thingy if your reading this you are an ass and read your reviews for that crap story you wrote about ron and hermione falling down the stairs and you will find out what i really think of you!King i hope you write more missing moments with harry and hermione cause youv got me convinced theyre gonna get married and have babies!dont listen to auror81384 or whatever she needs to get her head checked!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hi dracos lass! Thanks for your nice review! If Harry is a lot like his father James, then who is his Lily? Is it a red head with green eyes, or is that just superficial? Harry's mom was muggleborn and a very talented witch. She was a Prefect and a genius at potions. She also had a tendency to be a bit bossy when enforcing the rules (making James put down Snape when he was having so much fun). Does that you remind you of anyone?

Reviewer: KenTuck
Date: 04/25/06 16:40
Chapter: There is only one chapter

That was amazing! I don't normally read any shippers with Hermione, smaller characters interest me more, but this was so interesting. It really shows everything in a different light. I was really convinced that it was going to be Harry and Ron, but you gave good points. I think it is really good and I would love to read more stories from you, which I think I will do right now.

Author's Response: Hi KenTuck! Thanks for the nice review! I've got two stories that I suppose should be organized as a series. HP and the Needed One is a post HBP H/Hr romance that covers the summer after Dumbledore's death. The thesis is that Hermione loves Harry and Harry needs her talents in order to find and destroy Voldemort's horcruxes. That one ends on a bit of a cliff hanger, but there's a sequel called The Fifth Horcrux that now has 9 chapters.

Reviewer: 5589
Date: 04/21/06 16:28
Chapter: There is only one chapter

hey king i read this a while ago and was reading the reviews and i really think you should report auror person because in one of those she mentioned that she would send someone to you to hurt you. that is abuse on a whole other level than regular flames. i would give her a piece of my mind because i don't have any fics on this site. i just use tha account for favorite stories which i don't think is totally legal for the site. i am disgusted at how she treated you and i am interested to read what that one author wrote on her review page. i have been looking for around 15 minutes for a report abuse thing but haven't found one.

Author's Response: Hi 5589! Thanks for the review. I'm not too awfully worried about that disturbed child. She and a little friend have trashed out a bunch of H/Hr stories. She's just a R/Hr shipper who's a bit too emotionally involved with her personal version of a fantasy world. I guess she's got this idea that Ron and Hermione are perfect for each other because they have nothing in common and fight all of the time. She's probably from a broken home. (Mommy and Daddy used to fight all the time when they were married.) Or maybe she's hoping that Ron will get Hermione out of the picture so Harry will fly off to America to search for some Muggle girl to marry. I feel sorry for the imbalanced little brat. What happens if JKR decides to pair up Harry and Hermione in book 7? Would she and her little psychotic friend go to Scotland to attack JKR?

Reviewer: JeWb
Date: 03/28/06 19:29
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Well, like I said, I'm a 100% H/Hr ship. But how they act in the books is how couples act when immature. Ron attempting to make Hermione jealous with Lavander. All that nonsense, Hermione getting mad at Ron when he tries to go into the classroom with Lavander. So her reaction with the birds isnt all that out of context if you think about it. But like I said, I'm really hoping JKR will get Harry and Hermione together. But the odds dont look good for our diminishing ship :(.

Author's Response: Hi JeWb, The founder of this web site is a fanatical R/Hr shipper. That fact colors the makeup of the editorial staff . Read this site's biography of Hermione. It is a R/Hr fanfict that completely ignores all of the clues that Hermione prefers Harry over Ron. Read the "delusional" interview carefully. The only person defending H/Hr shippers in that room was JKR and she talked about "defending the property" early in the interview. I am sure that book 7 will be very well written, and it can go any way. JKR has her plan, and I really don't think she revealed it to those two R/Hr shippers.

Reviewer: JeWb
Date: 03/27/06 9:46
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Im a 100% H/Hr shipper, but I have to say I'm almost 100% positive Hermione will end up with Ron. Though I wish it wouldn't happen, it's bound to. =/.

Author's Response: Hi JeWb!, I don't know what JKR will do about ships. It's entirely possible that at the end of book 7 it will not be clear who is paired up with who. I mean the big issue is how does Harry survive? I don't put much weight on the hug at the funeral. Hermione was crying. Harry was busy breaking up with Ginny. Ron gave Hermione a hug. Read the book. It says Ron was holding Hermione. It doesn't say Hermione was holding Ron. What's she supposed to do? Push him away? I think Hermione loves Harry and I think she will get her way. Ron could be an obstacle.

Reviewer: Harry and Hermonie
Date: 02/04/06 9:51
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Ok, I totally agree with HPandHGforever, and totally DISAGREE with Aurorwhatevernumbers.I read one of her R/Hr fics, just to compare it with your's, and I nearly puked; at the end she said 'Loved?Hated?Please review' so I did, and I have a VERY nasty Irish temper, so I gave her a piece of my mind!

Author's Response: Thanks! Auror### and her little friend Tara are a bit irritating but they don't put me off. They're just kids and this is just a hobby to me. I hope that their nasty reviews don't discourage other young writers. Frankly I don't know how anyone can write a H/R romance and keep the characters in character. They all seem to start, "Hermione Granger was a carefree teenager who happened to attend Hogwarts Shcool of Witchcraft and Wizardry and who had been madly in love with Ron since the day she first saw him." As if Hermione was ever "carefree". You just can't have an HG who is both smart and in love with Ron. Her actions in HBP seem calculated to prolong the R/L affair. A smart girl would have stayed closer to the guy she liked in order to torpedo the affair. Like she did when she invited Harry to meet her on Valentine's Day when he had a date with Cho.

Author's Response: Thanks! Auror### and her little friend Tara are a bit irritating but they don't put me off. They're just kids and this is just a hobby to me. I hope that their nasty reviews don't discourage other young writers. Frankly I don't know how anyone can write a H/R romance and keep the characters in character. They all seem to start, "Hermione Granger was a carefree teenager who happened to attend Hogwarts Shcool of Witchcraft and Wizardry and who had been madly in love with Ron since the day she first saw him." As if Hermione was ever "carefree". You just can't have an HG who is both smart and in love with Ron. Her actions in HBP seem calculated to prolong the R/L affair. A smart girl would have stayed closer to the guy she liked in order to torpedo the affair. Like she did when she invited Harry to meet her on Valentine's Day when he had a date with Cho.

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 01/30/06 22:54
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Unlike "other" readers, I loved your story! Your a brilliant writer! Please keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review. I've submitted the first chapter of a sequel to HP and the Needed One. It's called The Fifth Horcrux.

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 12/11/05 18:04
Chapter: There is only one chapter

OOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IN YOUR F*CKING FACE, FATHEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEW I WAS RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU GO TO [www.mugglenet.com/jkrinterview.shtml] THEN YOU AND THE OTHER *FCKING RETARDS THAT THINK HARRY/HERMIONE ARE GONNA BE TOGETHER WILL BE PROVEN UTTERLY WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!! READ IT!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 11/28/05 14:48
Chapter: There is only one chapter

SO I'M UNBELIEVABLY STUPID NOW, AM I?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!!? OH YEAH, I CAN'T TELL YOU WHAT YOU ARE, BECAUSE I'LL GET KICKED OFF THIS SITE!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE SO STUPID THAT YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE ANYTHING ON YOUR PROFILE!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE JUST LUCKY I DONT' KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I SENT MY BREOTHER AND SEVERAL OTHER PEOPLE TO THE HOSPITAL BEFORE, AND I'M NOT AFRAID TO HURT SOMEONE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF I EVER FIND OUT WHERE YOU LIVE, THAT WILL BE THE LAST DAY OF YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: My profile reveals everything I want to reveal. Do your parents know what sort of filthy comments you are making? Amanda, for a 13-year old, you lack maturity. I'm not optimistic about your chances of getting into veterinary school. Admission standards for that program are very strict.

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 11/13/05 8:46
Chapter: There is only one chapter

I waste my bloody time so I can see what stupid idea you idiots come up with, and I was so right. You Harry/Hermione people are going to very disappointed, and I will be there to add insult to injury, and LAUGH IN ALL YOUR FAT FACES!!!!!!!! So enjoy your last year believing the lie you created, and do not say I didn't warn you. (P.S.: If Hermione loved Harry, why did she beam after he kissed Ginny?)

Author's Response: Thanks for your input. I assure you that I will not be disappointed by book 7. JKR is a great writer and I am expecting a beautiful ending. That is not the same as expecting a happy ending. It would be great if Harry and Hermione pair up at the end, but if Harry ends up with Ginny or Luna or Cho or Gabrielle Delacour that would be fine too. It would be a bit depressing if Harry ends up dead but if I had to place money on it that’s what I’d bet on. In the middle of your childish outburst you asked a question about Hermione’s response to Ginny kissing Harry after the last Quidditch game. Bravo! You are making a feeble attempt to analyze the books which is more than most R-Hr shippers are capable of. By April of 1997 Hermione has been Ginny’s friend for at least a couple of years and she knows how Ginny feels about Harry. Hermione wasn’t surprised by the H-G development and she could deal with it emotionally and intellectually. From Hermione’s perspective, seeing Harry with Ginny is a lot better than a couple of alternatives. First H-G eliminates the really scary ship, the horrible possibility of Harry pairing up with Ron. Harry and Ron went for a moonlight stroll in the garden at the Yule Ball. Ron was the person Harry would miss the most in the lake challenge. Harry’s relationship with Cho fell apart very quickly. After all of that there may have been some reason to wonder about the possibility of Harry being gay. But Harry’s hormones flow the right way! What a relief! Second H-G eliminates H-L. The idea of Harry and Luna seems to drive Hermione nuts. Generally Hermione is a nice person except when dealing with one of Harry’s enemies but she was absolutely nasty to Luna on several occasions in OotP. The Hermione-McLaggen date was arranged after Harry asked Luna to the Christmas party. (It wasn’t about irritating Ron. That was a transparent and poorly conceived lie. He wasn’t even invited to Slughorn’s party. Hermione is not very good at lying.) At the party Hermione came over to Harry and told him she had “escaped” from McLaggen under the mistletoe. She then compared McLaggen to Grawp. She was obviously attempting to goad Harry into stepping in. It was pretty clumsy and Harry didn’t bite. Hermione can’t figure out Luna Lovegood, but fortunately she doesn’t have to. The third reason H-G is a relief to Hermione is that Ginny has a history of going through boyfriends. (Who advised Ginny to start dating other boys?) There is no such thing as a couple that gets along all of the time and if Harry and Ginny have a fight, Hermione will be close by. If Harry ends up happy with Ginny then that’s bitter-sweet for Hermione. What matters most to her is Harry’s safety and happiness. Hermione’s devotion to Harry has been unswerving since the night Harry met Sirius Black, when she left Ron unconscious on the ground and followed Harry into a swarm of Dementors. (They changed that in the PoA movie to confuse the simple-minded, but the book version is the canon.) Reread all of the HP books with an open mind. JKR writes better stuff than any of these silly fanfics. Ron is attracted towards Hermione but these impulses don’t come from his head or his heart, they start a bit lower than that. Hermione’s actions and words make so much more sense if you assume she loves Harry. And by the way, you need to chill out.

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