Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 08/09/06 18:53
Chapter: There is only one chapter

YAY! I have a story in quee, 'Forever love' exect it is called 'Matters of the heart'

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 08/06/06 12:32
Chapter: There is only one chapter

All but one, the best one I had, they did not even send a e-mail. If you want to read a R/Hr one by me, go to Ditto review by Auror##### I put it there 'Cause i needed her opinon.

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 08/04/06 18:24
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Hi, i am back. They keep deleting my storys, so i cant ever post a story. :(

Author's Response: Hi HarmonyHeadmisstress! Did they give a reason why your story was deleted?

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/25/06 19:58
Chapter: There is only one chapter

I review a lot. Well when I find a good author, thats what happens. All I gotta say is you are just plain correct.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/25/06 10:46
Chapter: There is only one chapter

You give me more to ponder on than school does. Hmm......................

Author's Response: JKRs books appeal to me, not because of the magic and the secret world of wizards although that is cool and a lot of fun, but because she deals with serious issues like: family, friendship, love, courage, sacrifice and dealing with grief. Voldemort's problem is that he wants to be immortal and all powerful. He's evil because his god is the face he sees in the mirror.

Reviewer: BanglaBuddy
Date: 07/24/06 18:14
Chapter: There is only one chapter

OMG u r soo right, that was like a moment that was not

Author's Response: Hi BanglaBuddy! I am one of the dissidents who believes that Hermione was jealous of the relationship that Ron had with Harry, rather than the relationship that Ron had with Lavender. Reread the paragraphs that immediately proceed the bird attack on Ron. Hermione tells Ron he shouldn't keep Lavender waiting, then she walks slowly to the door. During Hermione's slow walk, either Harry or Ron could have prevented the bird attack by doing what Hermione wanted. Ron could have left or Harry could have told Hermione to stop and asked Ron to leave.

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/22/06 20:04
Chapter: There is only one chapter


Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/22/06 12:49
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Iread one youre authors response to auor### and youre just as good as good as JKR in writing, ever conbsinderwriting for a living?I would read youre books, you are the best author on the web! I may just be over exaggertating, but its true! buy the way, do you have an acount on portkey? i would totaly check it out. You know, i just thought of something, If R/Hr, reduces harry to a minor charactor, H/G reduces every one to a minor character.
Hmm, I guess you cantever have yopur cake and eat it 2. Seriously, JKR's books are not romance novels, Pepole! There action, adventure, drama, angst, and fantasy.They are the main books, and our fanfiction is fiction to fiction! Ever consider Cho/Oliver? I ship it, it has posibilitys! I didnt like C/H cause i dont think guys should dte older wemon.
Well, this is a soapbox rant, DUH! oh, i hope auror### reads this.

Author's Response: Hi HarmonyHeadmistress! Actually writing is an important part of what I do for a living and I doubt if you would want to read much of what I write when I'm not having fun, it's pretty technical. Cho/Oliver would be a good pair. The emotional trials that Cho would have to go through as she gets over Cedric and Harry and settles down with a nice guy like Oliver would make a good story. I think McGonagall/Scrimgeour would be interesting.

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/22/06 12:20
Chapter: There is only one chapter, what i meantto say

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/21/06 23:06
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Got a story called forever love. When validated, please read and review, it is not a poem, For once, its a nice story!

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/21/06 21:30
Chapter: There is only one chapter

I just said sorry to a cirten sailor mouthed author.........'Bangs head' i just really hate it when pepole yell, it makes me sad.............Also pepole use this area lie a chat room...........

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/20/06 14:34
Chapter: There is only one chapter

I sumited a poem a bout patrouness.9 m0re to go1

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/20/06 13:34
Chapter: There is only one chapter

1, 2, And 3 are really good ideas.Oh the one with turning him into a feret is good too.By the way, you are the king.

Reviewer: HarmonyHeadmisstress
Date: 07/19/06 21:19
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Okay issten up. I am SearerOfSimplencty with a new name and style. I am gonna make sure i get at least ten stories up a year.

Author's Response: Hi Harmony. Ten stories in one year? That sounds very ambitious. I suggest you try to avoid complex plots that resolve multiple issues. Stick to simple themes that can be told as one-shot stories. Here are some ideas: 1) Snape's last minutes of life, Voldemort is mad at Snape for interfering in Draco's mission. Snape snivels and whines. 2) Draco's last minutes of life, Voldemort is mad at him for failing to kill Dumbledore. Draco snivels and whines. 3) Dolores Umbridge's last minutes of life, out of the clear blue sky, a safe falls on her. 4) Snape's last minutes of life, Harry captured him and he's about to have his head chopped off in Azkaban. Snape snivels and whines. 5) Draco's trial, evidence is presented regarding the locket that almost killed Katie Bell and the poisoned wine that almost killed Ron. He gets sentenced to have his head chopped off in Azkaban. Draco snivels and whines. 6) Dolores Umbridge tries to join the Death Eaters so she can get revenge on Harry and Hermione, but the Death Eaters think she's an ugly cow and they kill her. 7) Snape comes back to Hogwarts because he left behind some treasured possession such as his baby blanket. He is met by Harry, Hermione, Ron, Hagrid, McGongall, Flitwick, Sprout, Pomfrey, the Order of the Phoenix, all of the students that were in the DA, all of the Aurors in the Ministry of Magic and of course, Fred and George. Snape is hit by a hundred different hexes that turn him into a pus-oozing mass of slime and tentacles. Pigwidgeon drops a walnut on him and kills him. 8) Draco returns to Hogwarts because his mommy is mad at him for leaving behind his best pair of shoes. McGonagall turns him into a ferret and Hagrid feeds him to Buckbeak, sorry… make that Witherwings. 9) Dolores Umbridge returns to Hogwarts because she has teaching experience and Scrimgeour is cleaning ugly things out of the Ministry of Magic. Midway across the lake her boat develops a leak. The little wand in her hand came from Fred and George’s shop. The giant squid is very hungry. No one ever discovers what happened to Dolores real wand because no one looks in Scrimgeour’s desk. 10) Snape, Draco and Dolores go into The Three Broomsticks. Rosmerta decides to poison Draco because he used the Imperious curse on her, but she doesn’t know which plate is his so she poisons all three of them. It’s a really gruesome poison that takes a long time to kill them and has a lot of interesting effects like turning their guts inside out. I hope these suggestions are helpful!

Reviewer: greendot
Date: 07/08/06 16:22
Chapter: There is only one chapter

king-you are an excellent writer. The only thing that i would change is omit the word "tits" from your future writings. that word (breasts are fine) makes the scene trashy. like i said, I LOVE your stories. I've read them All and can't wait for you to finish The Fifth Horcrux. Also, anybody who"fancies" a R/Hr romance is a BLIND MORON.

PS i'm from america and i have never heard the term ship for a couple.Can u explain that 4 me?

Author's Response: The Slytherin students were taunting Hermione because she's muggle-born. They got a bit trashy because they wanted to humiliate her. "Ship" is short for "Relationship". It's a chat-room phrase. When I was in High School we just "went steady".

Reviewer: SearerOfSimplencty
Date: 07/08/06 9:27
Chapter: There is only one chapter

How, though?

Dont worry, it is me!

Reviewer: SearerOfSimplentcy
Date: 07/07/06 13:37
Chapter: There is only one chapter

Ok, I sumitted an story called Toeing the line of love. I am trying Waaaaaaaaay to hard. I like really good Quiddicth players 2 was deleted, so i gave up for now.
I can only do poems.
i dont type good.

Reviewer: SearerOfSimplentcy
Date: 07/06/06 22:41
Chapter: There is only one chapter

H and H, i read your reviews and what pepole thought about you and i almost cried! oh and that article, so agreed but im sailin on the HARMONY forever.

OH they said youre mean and have no respect.

Author's Response: Ya jus caint please everybody.

Reviewer: SearerOfSimplentcy
Date: 07/06/06 20:16
Chapter: There is only one chapter

one more thing, put two of your storys into an series.''harry potter and the great love''

Author's Response: I've thought about combining" HP and the Needed One" with "The Fifth Horcrux" into a series, but I don't know how to do that. I guess I'd have to read the instructions. There's always some technical stuff that has to be learned.

Reviewer: SearerOfSimplentcy
Date: 07/06/06 19:46
Chapter: There is only one chapter

AHHHHHHHHHH another thing to say. just proves how much you rock. sumited a story called''i like realy good qudqicth players''. i need a BETA reader. please read if aproved.

i am your #1 fan. gotta go start the fan club

Author's Response: I wish you the best with your story! Hermione's line "I like really good Quidditch players." is a great moment. If you assume Hermione is a lying mean bitch who wants to insult Ron, it's a nasty R/Hr moment. But if you assume that Hermione is not a natural born actress and that she honestly means what she says, it reveals that she likes Harry, because he's the best Quidditch player at the Gryffindor table. (Katie Bell, Demelza Robbins and Ginny Weasley are really good Quidditch players too, but I doubt Hermione is talking about them.)

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