Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/01/05 16:39
Chapter: The End Of The beginning p/4
Excellent. this is going in my favorites. Speechless simply speechless.....
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Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/01/05 16:36
Chapter: The End Of The Beginning p/3
Another great chapter! Well written and easy to read. I'm glad you showw what happened in the time of the attack on James and Lily. Wow! Got to read the last chapter... 10/10
Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/01/05 16:33
Chapter: The End Of The Beginning P/2
Great action sequence I really love this this fan fi. I didn't expect it to move to this part of their live but hey who cares... Excellent chapter 10/10
Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/01/05 16:32
Chapter: Lila and james.
I really loved this chapter great start to a brilliant fanfic. It was extremely well written and was perfect for the storyline of the rest of the books. Can't wait to read chapter two... 10/10
Reviewer: sayiansirius
Date: 04/11/05 20:12
Chapter: The End Of The beginning p/4
EXCELLENT. it was amazing and i can actua;ly picture everything better. now only if u can post it on my site....:-D
Reviewer: boggart
Date: 03/26/05 14:38
Chapter: The End Of The beginning p/4
nice! everything fits together like the books, it's sad too! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks for the review...
Reviewer: stickm
Date: 02/23/05 4:18
Chapter: The End Of The beginning p/4
ok love the first chapter on it's own and love the last 3 chapters but they don't seem to gel together very well! Personally I would've pursued the first chapter's storyline for a while and used the last 3 chappie's as a different story altogether. I'll still give you maximum marks though as it was well written... by the way thanks for reviewing my story it's much appreciated! :)
Reviewer: kuro_tenshi_LL
Date: 02/06/05 17:00
Chapter: The End Of The beginning p/4
pretty good story. i like it... kinda depressing
Reviewer: ma_raie
Date: 11/28/04 14:26
Chapter: Lila and james.
Very very nice! I just can't wait to see what Dumbledore had to tell James...we are going to see that, right?
Author's Response: Sorry...but no...I tried writing these chapters in a way so the readers could see action. But if you want to know what Dumblador wanted with James and lily...He told them about the prophecy and that Voldemort would eventually come after them to kill their son.
Reviewer: LilMissRadcliffe
Date: 11/27/04 20:14
Chapter: Lila and james.
Coolio! Is it finished? If not, add chapters soon!! :)
Author's Response: As you wish
Reviewer: SilverShadow
Date: 11/27/04 6:57
Chapter: Lila and james.
The chapter should be Lily and James. Not Lila
Reviewer: Angelica Malfoy
Date: 11/24/04 5:57
Chapter: Lila and james.
WoW! This is awesome...first story i've reviewed here..
Author's Response: *Blushes* You flatter me...lol jk...Thank You for your review. Next Chapter coming up...
