Reviewer: xLiFEerasedx
Date: 06/02/06 16:54
Chapter: One shot

Haha, that was pretty awesome. :D

Hmm, do the other ones make fun of the cliché plots in D/Hr fics, too?

::goes off to read them::

Good job on this one! =)

Author's Response: Thank you. No, the other ones are true Hr/D stories. I wrote this long before I started on the others, but I thought it should be included in the series. Hope you like the others, too. And thank you!

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 06/02/06 16:32
Chapter: One shot

*stops laughing and whipes eyes* Tha was absolutley hilarius

Author's Response: Thank you so very much, padfooyroxmysocks!

Reviewer: bellatrixblack8
Date: 05/31/06 17:36
Chapter: One shot


Author's Response: *smiles*

Reviewer: Rachiie
Date: 05/30/06 17:03
Chapter: One shot

I just wanted to say sorry- didnt mean to attack- after I wrote my review, I read your other reviews, I realized that you had a good point and putting all things aside and in consideration the story was quite funny!
sorry again,and I hope that you keep writting!!!*rach*

Author's Response: It's all right; no hard feelings. I'm glad you read my response, just to know why I wrote this story. I'm happy you still thought it was funny. Thank you, Rachiie.

Reviewer: Pirkadatka
Date: 05/30/06 8:44
Chapter: One shot

This fanfic was great!!!
I couldn't stop laughing, because loads of Hermione/Draco fanfics are like this!!
Now THAT about the authors imagination...
...of course, not all the authors, this was very-very funny!!!
I'm just going to read all your other stories, too!!!
Great job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Pirkadatka! I'm glad you liked it. No, not all D/Hr stories are like this, but I've read quite a few... I hope you like my other stories as well. Thanks!

Reviewer: Rachiie
Date: 05/29/06 17:57
Chapter: One shot

your kind of a smart-arse, if you dont like how most of the draco and hermione fanfics end up, get over it,you dont have to be rude,or funny about it!

Author's Response: I'm not trying to be smart-arse. If you didn't like the story, then fine, I'm not going to force you to read it again. But as you are entitled to your own opinion, so am I, and this attack, and claiming that I'm rude and deliberately making fun of other authors and their stories, is unecessary. My point with this story was to make writers go beyond this plot, to develop their stories with more than this.

Reviewer: Rachiie
Date: 05/29/06 17:57
Chapter: One shot

your kind of a smart-ass, if you dont like how most of the draco and hermione fanfics end up, get over it,you dont have to be rude,or funny about it!

Reviewer: chloe4dan
Date: 05/23/06 7:21
Chapter: One shot

HHahahahahhaahahhahahahhahahahah thats the funniest fic EVER!!!! oh god i laughed the whole way through, especially because all of this actually happens in a ridiculous amount of h/d fics, and yet loads of people leave reviews like "oh god what a brilliant fic!" and "ooo i love your writing" hahahahhahahahahhaha this is the funniest thing everrrrrr. lord i'm gonna laugh about this all night long *instantly adds to favorites list* oh and this line? hilarious! i simply must perserve it for your reviewing posterity :)

What are stupid friends for?" Harry smiled.

"Shagging," Draco mumbled.

"Draco!" Hermione shrieked.

---blood hilarious. simply love it. and i doubt you've had a weirder review ever, but i hope you've enjoyed perusing my little spurt of instanity in word form as much as i enjoyed your fic. --Chloe

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much, chloe! I'm flattered that you thought it so funny, and that you consider it a favourite. You are the first one to comment on that series of lines, and I'm glad you did, because I like them too (in all modesty). No, you're not a particularly weird reviewer; I love reviews, and yours is a joy to read and respond to. Thanks again!

Reviewer: bighouseblondie
Date: 05/22/06 16:11
Chapter: One shot

Great story!! but are u going to have a nother chapter with draco's reaction cause that would be great!

Author's Response: Thank you, bighouseblondie! But I'm sorry, there won't be any more chapters. A simple one-shot was all it was ever going to be. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: lyka
Date: 05/18/06 20:33
Chapter: One shot


*composes self after shameless outburst*

That was goood. Two thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm happy to hear you liked it.

Reviewer: Kizo
Date: 05/16/06 18:20
Chapter: One shot

It was so...random. That's the best word for it. Random. I like the end where Hermione's pregnant. I stared at the screen like, "Ugh...when did that happen?" Then I realized it was intentional. Yay Kizo trying to read fanfics with 6 hours of sleep! Woot woot! Yea, I also liked how you kind of made excuses for all the stuff a reader would question, like the OOC and saying that things usually happen at this part of the fanfic. Cool...I think!?!

Author's Response: I'm having a hard time sensing your attitude. On one hand you say it's random, but there are also some things that you liked. "Cool... I think" doesn't really help matters. In conclusion, I'm pleased to hear you liked the parts you liked. And the parts that you didn't like...well, all right.

Reviewer: ATL gurl
Date: 05/15/06 20:09
Chapter: One shot

*laughing too hard to talk* WTF? that was so bleeping funny i need to stop thinkin bout it fo i die laughin keep writin please we need some mo authors like you

Author's Response: I'm happy to see that since you're not able to talk, you can write. So, thank you for the review. I'm so pleased to hear you liked it!

Reviewer: rumplestiltskin953
Date: 05/10/06 21:32
Chapter: One shot

LMAO!! what a funny story! hehe .. good work!! i like how even hermione occasionally hates the sappiness of it all but its still a great work. :]

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the fact that they're 'forced' to say and do what the author and the plotline tell them to do, however sappy it may be. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 05/09/06 18:44
Chapter: One shot

Ahhh! I hate D/H, but please continue this!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: lovingron
Date: 05/09/06 17:14
Chapter: One shot

yay!! loved ur story
it was cool
had a great laugh

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: servant_of_DM
Date: 05/08/06 9:15
Chapter: One shot

its so *loud beeping sound* hilarious!!!! lol

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you!

Reviewer: AlittleCrazy
Date: 05/06/06 21:07
Chapter: One shot

HILARIOUS! i love the whole cliche-ness of it...great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: cassandra1992
Date: 05/03/06 3:32
Chapter: One shot

my mistake i know... but hey, i forgot to say this:

"i love the rest of your stories! and im not gonna let a story disrupt my nice envision of you." ; )

Author's Response: Well, thank you. I'm glad you like the others.

Reviewer: PritiFull_Dreamer
Date: 05/02/06 23:23
Chapter: One shot

OMG! i loved that! HAHAHA... really funny! keep up the good work! you're really good!

So they're like jsut acting like on a skript, i suppose? i liked it when hermione was about to say all those corny stuff and then just... winged it... clever!

- Priti ♥

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, in a way they're acting as though they've read ahead in the manuscript. I'm glad you liked the corny-turns-to-annoyance moment :) Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: cassandra1992
Date: 05/01/06 23:28
Chapter: One shot

i think it damn sucks. you like, make fun of the other authors, and i know youre tryin to be funny, but its DAMN NOT. i hate it. i mean, honestly!

thats my e.add.

sorry, but its my opinion.

Author's Response: You don't need to apologise; You're entitled to your own opinion. However, so am I, and this attack, and claiming that I'm making fun of other authors, is unecessary. My point with this story was to make writers go beyond this plot, to develop their stories with more than this.

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