What a fabulous story - I was smiling the whole way through. Hermione was beautifully in character and I loved the way you captured Oliver's Scots brogue. Clever how you intertwined all the little bits of canon. Mind you, I let out a hoot when you married Ron off to Pansy, not to mention Harry and Seamus moving in together. Oh, and it is so lovely to see a story where Percy is not some evil maniac. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This story always made me smile for some reason, and I'm really glad you did too :-) Yes, Percy does tend to get the sticky end of the lollipop in alot of fic, doesn't he? *hugs*
Excllent story. Very well written and very believable. You have a very enjoyable style that is easy to read. I hope you write more! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think that this was my favourite story to write, and so it really feels great to have so much positive response from it. My style is enjoyable? Thank you! It can be really hard sometimes to find the right 'voice' for each story; it's great to hear that you succeeded.
this is great. 10/10. i'm more of a Ron/Hermione shipper, but this is just so good i've become to like Oliver/Hermione fics!
Author's Response: I'm sorry to take so long to respond! I've been 'snowed under' with real-life stuff lately, so I've been a bit neglegent :-( Thank you so much for your suport - I loved this little story, and had a lot of fun writing it; it's nice to hear someone really enjoyed it!
Hey, great story! I've always wanted Hermione to end up with Oliver, but I've never seen a way how! It was great the way that you combined different memories to make the reader understand that they've known eachother ever since year one. You seem to have failed to write an ending tag for the italics in the end...but it didn't matter too much. The only other thing that bothered me was the line-breaking in the letters..otherwise it was brilliant!! Great story!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I always had a soft spot for this pairing too. It's great that you found the progression of the relationship believable - it's always so hard with these two! And thanks for your tips on the formating (it had originally been formatted for a larger screen) I've fixed the errors now.