aw! its sad that was just a dream... very good though!
There's nothing wrong with fluff once in a while. Not when it's written believable, as this was. Another brilliant fic, hope to read more soon.
MaidMarian is right... it is fluff... but its YOUR fluff.. and one of the reasons your one of my favorites... Its almost like you pluck these little happenstances from between the pages, like they were written and you found notes on Jo's floor, polished them up in your own style and hid them here for us to find.
i loved the way you wrote that story
Wow that was really good! i never thought about using fred and george's day dream charm that way. And even though this is fluff, it's different than the normal fluff that i usually read. It wasn't all kissing and romance stuff. It had substance! Keep up the great work
It was very well done. I like that Ginny was very mature in her acceptance of Harry's attempt to distance himself. Well written too.
I thought that story was wonderful. it was full of passion like all of your stories. i loved it!
I like the combination of romance with drama, self-indulgence with prophetic possibilities. You turned an over-written concept into a unique, emotional, and beautifully written one-shot. Thank you.
i love all your stories so much but i've never reviewed before. my favourite Ginny's Gift but i like this one too. its really good the way you take conventional pairings but make them do something new.
its is a bit fluff, but nicley done anyway. Ginny came out of the dream at just the right spot. I liked it!
I love this story...I've been away from fan fiction for a bit as I've been going to school and working full time but decided today to take a peak at what was in your profile. I love your writing and decided to look at some of your one-shots. I don't consider this fluff...just a nice, sweet story about a girl who loves a boy.
I agree with one of the earlier reviewers as well. You depiction of what Harry might expect after he defeats Voldemort...very well thought out.
Thanks for a great story...looking forward to reading more.
Ack, if this was fluff than I'm a monkey. I really enjoyed this - as always, beautiful writing.
Your writing is wonderful! Ginny is one of my favorites, and you captured her character quite well. I really enjoyed it.
I'm sorry this won't be a long review, but there's nothing in your story to pick on! And I'm a bit of a grammar/spelling/flow Nazi, so that's a big deal.
I really liked your idea of Ginny's perfect daydream -- and Hermione's. Very sweet.
I’m not a H/G fan, but I realized today that I haven’t read any of your writing, and that was intolerable. I’m glad I decided to; this was a nice little story. I wouldn’t consider it fluff—at least, not fluffy fluff. You’ve addressed too many relevant issues, if only in passing.
The first is how Ginny feels, not having access to the Horcrux information. I like the way you have her accepting that there’s stuff she doesn’t know, and that she won’t know it. It’s a very nice touch. Similarly, the suspicion she has about Harry, Ron, and Hermione’s disappearance from the twins shop, and Hermione’s later delay there, is interesting. It’s fun to know she’s speculated about what they were doing.
The part that really struck me, though, was the mentions of what will happen to Harry after he defeats Voldemort. It’s something that doesn’t get a lot of attention in the fics I usually read, and it’s a very valid point. I like that you’ve included it here.
The one thing that I wonder about is the daydream charm. If it affects everyone as deeply/strangely as it did Ginny and Hermione, is seems like it wouldn’t sell that well in a joke shop. And if it doesn’t, why did if affect them like that? Just because they have deeper concerns than your average teenager?
All in all, I quite enjoyed this, even though it’s far different than what I usually read.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. About the way the charm worked, that's something I just didn't quite think through. I originally started out with the intention of writing something that I wouldn't be able to post on this site due to the rating, but as I got into it, things just sort of evolved from there. I like your explanation of the situation, though, and I just may well borrow it if the question ever comes up again. ;-)
What a lovely little outtake. You're writing always amazes me. The imagery, attention to detail and characterization are all on the mark. I always look forward to reading new things from you. Please keep up the good work. I'd love to see a new longer fic from you!!!
Another excellent story, I just don't know how you manage to pull it off in one-shots. It was interesting to see it all from Ginny's PoV. I loved it!
Wonderful story! It was truly well written!
This a great story. Very well written and bittersweet. I, personally, like the Weezer reference since they are my favorite band. :)
WONDERFUL!!!! you must must MUST add on!!!! please? i cant stress that enough! it was so not too fluffy! i love fluffy stories, it was awesome, great job!!!!