Absolutely Wonderful!!! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story! I can't wait until you continue!!! Excellent job!
Author's Response: I don't really update on this site anymore. the queues are really long and it takes too much time. However, this story is finished at timeturner.net - it a truly delightful website for MWPP fics.
this is a particularly sad and teary chapter for me, because my teenage friend thinks she might be pregnant, and hearing Lily say that to James made me cry. You are an excellent writer! I've read this fan fiction before, but I just re-discovered it, and I love it to pieces. My favorite scene is definetly when they are in the bathroom and James says " this is true love". You definetly know how to write comically- the poisoned food bit was hilarious. Well done! Cheers, Lindsay.
Author's Response: I know the feeling. In a matter of three months, one of my closest friends got married, moved to germany, and then got pregnant with twins at the age of sixteen. we miss her a lot. But, I'm sorry it made you cry. im glad you think im funny as well. thank you.
wow! this is great! please hurry with the next chapter.. please?
Author's Response: This story is finished at a wonderful little site called timeturner.net I'll try posting more on this site, but the demands of Organic Chem and Calculus will probably be too much! But, visit timeturner.net and you can read this story and other James/lily fics that i've written.
awww this is a sweet story !!! it's really good
Oh, I can't wait for more..keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Hey guys. I'm glad that you like my story and thankful that you took the time to comment. If youre really interested in reading more you find the finished story at timeturner.net. also, many other stories.
love it love love it!!!!
Best james/lily pairing i've ever read!!! And its original too!
Update!!!
Write more please! You're developing the characters so very well. And you're descriptions are great. I could picture every scene.
Pretty obvious this was going to happen. YAWN
Adventureous. Me like
Author's Response: Thanks!
Thrilling story. I really like the action, very creative.
Thrilling story. I really like the action, very creative.
OMG! You have to keep writing this story! It's really, really good! But I don't think that it needed the R-rating. There wasn't that bad of stuff in it! But it was ur choice! Good Job! Keep writing!
Author's Response: thank you for your responses. if you would like to finish reading this stroy i suggest you find it a timeturner.net. it is finished there along with some other stories.
This was very well written! I loved it! I can't wait to read the next part!
i cant wait to read the rest of this story...it is really cute!
Author's Response: your best bet is to go to timeturner.net
This is a super story. So sweet! Well done! I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Its at timeturner.net . . . a lot of my stories are on timeturner. if your interested.
AWWWWWWWWWW...I love it, its just so sweet.Thats little Harry! Please wright more.
Author's Response: This story is actually completed at timeturner.net. the que is just slow here. but i will update soon
hi again, i read the story on timeturner and it is fantastic, it's really good!!! i luv it!! so keep writing and i'm gonna check out your other stories now!!
Author's Response: thank you very much... i love responses
I really liked it, its a great start. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: good. that makes me happy
