Reviewer: BRITTD25
Date: 10/25/07 16:33
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

Absolutely Wonderful!!! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story! I can't wait until you continue!!! Excellent job!

Author's Response: I don't really update on this site anymore. the queues are really long and it takes too much time. However, this story is finished at - it a truly delightful website for MWPP fics.

Reviewer: Hermioneee
Date: 09/14/07 19:36
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

this is a particularly sad and teary chapter for me, because my teenage friend thinks she might be pregnant, and hearing Lily say that to James made me cry. You are an excellent writer! I've read this fan fiction before, but I just re-discovered it, and I love it to pieces. My favorite scene is definetly when they are in the bathroom and James says " this is true love". You definetly know how to write comically- the poisoned food bit was hilarious. Well done! Cheers, Lindsay.

Author's Response: I know the feeling. In a matter of three months, one of my closest friends got married, moved to germany, and then got pregnant with twins at the age of sixteen. we miss her a lot. But, I'm sorry it made you cry. im glad you think im funny as well. thank you.

Reviewer: prongs_n_me22
Date: 09/03/07 17:58
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

wow! this is great! please hurry with the next chapter.. please?

Author's Response: This story is finished at a wonderful little site called I'll try posting more on this site, but the demands of Organic Chem and Calculus will probably be too much! But, visit and you can read this story and other James/lily fics that i've written.

Reviewer: emLILY EVANS
Date: 05/28/07 19:13
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

so good

Reviewer: hermygal
Date: 05/22/07 19:01
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

SO SWEET!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fishbubblesxoxo
Date: 04/07/07 13:00
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

awww this is a sweet story !!! it's really good

Reviewer: thediarywithin
Date: 01/12/07 10:51
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

Oh, I can't wait for more..keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Hey guys. I'm glad that you like my story and thankful that you took the time to comment. If youre really interested in reading more you find the finished story at also, many other stories.

Reviewer: TheAmazingHumdinger
Date: 12/29/06 14:41
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

love it love love it!!!!
Best james/lily pairing i've ever read!!! And its original too!

Reviewer: Veritas_rose
Date: 08/11/06 11:18
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

Write more please! You're developing the characters so very well. And you're descriptions are great. I could picture every scene.

Reviewer: michieceramic
Date: 06/29/06 18:48
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

Pretty obvious this was going to happen. YAWN

Reviewer: michieceramic
Date: 06/29/06 18:44
Chapter: Not Eating Dinner

Adventureous. Me like

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Sphinxed
Date: 05/22/06 16:10
Chapter: Not Eating Dinner

Thrilling story. I really like the action, very creative.

Reviewer: Sphinxed
Date: 05/22/06 16:03
Chapter: Not Eating Dinner

Thrilling story. I really like the action, very creative.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 05/06/06 15:48
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

OMG! You have to keep writing this story! It's really, really good! But I don't think that it needed the R-rating. There wasn't that bad of stuff in it! But it was ur choice! Good Job! Keep writing!

Author's Response: thank you for your responses. if you would like to finish reading this stroy i suggest you find it a it is finished there along with some other stories.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 05/06/06 15:39
Chapter: Not Eating Dinner

This was very well written! I loved it! I can't wait to read the next part!

Reviewer: Miss_B
Date: 02/15/06 18:51
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

i cant wait to read the rest of this is really cute!

Author's Response: your best bet is to go to

Reviewer: ilovefanfic
Date: 10/05/05 19:39
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

This is a super story. So sweet! Well done! I can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response: Its at . . . a lot of my stories are on timeturner. if your interested.

Reviewer: JamesandLilyforever
Date: 09/28/05 20:25
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

AWWWWWWWWWW...I love it, its just so sweet.Thats little Harry! Please wright more.

Author's Response: This story is actually completed at the que is just slow here. but i will update soon

Reviewer: harrytwinsisari
Date: 09/10/05 22:35
Chapter: Not Eating Dinner

hi again, i read the story on timeturner and it is fantastic, it's really good!!! i luv it!! so keep writing and i'm gonna check out your other stories now!!

Author's Response: thank you very much... i love responses

Reviewer: magic_quill
Date: 09/06/05 10:59
Chapter: Not Eating Dinner

I really liked it, its a great start. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: good. that makes me happy

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