Reviewer: Firefly1012
Date: 04/19/11 14:09
Chapter: Something Wrong

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! cliffhanger!!

Reviewer: Firefly1012
Date: 04/19/11 4:34
Chapter: Chapter 3: A Flower is a Delicate Thing

wow! cool about all the research you did thats cool about the little blue ball!!

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/02/11 11:49
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

awwww

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/02/11 11:35
Chapter: Not Eating Dinner

love it so far

Reviewer: aubinator
Date: 06/19/10 13:53
Chapter: Something Wrong

AGH!!!! Write more!!! SOON!

Reviewer: BrunetteGinny
Date: 05/20/10 20:35
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

wonderfu

Reviewer: lovespotter17
Date: 02/24/10 19:30
Chapter: Something Wrong

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i really want to know wat happens to james! i didnt even realize this was the last chapter! please don't let james die! that cause lily even more stress in her pregnancy! i really like this fanfic and will be checking for updates!!!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/22/09 22:32
Chapter: Something Wrong

cliffie, you meany! good chappie tho. i'll be waiting for the next!
oh and to the earlier chapters, i also like how the marauder's bond.... and de je vou (is that how u spell it? with that accent thing?) w/ marge. haha....

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/22/09 22:19
Chapter: The Brothers Black

uh, ouc. do you think tho, if reg hadnt been there that they couldn't have beeten the muggles?

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/22/09 22:04
Chapter: Stuck in Surrey

at the very beginning, you dsaid two pregnant women in a house was one tooo many. this is not strictly true. And a few chapters back you had alsice an lily be in a house together and it was good, wasn't it? But it does have a ring to it, and of course w/ lily and petunia it's completly true.
And a nit-picky thing. wizards can't conjure food.
poor lily. i wonder what james is up to.... well, i'll read and find out!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/22/09 21:53
Chapter: London Calling

haha, funny chappie, although ... well james being responceable is also funny, although it makes sence; he IS married... and the mission... lily wont like this..... oh boy..... *scared*

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/22/09 21:41
Chapter: Chapter 3: A Flower is a Delicate Thing

hehe. the eye thing is kinda like moody's :P i noticed that.
and good job on the research, haha
and ouch. this is a great story, i can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/22/09 21:33
Chapter: Suspicions Revealed

uh, i love how james and lily are together. it's so... perfect (:

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/22/09 19:41
Chapter: Not Eating Dinner

oyoyoyoy great first chappie. My friend told me to read this fic, so I hope it lives up to my expectations! :P

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 08/08/09 14:47
Chapter: Something Wrong

i read this fic yesterday. it is awesome. i like the way james & lily are both feeling guilty and all. i hope you update soon. and please make each chapter longer. good luck!

Reviewer: bk64
Date: 08/06/09 23:25
Chapter: Something Wrong

Noo!!! that was too good!! how soon can you update???!!!!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 08/06/09 12:42
Chapter: Something Wrong

:) gr8 chapter update soon

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 08/06/09 11:40
Chapter: Something Wrong

Oh my god, so intense! This means you have to update REALLY quickly...REALLY REALLY quickly!!!

~Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: I'll do my best.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 08/06/09 11:18
Chapter: Something Wrong

Wow, you can't leave it off here! That's just not nice. I want to see whats wrong with James even though I knid of already know. I'm glad that Lily left. She shouldn't be there. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: manchester90
Date: 07/28/09 8:07
Chapter: The Brothers Black

your right its one of my favorites so far. i really liked how you had a 'flashed before his eyes' kinda thing. i hope the next chapter they get to see eachother again! im really enjoying this story =)

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