ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! cliffhanger!!
wow! cool about all the research you did thats cool about the little blue ball!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i really want to know wat happens to james! i didnt even realize this was the last chapter! please don't let james die! that cause lily even more stress in her pregnancy! i really like this fanfic and will be checking for updates!!!
cliffie, you meany! good chappie tho. i'll be waiting for the next!
oh and to the earlier chapters, i also like how the marauder's bond.... and de je vou (is that how u spell it? with that accent thing?) w/ marge. haha....
uh, ouc. do you think tho, if reg hadnt been there that they couldn't have beeten the muggles?
at the very beginning, you dsaid two pregnant women in a house was one tooo many. this is not strictly true. And a few chapters back you had alsice an lily be in a house together and it was good, wasn't it? But it does have a ring to it, and of course w/ lily and petunia it's completly true.
And a nit-picky thing. wizards can't conjure food.
poor lily. i wonder what james is up to.... well, i'll read and find out!
haha, funny chappie, although ... well james being responceable is also funny, although it makes sence; he IS married... and the mission... lily wont like this..... oh boy..... *scared*
hehe. the eye thing is kinda like moody's :P i noticed that.
and good job on the research, haha
and ouch. this is a great story, i can't wait to see what happens next!
uh, i love how james and lily are together. it's so... perfect (:
oyoyoyoy great first chappie. My friend told me to read this fic, so I hope it lives up to my expectations! :P
i read this fic yesterday. it is awesome. i like the way james & lily are both feeling guilty and all. i hope you update soon. and please make each chapter longer. good luck!
Noo!!! that was too good!! how soon can you update???!!!!
:) gr8 chapter update soon
Author's Response: Thanks!
Oh my god, so intense! This means you have to update REALLY quickly...REALLY REALLY quickly!!!
~Passion For Prongs
Author's Response: I'll do my best.
Wow, you can't leave it off here! That's just not nice. I want to see whats wrong with James even though I knid of already know. I'm glad that Lily left. She shouldn't be there. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
your right its one of my favorites so far. i really liked how you had a 'flashed before his eyes' kinda thing. i hope the next chapter they get to see eachother again! im really enjoying this story =)
