Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 01/31/08 9:41
Chapter: Just One More Fight

awww! that was good!

Reviewer: werewolf1234
Date: 06/08/07 18:22
Chapter: Just One More Fight

interesting

Reviewer: girl_in_love
Date: 02/28/07 1:31
Chapter: Just One More Fight

nice! you got the emotions well but the end... well it wasn't satisfying enough. would it be mean if i said lily and james should argue more? anyway, keep it up!

Reviewer: girl_in_love
Date: 02/28/07 1:31
Chapter: Just One More Fight

nice! you got the emotions well but the end... well it wasn't satisfying enough. would it be mean if i said lily and james should argue more? anyway, keep it up!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 07/05/06 17:41
Chapter: Just One More Fight

Good- but what happens with Sirius? Did he have a James/Lily plan?

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 05/18/06 13:55
Chapter: Just One More Fight

Hey, that was good! Really, nice.

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 12/29/05 14:37
Chapter: Just One More Fight

I agree with these people! CONTINUE! You could so do it!

Reviewer: Ginny_Longbottom
Date: 12/29/05 14:12
Chapter: Just One More Fight

I think that your idea is very strong...strong enough to build on! I think you enjoyed writing this and you could go any direction you wanted to with this story. I think you should write on!! You'd do a fantastic job!

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 12/13/05 4:56
Chapter: Just One More Fight

Oh cute as this story is sooo cute and cool! definitely dont leave it as a oneshot, I think you could really build on this, you could explain how Lily and Stacey becoe friends again, even better, you could turn that into a prologue and continue with next chapter being chapter 1 and starting before Lily and her friend got into a fight, do you know what i mean? definitely a ten!! :)

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 11/24/05 1:51
Chapter: Just One More Fight

Hey great story! I think you should definetely keep going with it.

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 11/11/05 17:35
Chapter: Just One More Fight

That is SUCH a great idea...where did you come up with it?

Author's Response: I just sat down one day and I felt like writing, after that the idea just kind of popped into my head and there was the ending of it. Now I have a question for you. Do you think I should leave it as it is or keep going with it?

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 11/11/05 17:33
Chapter: Just One More Fight

I really really really love this story! Awesome job! 10/10. Excellent!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was starting to think no one liked it! lol

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