Reviewer: thestral brains
Date: 10/12/05 11:05
Chapter: Bend and Break

LOVE it!Awsome!Fantebulistic!I really like this fic and with only DEs Harrys love is disturbed much less.PLEEEEASE update. :-)

Reviewer: Floatie
Date: 10/06/05 10:51
Chapter: Bend and Break

that was a good idew since daniel raddcliffe is a national hearthrob too ginny should hex all the fans though that would br reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaalllllllllllyyyyyyyy funny!

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 10/05/05 21:06
Chapter: Bend and Break

Hey I liked the chapter. I thought it was funny and entertaining! Update soon.

Reviewer: Newlib92
Date: 09/29/05 18:22
Chapter: Somewhere Only We Know

Hey, I really like your beginning. Are the chapters named after Keane songs? Just wondering. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Keane songs and eventually Hot Hot Heat songs.

Author's Response: Keane songs and eventually Hot Hot Heat songs.

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 09/28/05 20:29
Chapter: This Is The Last Time

where did u go? ur story is great so PLEASE update soon!

Reviewer: Hilary
Date: 09/07/05 23:43
Chapter: This Is The Last Time

YA first reviewer(does little jig)!!!!!!!!! i love your story!!!!!! soooooo cute!!!!!! update soon

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 09/05/05 6:10
Chapter: Somewhere Only We Know

You've got a nice start going on with your story. Ah... the Weasley temper, always good for dramatic flare and comic relief.

Reviewer: Reading Fool
Date: 09/02/05 17:28
Chapter: Somewhere Only We Know

Hey I really like what you have so far. I think that it is great and really funny. Can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: peskypetunia
Date: 09/02/05 12:20
Chapter: Somewhere Only We Know

Excellent start! Definately get a beta, they are the best people in the world. To get one got to forums from the homepage before you sign on then scroll down to 'Want to be a beta' that forum is designed to let experienced or at least qualified people advertise to help others with their stories. You have got an excellent beginning! I really think you can expand upon it and make it fuller so take your time and enjoy it! Great job

Reviewer: Gin Ovia
Date: 08/27/05 4:35
Chapter: Somewhere Only We Know

That was a pretty good start. I don't want to sound mean but I suggest getting a beta. You have a lot of mior errors throughout. Other than that, I really was intrigued by your story. With a bit more attention to detail, and a good edit, you could carry on with a great story! Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks. I guess I could use a beta. Care to take up the position? (I have to be honest, I'm not entirely sure what a beta is...)

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 08/19/05 23:05
Chapter: Somewhere Only We Know

Cute story!!! I agree, Hot Hot Heat is one of my fav bands also! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: kimmygrint
Date: 08/19/05 15:56
Chapter: Somewhere Only We Know

This was really good. Hot Hot Heat is my favorite band! I was so excited to see them in your story! Good Job!

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