This is really good, I wish there was more to it
I'm really really enjoying this fic, but I'm a bit confused. Why is everyone acting so weird? The teachers, even Snape are being biased towards Gryffindore, Hermione has given up obsessive behaviours like doing homework three weeks in advance and reading Hogwarts a History and Harry seemed upset that he beat the Slytherins at quidditch twice in a row. Also, at Grimauld place and Diagon Ally Ginny seemed as though she was only pretending to have her memory back, as though she wanted Harry to think his plan had worked while really she was just cleverly picking up on clues from what he told her. Sorry if I've got this completely upside down and back to front, but it's just all so weird. Can't wait for more so please please please update soon.
OoOOoo!! #7 could be that harry has blue boxer shorts with little snitches on them. lol
im sad that ginny and harry had sex before marriage... :( but at least ginny got her memory back! and it was a pretty funny chapter with fred and george and all.
hopefully she'll be ok!! but i need more...emotion. ya'no?
thats really sad that neville died! and i think hermione's older than both harry and ron, so she's not underage if they arent. and those teenage girls talking about harry were so funny!
OoOOoOoo! is this story going to go into hogwarts too? i hope so! and i wonder who the DADA teacher is? and, again, this chapter was a bit fast. it would help if it moved slower and was more descriptive.
lol i like this story, but its moving really fast. so, its kinda hard to follow. but that secret room is so cool!
It was really sad to hear about what happened to Ginny. I'm really glad se got her memory back. Keep up the good work!!
pretty good. Madam Rosmerta, that whole scene is good. Funny. I also liked the scene of Hermione tryingand failing to lie. Okay, Ideas for #7... Harry Potter lives in the house of Sirius Black with his girlfriend Ginny Weasley, Sirius Black is Harry's godfather, the likes of that.
Hmmm... I've been a silent reader for a while... enjoying this story very much, hope you will be updating soon...
"What was that all about?" Ginny hissed.
"Well, I couldn't think of anything else," Hermione said lamely. "You know I can't lie on the spot."
"You're not embarrassed, are you? Because it isn't true."
"I didn't think it was," she said defensively.
"Then how come you got all hot and bothered?"
"Can we just forget about it? Please?"
"Alright, alright. But, #7 is true." Hermione turned scarlet.
What was that all about, it makes no sense whatsoever
'"Ron said gruffly, changing the subject. Knowing that his girlfriend was attracted to his best friend was not helping his holiday spirit."' is that #7?????
To clarify, is it Ginny telling Hermione that #7 is true? If it is, then it could possibly be something like "Harry Potter slept with Ginny Weasley." While it seems like a rumor, Ginny telling Hermione that it is true would affect Hermione in the way described. Also, that statement would be technically true, but not in the way that it would seem at first (I believe that this was brought up earlier in the story).
very very cute!! i really liked this one and really hope you do post again soon!! you are an amazing writer and i really wish you would keep it up!
really liked it.. may be my favorite chapter yet! great job cant wait for more!!
aww she doesnt remember him!! damn malfoy...but otherwise it was a great chapter... keep it up!
really liked it!! great job with this long and very satisfying chapter! and i cant even begin to pick my favorite chapter so dont criticize yourself
really liked it!! i love that the chapters are so long! great job writing
really liked it!! very cute and exactly how any family would react... avtually ron went a little overboard but its nice to see that he cares... great job writing this!