Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 02/12/08 21:21
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

Why is it all underlined?!? Oh well, it was still an awesome fic!!!!! Keep it all up! 10/10

Author's Response: More than one of you has said it's underlined, but whenever I read it everything is fine, so I'm sorry, but I can't fix a problem that I can't even see. *sweatdrop* Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed it! *hugs 10*

Reviewer: tendrilofthought
Date: 01/11/08 15:31
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

I am madly in love with your incredible writing skills, and I am nearly crippled with humility whenever I read one of your stories. Just a few comments with this particular one- 1) I love the use of a Wicked song, 2) it's a bit hard to read when everything is underlined, 3) towards the bottom, you used "Damb" instead of "Damn," and 4) this is such a creative backstory for Voldemort!

Author's Response: Crippled with humility? Wow..*blushes* 1) Thanks so much! I think they suit Tom. 2) I can't change it. I'm so sorry!! I'd alter it if i could. 3) Really? Weird...Thanks for telling me. *fixes it* 4) Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: Shadow_girl08
Date: 07/23/07 17:37
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

I love both of the songs! Defying Gravity is probably my favorite (but I love all the songs)

Author's Response: I love 'em too; you've got good taste!

Reviewer: KEENAN34
Date: 07/15/06 1:29
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

Your so amazing you can write so many different kinds of writing...Like really you can do that but not only that its all good writing! You really are very amazing and I hope you keep writing maybe someday when you are older youll become a perfosonal author I could really see that.

Author's Response: You complimenting so much on several of my works is going to make me faint with happiness!

Reviewer: Sylvia Winston
Date: 07/13/06 8:56
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

I liked it. It was good for your first story. Better than mine anyway. I love Wicked!! I read your fic and had to put on No Good Deed. I love this song. And Defying Gravity. 9/10

Author's Response: Thanx bunches! That means a lot to me!

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 06/19/06 17:28
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

Hmm.... you've written better. but it's good for a first time. But you may need to work on sentence structure and choice of words just a tad more. But all in all, it's a 6/10

Author's Response: Oh...I thought it was good...

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 05/10/06 22:06
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

Love Wicked!! It is coming to my city soon too!! Great story!! ^________^

Author's Response: I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! Thanks sooo much!!!

Reviewer: samiseriouslyam
Date: 04/28/06 15:17
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

Wow. That's it. I can't believe you could do such a good job with a serious story. I'd think your strong point would be humor... ah well. I liked it. Hey! This is your first story! :) Extra good then. Oh, my usual word for your writings: Brilliant!
(If you don't know, I'm basically stalking your stories, because I'm in love with Legacy of the Mauraders. 'Member me?)

Author's Response: Light-hearted fics with fun, not fluffy, romance are easier for me to write, but I felt that I should write SOMETHING about Tom Riddle, and Wicked inspired me to do it. I am quite pleased with the way this turned out, and I'm glad that you are too! "I'm basically stalking your stories" LOL, I noticed, and I could not be happier about it! Thanks!

Reviewer: LunaraBlack
Date: 04/25/06 17:40
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

The part about elves heads was great.
It was so sad though, that Aurora dies... but it was still really good.

Author's Response: No one ever mentioned the elven heads before, so thanks! I thought that someone Tom loved had to be 'weak' and die for him to scorn death and love so much. Consequently, she had to perish. Since I only wrote this one-shot with her in it my heart did not break to kill her. That is not the case with some f my other fics, but we won't go there...

Reviewer: mrscrystalblack248
Date: 04/04/06 19:49
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

omg, i LOVE wicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: Obviously, I do too! Thanks!

Reviewer: Hero London
Date: 03/11/06 10:10
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

Compelling, tragic, beautiful, WICKED! Very well done, I enjoyed it! You incorporated my favorite broadway musical into what I would consider a remarkable telling of Tom Marvolo Riddle's downfall. Excellent, truly excellent!

Author's Response: Oh, Merlin...I don't know what to say...Um, *struggles to think of an adequate response to such a wonderful review* thank you very, very much for such an uplifting review!!!

Reviewer: thesmilethatsaddens
Date: 12/18/05 0:44
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

i absolutely love Wicked! i'm so glad someone had the sense to make a story based on some of the songs!

Author's Response: Thanks! I agree, Wicked is awesome! At some point I might write a few other fan fictions based on different Wicked songs.

Reviewer: darling
Date: 10/05/05 15:56
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

!)!!! Wicked is swankified and you incoorperated the songs so perfectly in with your story!

Author's Response: Aw, thankee oodles & oodles!

Reviewer: wolfsbane_potion
Date: 10/03/05 18:57
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

Brilliant how you made a Black and Malfoy close with Tom!

Author's Response: Thank ya! I thought that was a nice touch!

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 09/04/05 20:05
Chapter: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

Wow, I really liked it. I love Wicked music, and I thought you did a great job incorporating that into your story. It was a good interpretation of that time period as well, I thought. Great, now I have "Defying Gravity" in my head. Thanks a lot. :)

Author's Response: You're welcome! I thank you lots for reviewing!

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