GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD. nicely done! as fred and george sya in the 4th film.. "YEAHH!!!! WELL DONE DRAGON!!!!!"
this was really cute!
it was weird being totallyin the presective of Harry but i liked it once i got used to it!
very beautiful!
Cute story, but I think the first person narraration is slightly akward. Nicely written.
This was a lovely little story. You did a fantastic job with it.
I really liked this fic it was sweet and a lil fluff too!!!
4eva urs,
~*~F.F.G~*~
very warm... I really cant think of another good describing word, though the one I used was probably stupid.
10!
okay okay... let me get this straight... dumbledore dies.. thats from HBP.. if so, how come its seems that this is the very FIRST time that ginny and harry revealed their feelings for on another?, if they already did so in HBP? i like the storythough.. its just contradicts the book i read.. im just confued... i like it tho.. keep up the good work
I really liked your story! It was really cute! You are a natural writer! Please, Please write more I want to know what happens! One suggestion; Your story has good writing style, but I'd have the poing ov view from one place instead of 3. At one point of the story Harry seems to be narrorating. In another part of the story you seem to be looking at the world thru Harry's eyes, and you also have a point of view where it seems that someone is watchin over and observing the story (my favorite pov). Please choose one it makes it so much easier to read.
Author's Response: I'll try my best to make the story more enjoyable. I know how easy it is to get lost in a story and how hard it is to differentiate which point of view it's in. so i'll work on it. Thanks for suggesting that to me. Not all reviewers do that and i'm glad you did. Thanks for reviewing!
Awww, that was so cute and filled with sugary sweetness.
Author's Response: LoL..thank you
Aw, that was cute. Nice job. =)
Author's Response: thanks :D
Aw, that was cute. Nice job. =)
that was a really sweet story! do u think u'll write anymore like it?
Author's Response: thanks! hmmm...i think i will when i have time but not right now since classes have started and i have heaps of homework LoL.
that was a really sweet story! do u think u'll write anymore like it?
good job!! that was a good story for after hbp. :0)
Author's Response: *smiles* thanks