Cool really, most parts I almost cried but its cool all the same, no gramatical errors, do you have a beta or something cause, if you don't than you have perfect english.
Hmm...nicely drawn, and I like the flashback to the Basilisk's first strike. Many people do not know that both Minerva and Hagrid are contemporaries of Tom Riddle.
My one beef is that in SS/PS, Minerva reacts to Dumbledore's statement that Harry will have to live with the Dursleys with shock and disbelief: "Dumbledore, you can't!" You take the tack that she is present at the Dursleys precisely because she knows he is going to do this. (Though I admit that this is a better explanation of why she is there than the explanation of SS/PS which is, precisely, none.)
I love this. I love almost every story that centers around Minerva, but this is so well-written... wonderful. I can totally picture Minerva McGonagall the cat watching Petunia and Dudders. Good job!
Pretty good, but you can do better!!! Well done, I liked it.
Author's Response: Haha, yes, I probably could. ;-) Thanks very much.
Very clever. It is disgusting, the way Petunia spoiled Dudley and babytalked him. I like this fic.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. =)