You might think about backing up the part about Harry talking to Moody about the horcruxes. Move it back to the actual wedding and show them doing it rather than telling us, later, that they talked about it.
Is the teacup golden or porcelain?
After sifting through thousands of stories, is it possible I've found one worth reading? Judging from this first chapter, I'd say, yes.
I loved it! WRITE MORE PRETTY PLEASE!
Wow, Great story will continue reading it on the other site. Fantastic fan fic!
Unbelievable chapter! Amazing how Draco defended Susan and everything. Great job!
I really liked how Draco finally swallowed his pride and apologized to both Hermione and Susan. Great chapter!
Awesome idea for a bet! Thats great that Ron finally has his voice back. Loved this chapter!
Wow, things are certainly getting rough! Another amazing chapter, extremely enjoyable to read!
* Thinks to self " Will Harry ever get his act together" * Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read a sequel
I'm glad the reveiws are making you happy and also that you are doing a sequel to it. Also thrilled that Bellatrix is finally dead! Loved this chapter
Wow, way to bring in the new year, Lots of kisses and then a battle! Love the combination :)
Fantastic chapter! Exciting battle scene, Fluer doing what she does best. Loved it!
It really is great having Fred back at the school even though he is a caretaker. Susan is one character that I wish JKR had spent more time developing and including. Very well done chapter
* Laughs * Sorry can't really picture Fred working right along side of Filch! Poor Luna. Great chapter
How awful!! Poppy was a funny, and sweet character in this fic. Great job writing an dramatic chapter
Have to tell you I'm horrible at riddles! Fabulous chapter!
Another great chapter. loved it
Nice chapter. Glad to see Harry and Ginny back on speaking terms at least!
Not a good thing to say to Ginny thats for sure. Hope the founders begin to talk to them! Well written chapter
I love the humor in this story! I kinda wish JKR had put more of it in her series. Great chapter