Reviewer: Penpal
Date: 10/30/07 13:30
Chapter: Moving Forward

You might think about backing up the part about Harry talking to Moody about the horcruxes. Move it back to the actual wedding and show them doing it rather than telling us, later, that they talked about it.

Is the teacup golden or porcelain?

Nice ending.

Reviewer: Penpal
Date: 10/30/07 0:52
Chapter: Back Where we Started

After sifting through thousands of stories, is it possible I've found one worth reading? Judging from this first chapter, I'd say, yes.

Thank God!

Reviewer: smilesand
Date: 10/28/07 18:19
Chapter: The Phoenixes Return

I loved it! WRITE MORE PRETTY PLEASE!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 17:41
Chapter: The Phoenixes Return

Wow, Great story will continue reading it on the other site. Fantastic fan fic!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 17:36
Chapter: The Last Riddle

Unbelievable chapter! Amazing how Draco defended Susan and everything. Great job!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 17:20
Chapter: Say It Ain't So

I really liked how Draco finally swallowed his pride and apologized to both Hermione and Susan. Great chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 14:16
Chapter: What She Missed Most

Awesome idea for a bet! Thats great that Ron finally has his voice back. Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 14:09
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

Wow, things are certainly getting rough! Another amazing chapter, extremely enjoyable to read!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 14:01
Chapter: Push

* Thinks to self " Will Harry ever get his act together" * Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read a sequel

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 13:54
Chapter: Meeting One's Potential

I'm glad the reveiws are making you happy and also that you are doing a sequel to it. Also thrilled that Bellatrix is finally dead! Loved this chapter

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 13:41
Chapter: Stroke

Wow, way to bring in the new year, Lots of kisses and then a battle! Love the combination :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 13:36
Chapter: Unimaginable

Fantastic chapter! Exciting battle scene, Fluer doing what she does best. Loved it!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 13:05
Chapter: Holding Your Breath

It really is great having Fred back at the school even though he is a caretaker. Susan is one character that I wish JKR had spent more time developing and including. Very well done chapter

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 12:55
Chapter: Roni

* Laughs * Sorry can't really picture Fred working right along side of Filch! Poor Luna. Great chapter

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 12:44
Chapter: Time Flies

How awful!! Poppy was a funny, and sweet character in this fic. Great job writing an dramatic chapter

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 12:37
Chapter: Fell

Have to tell you I'm horrible at riddles! Fabulous chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 12:18
Chapter: The Second

Another great chapter. loved it

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 12:06
Chapter: Round and round and round we go; where we stop nobody knows

Nice chapter. Glad to see Harry and Ginny back on speaking terms at least!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 11:54
Chapter: And so it goes...

Not a good thing to say to Ginny thats for sure. Hope the founders begin to talk to them! Well written chapter

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 11:48
Chapter: Not everyone gets what they want on their birthday

I love the humor in this story! I kinda wish JKR had put more of it in her series. Great chapter

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