Reviewer: mlhc72
Date: 12/29/06 18:59
Chapter: Say It Ain't So

I love it--I think it's great that the founders are playing such an important role in your story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it and I hope the next chap gets validated quickly.

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 12/29/06 13:31
Chapter: Say It Ain't So

yayayayayayayayay this is SUCH a good chapter

Author's Response: lol thanks!

Reviewer: Alexi Drake
Date: 12/27/06 20:10
Chapter: Back Where we Started

Pleas, pleae keep writing this wonderful story. So far its one of my favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/11/06 21:40
Chapter: What She Missed Most

Heehee...Very funny!
HA! Remus and Weasley, Co. in girly-wear!!!!!!
I love your mind! *laughs uncontrollably*

Author's Response: thank you much I love your mind too.

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 11/30/06 15:18
Chapter: The Happiest Man in the World

YAY GINNY!! Ooh, Percy SOOOO deserved it. And why did he come with Cho? I LOVE THIS FANFIC!
-Susan

Author's Response: lol please keep reviewing!

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 11/29/06 13:43
Chapter: What She Missed Most

gosh, that was perfect. half fluff, half sad, a pinch of hystericality *word?*, and 100% brilliantness. oh, I do hope we get to see Gred and Forge's matching miniskirts... I DON'T WANT IT TO END! WAH! 10/10.

Author's Response: I love that you make up words...I do to my favorite is fantastical, as for the twins in matching minis...only time will tell.

Reviewer: UltimateAuror
Date: 11/28/06 11:58
Chapter: What She Missed Most

Uproarous applause, throwing flowers at the stage, and blowing kises to you all around! This was such a crucial chapter to the twisty turny plot lines you have created here. A few key things I want to touch on for this chapter in particular.

1. Ron: He has become such a dynamic character. While JK has not let him step up to the plate, I honestly prefer your Ron over hers. You show that he is so much more than just Harry's shadow or sidekick, and he has far surpased the emotional range of a teaspoon. Him flatly saying to Hermione "I have always loved you" gave me the chills. Such a simple line brought forth so many emotions. I am relieved and pleased that he is such a man in your world. When times are tough, he is tougher. I love you for that.

2. Harry: Poor teen-angst ridden Harry. I am sure he is relived and aware that Ron is the best person suited for consoling Hermione (which Ron being capable of being her hero is a surprise all on it's own!). You know deep down he desperately wants to be there for her, but his lack of experience and own insecurities do not make him a likely candidate to take care of Hermione. Which in one way is sad, but on the other end, it is totally realistic and expected.

3. The group: I had not really pictured the Patil's, Neville, Lavander, Seamus, or anyone else to be a good go-to character. I was pleasantly surprised to see them take such a pivital role in Hermione's time of need. The girls, who are normally unnecessary fuel to the fire, were sweet and tender when it mattered most. Neville made sure he was there on the off beat chance that he would have to be called on. I wish that I had more friends like that.

4. Your language: Most people, when writing, resort to using words like "I truly love you with all the love in my heart and soul" or "He kissed her with all the passion he had in his heart." People tend to go over the top just to get a point across. To me, it is a turn off, and quite cliche. But not you. I have thought about this from the first chapter, and just now realized that I have yet to comment on this. Your sentance "He kissed her passionately. She had never felt a kiss with so much emotion behind it." Had all of the power, and no filler "fluff." You got your point, and continue to get your point across perfectly. Very refreshing to read a natural story rollout, rather than words too big with improper usage, or typically cliche lines. It clearly shows a lack of imagination, which you, my love, have in spades.

Your faithful reader,

Courtney

Author's Response: My god woman, I cry everytime I read your reviews. I swear. 1. *ducks to keep JKR from slapping her* Thank you so much. Ron is by far one of my favorites to write about. 2. Yes, I can't wait to see him move past this as well. 3. I think that when all else fails, even Lavender and Parvati recognize that they must rely on each other. Granted they're right little twits, but they are human. 4. I just try to make it sound natural and unforced. I guess in this chapter, what mattered most to me, was making sure that when Ron finally got his voice back he wouldn't return to the foolish bumbling git that mumbled his words. By now he knows he loves her, he just has to say the words. Thank you my darling and I hope to get you the next chapter quickly!

Reviewer: sskywalker00
Date: 11/28/06 4:51
Chapter: What She Missed Most

updated soon love the story

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 11/27/06 16:20
Chapter: What She Missed Most

:-)

Author's Response: = )

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 11/27/06 15:40
Chapter: Back Where we Started

Oh, I just LOVE a good first chapter. Keep on writing!
-Susan

Author's Response: Thank you Susan, please keep reviewing!

Reviewer: magicalmuggle911
Date: 11/27/06 15:07
Chapter: What She Missed Most

lol i gotta give it to you even when it's a sad chapter you put humour in it keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: HM909
Date: 11/25/06 5:32
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

Love it love it love it love it LOVE IT!!!!
Nice twist with Colin!

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 11/24/06 10:25
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

ok, I've made up an analogy: this story is like baseball. everything goes smoothly for a while, and then the pitcher (aka peskypetunia) throws us a curveball. and a couple of double-plays. the one good thing about baseball is that there's always a winner, and this story is definitely one of those! YAY! 10/10, as always.

Author's Response: lol, go Cubbies!

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 11/21/06 20:56
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

Wow! You really know how to make the reader feel the characters' emotions. As for the loyalty riddle, I think I know what they have to do. They need to be ther for their friends and each other in the darkest of times. But most importantly, they need to be loyal to themselves and their own potentials.

Author's Response: You are quite right my friend! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 11/21/06 16:36
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

Poor Hermione. Wow, Colin and Ginny are really something else... Yay, they've made up and might be getting back together! Ron has the surgery...
Please update!

Author's Response: I hope it will be up shortly! Please keep reviewing!

Reviewer: UltimateAuror
Date: 11/21/06 10:29
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

I love you. No, really, I love you. I still have goosebumps from this chapter. I marvle at you skillful ability to put such grace and elegance into words. Harry finally answers a riddle, and the words out of his mouth are beautiful. I think the riddles are my favorite stroke on your canvas.

Thank you for Collin. While this was unexpected, and you know full well now how I felt about it, I embrace this with open arms. I am finally at ease (I know, you were losing sleep over my feelings) with the way things are working out. Slowly, both Ginny and Harry are growing up, and realizing that is important and worthwile. You have done such phenomial things with these characters, you may have damaged me for all other authors.

My poor Hermione. Her reaction ro Draco was dead on in my book. Unfortunately, I was waiting for something like this to happen. Ron's responce to her was beautifully done. Her fighting him out of grief, and him refusing to let her go, knowing she needed him whether she liked it or not. You make their emotions pour out so eloquently.

I think my only confusion, which is certainly my own - and I will have to go back and read past chapters, is Draco's involvement with the dark side and Kreatcher. I was a little hazy with what his role is, or what side he is actually playing at. I will send you feedback when I am clear on it.

Again, I am thrilled with your writing, and your style. Please continue to be inspired by your wonderful muse, and allow me to be involved in your world. As you bring this to a close, I hope you continue to venture with other stories. You have such a wonderful gift. Thank you.

- Courtney

Author's Response: *People please take note, this is an example of the perfect review. I can't tell you how much your words have touched me. This story has been such a challenge because I want my story to be faithful to the amazing characters JKR has given us with, but at the same time, I want it to be my own. You can't know how difficult it was to write the Colin-is-gay plotline. So many people hated the way I had portrayed them, that I wasn't sure if this chapter would be worth it all in the end. In this review, you have single-handedly parlayed my fears and made me realize that it was all worth it. I only hope you will continue to enjoy what I spin. Please keep responding they make my day, or in this case, my world. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I beg you...Contact me at anytime if I can ever repay the kindness you have shown me or even if you would just like another friend. In all things Harry Potter, Kate aka peskypetunia

Reviewer: magical_hannah
Date: 11/21/06 1:45
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

ok its 1:45 am and i have school to wake up for school in 3 hours. the only fanfic i have been reading since midnight has been this one- its great. hope you update soon, thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! After a much needed nap and your classes of course I hope you can tell me what you think about the fic. I love it and I love my reviewers!

Reviewer: wonwon_hermy
Date: 11/20/06 18:03
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

Awww Good Chappie i cant wait to read more update soon

Author's Response: I hope to have the next chap up soon. I hope to have it posted sometime this weekend!

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 11/20/06 17:57
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

it was definitely worth the wait

Author's Response: sorry about that! The mods pointed out a few canon errors and it took a while to get up after the initial reject! Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: sskywalker00
Date: 11/20/06 13:56
Chapter: Twenty-Four Very Long Hours

great chapter please update soon

Author's Response: thank you!

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