I love how well you incorporated the reaction of everyone! It was so realistic and perfect! And the bits of the wedding are beautifully reminiscent. I love them. Excellent job, as usual.. and yay for mod-ness! Congratulations, again.
Wow! Short as it was, I loved this chapter. Hope the next one comes out soon (with the new mods and everything, it should be quicker).
Author's Response: It is getting quicker ^^ Glad you liked it. -MM
Whoot first review! Well I loved it! Didn't take very long to get out of queue, eh? lol well can't wait for the next chapter....;)
Author's Response: Haha, you're right. The new mods are working in a frenzy now, especially with J/L stories. Glad you liked it. -MM
a good story - i like the way you have bits about the wedding as well as the main story. keep updating!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ A lot of people have enjoyed those little snippets so I'll continue incorporating them in the story. I find they're wonderful in introducing the chapter. -MM
Wow, what an interesting perspective on James and Lily's early interaction. I also like the way you are presenting the story, some parts in present time and some flashbacks. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks there ^^ Hope you like the next chapter -MM
I loved this chapter. I can't wait for the next. I also love the clips of her wedding. So wonderful.......
Author's Response: I'm glad you like those clips. It helps make a boring chapter, such as this one, more interesting. It also allows the story to be a bit more condensed. -MM
A bit slow-moving, but overall I think it's great! please keep updating!!
Author's Response: Yes, most of the things in this chapter have already been told by Rowling. I tried to change it a bit with a letter that Muggle-borns might have gotten. Hope that helped a bit -MM
yay, that woz gr8!!!!! i loved it!! whens the next chapter coming?
Author's Response: Well, the next chapter is in queue though I thought it was already posted. Hopefully, it won't take too long. Chapter four is ready. -MM
This is a great story so far. I hope the mods post chapter three soon. Are those two in your banner supposed to be Lily and James?
Author's Response: Yeah hope chapter three posts soon. Yes, the two are supposed to be Lily and James but I'm thinking of changing it a bit... The picture of James was what I wanted but I don't really like Lily. You'll see a change with that real soon. Thanks for your review ^^ -MM
Excellent job on the story so far! I can't wait for more! I liked that Selena told Lily she didn't know what she was saying....has Selena already gotten her letter? Food for thought... can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks :) Right. There should be a confidentiality among the witches and wizards. All witches should get their letters at the same time. You'll see later on ;) -MM
This is Super McAwesome! Anyway, I like how Sirius wants to see Lily again but James doesn't... an interesting and refreshing twist. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Chapter Three should've been posted by now =/ -MM
This story is really good, keep writeing! <3 Lilybella
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'll keep writing :) -MM
I like this story!! it's going to be good, i can tell! please keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I hope it'll be as good if not better as I continue this story. Chapter 3 has been submitted -MM
Ha, Lils reaction wasn't over the top! infact it fits perfectly with her description, redhead with a temper and quite subborn. although i'm sure she has her good moments. so yhea. great reaction on lils part, how many more times will james get slapped i wonder?
Author's Response: Glad you liked her reaction. Glad you notice how quicktempered she is. I haven't thought about how many times, but there are a great number of fun things to come ;) -MM
I love your story and the flashback at the begging was a great idea. Don't stop writing this story or i'll leave like a billion reviews begging you to finish it! keep writing i'll be waiting for more chapters.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the flashbacks :) That is a major part in the story actually. Chapter 3 has been submitted -MM
I love it! PLEASE keep writing! (note to self: will have to check for updates)
Author's Response: LOL thanks for the compliment :) Hope you like the rest -MM
You updated! Yay! *cheers* :) :O :P
Author's Response: Yes I did ^^ Thanks for your enthusiasm -MM
I like it!! Especially how you made it out so that Lily didnt know she was a witch at that time she met James!! Wonderful Work!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it like that :D Hope you like the rest ^^ -MM
I would give this a 12, if I could! I love your whole entire story! You use great transitions! You should become pro! I like your use of vocabulary, humor, and dialogue to increase your story in rating and how well it is! Good job- can't wait to more!
Author's Response: LOL wow a pro? No, that's not what I plan to do :) This helps me with class and writing. Plus I just love J/L. Thanks for your praise. I hope I can prove to you later on that it's all well-deserved :) -MM
I thought that Sirius' eyes were blue, and I know for a fact that James' eyes are hazel. It's really good writing and I do hope that you keep up with it but, you might want to work on your vocabulary and use more descriptive words. Lily's reaction seemed a bit over the top. The Lily in my mind wouldn't have done that. She just met him for pete's sake. She just slapped a stranger!!
Author's Response: Sirius's eyes aren't blue, I looked that one up on mugglenet.com ^^ Vocab is something I usually have trouble with. I just don't know what type of people read my writing so vocab's always a bit iffy for me. You will see Lily change. Here it shows a bit of her naive and immature side. -MM
