Reviewer: heliopath
Date: 07/31/06 7:19
Chapter: Friends?

won't you ever update this?

Reviewer: hogwartsduchess
Date: 07/18/06 14:01
Chapter: Friends?

Beth - I've just read all five chapters in one go. This is very beautifully done. I would say more, but I've spent so much time reading that I don't have any left!

Author's Response: Ah Kasey! Thank you so much! I love the review anyway! :D

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 07/07/06 16:33
Chapter: Friends?

i love the whole butterfly and flower thing, thats really original. speaking of original, lily meeting peter instead of james was a nice twist, too! update asap

Reviewer: HJaneWeasley
Date: 07/03/06 19:57
Chapter: James And Sirius

Me again! I love how you show Sirius's carefree spirit, but I really really REALLY love how you're starting the chapters out with the memories from James and Lily's pov's, then continue the pov through the story. It's really creative!

Author's Response: Thank you! I rather liked introducing it that way. Then, there's a parallel story that goes along with it ;)

Reviewer: HJaneWeasley
Date: 07/03/06 19:54
Chapter: Discovery

Oooh, where to begin? I love that you show Lily and Petunia as friends; there are way too many fanfics that show them as enemies from the start, which I don't believe happened. I'm not crazy about Lily squealing or James being even slightly threatening towards Lily- I think he's a gentleman through and through...well, sort of. Minus the pranks =). I also don't think that Sirius's mum would let him (who's nearly set to be a Slytherin b/c of his bloodline) wander about with James (who it's nearly certain does not come from a similar bloodline), yet I really love that you show Lily's spunk. Great work!

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 06/26/06 14:43
Chapter: Friends?

This Story is really good. I love it. This is a really good chapter after such a LONG wait. I cant wait tell u write another chapter. And if i were to describe Petunia i would say she is a git

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/25/06 15:45
Chapter: Friends?

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! I WILL PUT YOU UNDER THE IMPERIUS CURSE IF YOU REFUSE!!!!!!!!!! lol. i seriously will! lmao.
pleasepleaseplease write more... *puppy eyes & pout* you have to!!!!!!!!
this story is too awesome to not be continued!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/25/06 15:23
Chapter: A Day in Diagon Alley

yes, it was short, but still amazing!!!!!!!!!!! im actually listening to a song right now called "I Like It". and i thought 'how ironic...' lol.

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/25/06 15:04
Chapter: Witch

awww... poor Lily. geez - Petunia's mean! lol.
love it!!!!!!!!!!! fantabulous!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/25/06 14:56
Chapter: James And Sirius

lol. what idiots...
love your story!!!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 06/25/06 14:52
Chapter: Discovery

awesome - i *have* to keep reading!!!! haha! i would have slapped James too! and Sirius (im guessing...)!!! *muttering* stupid little pricks... oh sorry, i do that a lot...

Reviewer: KASK
Date: 06/25/06 12:50
Chapter: Friends?

I just started reading this today. I love it! I love the flashbacks at the wedding, and James and Lily's first meeting. This chapter was great!

Reviewer: iluvprongsie
Date: 06/25/06 1:43
Chapter: Friends?

that was A.W.E.S.O.M.E!!!!!! have to update sooooon!!!

P.S: that was awesome, awesome, awesom, awesome, awesom!!!......did i meantion awesome??

Reviewer: seriouslysirius92
Date: 06/24/06 20:33
Chapter: Friends?

please , i love this story,don't even THINK about discontinuing it.

Reviewer: PuppetPal
Date: 06/24/06 20:32
Chapter: Friends?

This story is off to a really good start, it's really descriptive. Are you going to do all 7 of Lily's years at HOgwarts, cause that would be good. :)

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 06/24/06 20:27
Chapter: Friends?

Yea you finally updated your story, i liked the way you described Peter. I hope that you update soon cuzz i really like your strory!!! And shame own you, u have chappie done and you arent posting them?! naughty girl or boy!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 06/20/06 14:30
Chapter: A Day in Diagon Alley


Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 06/19/06 13:39
Chapter: A Day in Diagon Alley

Errr i hope the next chappie comes out soon and is really long becaue i just read all of the chappie of this story today and i really wanna know what happen so PLEASE UPDATE!!! hmm i wonder is Lena is a witch...

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 06/19/06 13:27
Chapter: James And Sirius

HEHEHEHE Sirius is so funny. I like how at the begging you are wrighting about there wedding day. And i gusse that the other guy was Sirius.

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 06/19/06 13:22
Chapter: Discovery

Wow i really like your story so far. I like how you made so they meet James in Londron, but who was the older kid? At first i thought it might be Siruris but he has grey eyes...hmmm i gusse ill find out!!


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