This story is hilarious. The lines between Snape and Hermione are witty and amusing, while Snape still remains in character. The quotes were also interesting to the story, although I have only heard of the people from Monty Python (which is probably not an accurate portrayal of the people.) Also, Snape's obsession with tea became a running joke and always had me smiling. Great job, although I'm not much of a Snape/Hermione shipper.
thank you for the hilarious story! I enjoyed their sassy conversations. I imagine your HG and SS will be quite happy together! I suggest you write more about your snarky couple.
Wow! I really enjoyed that! Being a fan of SS/HG I've read countless of stories and by now they're beginning to bore me. However, this one was just really funny - I've never read about a Snape who is addicted to tea before! Unlike with many humour fics, I was laughing my socks off! Snape is certainly not romantic but yet strangely appealing. I don't think I would have been able to resist - lol! Your jokes were all very well thought out and suited the characters. I also liked how you had Charlie as the fiancee, instead of chosing the obvious - Ron. You made his character very believable as well, without us ever meeting him, I actually pitied him in the end. The bit that really made me smile though, was how you were quoting famous Muggle's like Oscar Wilde, and then in the end included a quote by Dumbledore - certainly the wisest of them all. I don't know if I can find any criticism, which is unusual for me. I really did enjoy it!
I so enjoyed that story! (Well worth the hour I devoted to reading it!) Snape was still Snape, but also strangely appealing. And your portrayal of the grown Hermione struck me as completely believable--an intelligent girl grown into a confident woman. Most of all, I loved the witty repartee. And obviously so did they!
I have never been a Hermione/Snape fan, but I thought your story was fabulous. I loved the unlikely pairings (who would have thought of Cho/Neville?) and the thing with the tea. At one point I laughed so hard that my mom came downstairs to ask if I was okay. Two thumbs up!!!
Very very very very well written. I can't find words to express how much I enjoyed the story! Thank you for the laughs!
This is a fantasically written story! The words traded between Snape and Hermione were hilarious and very witty. Congrats!
Absolutely priceless! You're very right - the true brillience of this piece lies not in the pairing, but the banter - pure sacastic witt to the last 'drop'. I enjoyed every last insult and complaint, and poor Severus finally got his tea! The inuendo was hysterically funny, too - I may never look at tea the same way again...
Absolutely fantastic -- a HG/SS with all the wit, banter and word play I would expect between Hogwarts' most brilliant characters. And they're in-character! A true treat.
im sry i meant yet NOT totally out of character..!
I'm not a snape/hermione shipper either but i found this piece interesting and comical...i really liked it! It was different and yet totally out pf character. 3 cheers! A really entertaining and well written piece!