Reviewer: The Next Dark Lord
Date: 05/08/11 8:05
Chapter: 1

How is Harry (I'm assuming he's the one with Heart) "the one who Flies"? Are you talking about his flying/Seeker skills?

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 08/21/09 16:03
Chapter: 1

I really love thos poem. It's great.

Reviewer: love_letters
Date: 04/02/08 19:04
Chapter: 1

wall it mackes me think thats for shere i can tell you wroght it befor the dathely hollowes came out its good rilly good

Reviewer: loony1723
Date: 02/03/08 2:10
Chapter: 1


gr8 writing tho

Reviewer: Countessa
Date: 06/30/07 18:42
Chapter: 1

I like! Well done, and keep writing!

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 04/30/07 14:49
Chapter: 1

It could be a bit better, bit the general idea is good. maybe if you play with the rythm a little it would flow better. Know what I mean?


Reviewer: Renasko
Date: 04/23/07 16:44
Chapter: 1

Not bad

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 03/31/07 20:03
Chapter: 1


Reviewer: crazyabouthermione95
Date: 01/20/07 22:27
Chapter: 1

Very lovely! One of the best poems I've ever read! Great job!

Reviewer: Mandolin101
Date: 01/07/07 19:03
Chapter: 1

Who says Tom doesn't fly? Good writing

Reviewer: werepupsitter
Date: 01/06/07 10:05
Chapter: 1

i really like it. kinda makes you think. i wonder who's gonna die?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: werepupsitter
Date: 01/06/07 10:05
Chapter: 1

i really like it. kinda makes you think. i wonder who's gonna die?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: jjjjohn_jjohn
Date: 12/30/06 7:08
Chapter: 1

Thats actually really really gd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: HP101
Date: 12/13/06 16:33
Chapter: 1

perfect! :)

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 12/11/06 13:25
Chapter: 1

Wow. I have always said enemies have the greatest understanding of each other.

Reviewer: harrythehero
Date: 11/30/06 0:14
Chapter: 1

that's pretty cool

Reviewer: lalin
Date: 11/17/06 17:49
Chapter: 1

is great

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/06/06 0:46
Chapter: 1

Very good - I liked the subtle hinting about the future. Very strong.

Reviewer: Wise Owl
Date: 09/06/06 1:02
Chapter: 1

ehhh...started strong but you lost me at the end with the reminder about the boy who flies.

Reviewer: MidnightzStorm
Date: 08/24/06 0:28
Chapter: 1

very interesting. :)

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