Reviews For One Blue Line
Reviewer: Maraurderinchief
Date: 11/25/06 15:00
Chapter: One Blue Line

The brothers raced out of the kitchen, blood pumping through their veins.

Well I'd certainly hope blood would be pumping through their veins, or the y wouldn't be running, they'd be lying on the floor dead.

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 11/22/06 8:32
Chapter: One Blue Line

Cute, very funny and realistic. Actually would be a great story if it turned out to be Ginny's and she was trying to hide it from her family. The wheels in my head are turning as I write this. Great job!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 11/14/06 13:06
Chapter: One Blue Line

hehehehe. Cute story. I like how you connected everything. Well done!

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 11/12/06 9:16
Chapter: One Blue Line

That was hilerious!
I love Harry and Ginny!
Tha last line is the best!
They do strike me as the kind of couple who has sex all the time, as aposed to Ron and Hermioe who would be the more romantic couple.
You got the charicterization down really well!
I loved it!
Major props!

Reviewer: Silver Whisper
Date: 11/03/06 0:44
Chapter: One Blue Line

Haha..that was funny as. I loved it, well done!! You have captured the characters perfectly in all your stories!!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 10/28/06 1:28
Chapter: One Blue Line

Hilarious! I like the last sentence; Ginny and Harry are so sneaky! Well done, to say the least!
~Moony

Reviewer: sweetaresnickisses
Date: 10/02/06 17:05
Chapter: One Blue Line

lol, that was so funny. i loved the story. it was great. it was funny, pissing on muggle things.... i couldnt stop laughing. mother thought i went psycho for a minute. but it was all good. great story. wonderful really. ♥

Reviewer: sweetaresnickisses
Date: 10/02/06 17:04
Chapter: One Blue Line

lol, that was so funny. i loved the story. it was great. it was funny, pissing on muggle things.... i couldnt stop laughing. mother thought i went psycho for a minute. but it was all good. great story. wonderful really. ♥

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 10/01/06 21:08
Chapter: One Blue Line

lmao I really fell for it. I thought Harry and Ginny were being thick enough to actually try to lie about something. And Harry saying, "I dunno, until it goes away?" was so hilarious especially because I thought Ginny was really having morning sickness... lol I hope you write more...

Reviewer: oakwand
Date: 09/30/06 23:40
Chapter: One Blue Line

wow...that's so......weird.........

Reviewer: Islander
Date: 09/24/06 18:17
Chapter: One Blue Line

Heeheehahahaha! I love this story! Very well written, and even better than "Hormones"! Great job, and absolutely wonderful humor! You are really a very great writer! I knew Ginny couldn't really be pregnant--but so did we all, and that's the whole point. It was great fun finding out what it REALLY was! Whee!!

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 09/16/06 0:58
Chapter: One Blue Line

hahaha

Reviewer: SimplyCharmed
Date: 09/14/06 19:52
Chapter: One Blue Line

That was so funny!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/10/06 17:41
Chapter: One Blue Line

Great story! Love it!

Reviewer: moonyt
Date: 07/18/06 14:54
Chapter: One Blue Line

HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Peevseywashere
Date: 07/16/06 14:40
Chapter: One Blue Line

AHHH i love this story. beautifully written you have such a gift for writihng. specatcular job. I was entertained through the whole story.

Reviewer: witchgeek
Date: 07/07/06 8:07
Chapter: One Blue Line

Haha...Great ending! :)

Reviewer: lilywink
Date: 06/27/06 15:59
Chapter: One Blue Line

Cute!!

Reviewer: lilywink
Date: 06/27/06 15:59
Chapter: One Blue Line

Cute11

Reviewer: h3art0f1nk
Date: 06/27/06 15:45
Chapter: One Blue Line

LOL. That was funny!

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